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Published: 2011-06-14 02:24:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 744; Favourites: 36; Downloads: 28
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.....I feel proud. <3I worked on this over the course of a week or so, but in total it was only about 6 hours of drawing. |D Either way, I actually like how this turned out.
That almost never happens. I'm like... surprised. Really surprised. Scared, almost.
Anyhow. You probably recognized the one on the left as Mewka- the one on the right is Ruku.
Human-ified, obviouslyyyy
TITLE-LESS BOOKS ARE COOL GUYS
anyway
See this picture?
I like it.
But I'm sure you see something wrong with it.
So if you do
go to that critique box
AND CRUSH MY HOPES AND DREAMS. BE MEAN TO ME, I CAN TAKE IT. POINT OUT EVERY DARN FLAW YOU SEE. IF YOU DON'T WANT TO FIND SOMEONE WHO CAN.
I'M DESPERATE, GUYS.
PRETTY PLEASE WITH RUKU ON TOP.
Haha ruku on top like that'll ever happen
Ruku and Mewka are mine
Art's mine
Done mostly on Paint Tool SAI, with small photoshop effects.
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Comments: 7
I'm guessing you enjoy Photoshop ahahaha *shot*
The colours and detail in shading are as amazing as ever <3
Aaaaah, but Mewka's right arm and hand ARE a bit too thick, particularly the hand. The palm curves in and if you were to flatten out Mewka's hand it would look like there's a giant lump in the palm. Then, yeah, in proportion arms should be smaller too - the wrist is about... 2/3's the width of the hand? I'm not sure if that's completely accurate since I'm using my own wrist here XD This is likely to just be my opinion, but since they ARE falling, Mewka and Ruku's shirts and Ruku's pants don't seem to have that falling effect. The bunching up from the wind and whatnot. The necklace should probably be on the rise too.
OKAY I'M DONE. I FEEL LIKE I'VE PRETTY MUCH STABBED YOU OVER AND OVER NORGE I'M SO SORRY *sob sob sob* BUT I WANT TO TRY TO BE SOMETHING AKIN TO USEFUL FOR YOU.
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Aww! 8D You have reasons to be proud, this drawing's really amazing. I might write you a critique later if you want :'D
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Mewka's left hand looks pretty... off. Her wrist is too fat and her arms should be longer. The fingers are also a bit short. The clouds don't really look like clouds, try adding more shadings and fluffiness? I like how you shaded the clothes and Ruku.
Hope I helped, I really like this picture
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FFFFFFFFF-
DUUUUUUDE THIS IS LIKE PURE AWESOME YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW AWESOME THIS PICTURE IS ITS LIKE, AMAZING.
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Mewka always always has to do crazy epic things, PINK HAIR 
Nice highlights on Ruku's hair there, I'm sure Vivy would like that too.
Vivy: Wait what?
Germain: Human Mewka, wait I didn't tell you how to do that yet. O-o.
! She wore it? Dawww :3
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Mewka's right arm XD It's... thicker than it should be.... lol. That's the only thing I saw that was a bit irky.
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