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"JUST SHUT UP!!!" (My what a way to enter a story... Turn back now before she REALLY gets mad)Hyde pounded on one of the mirrors surrounding her. She had been crying... again.
"SHUT UP! SHUT UP! SHUT UP!!!"
"Wą̀͘t͟͜͞c̸̷͞h̵̢͠ ̨y̶͜͠ǫ̡u͠͏r̶͞ ̶̢mou̴͟t̵̨h͡͞,̢̀ ̵̵͘y҉̵ò͡u̴n҉̧g͟ ̛͜l͘͘͘ady̸͠͡.̷̡.͞.̨"
Hyde looked around to see no one around. Only darkness. Gosh damn that darkness.
"Y̡͢͞o̶͝u͏̧ ͠k̶͡n͡ò͟͜w҉̴ v̢̛͘er̷y͠ w͝e̡͢ll̕ ̛t͞͏ha̵҉t̢ I ̴͞͞a̴͜m r̀i̸̡̡g̵̸h̨̛͏t͟. ̶I̡ ̶k̴͡ǹ̷ò̸͠w̕͠ ͞͡w̷͘ha͘͠t҉́'̴̧̡s̨͟ b̧e̵̕s͘͜͝t͝ ̴̧̀f̨͜҉o̧ŗ̢͘ y̕͝͠o̢u̵͘!̵"
"Sometimes I wish you didn't..." Hyde said sitting down and staring into a mirror. A familiar purple baticorn stood on the other side, smiling and laughing. She was sitting with Princess Cadence in the Crystal Empire, enjoying a nice cup of... "tea". Was it hot or cold, Hyde doesn't know. She never felt those sensations. She felt nothing.
No pain, no emotions, no love. She was a cold, empty shell. Well, she had a brain, but that's debatable...
"That little bi-"
"H̴̷͡͝Y̡͞͏Ḑ͏͝É̴͟͟!̛̛̕͞͠"
"I was going to say bicycle!" (She really was)
Hyde turned back to see the purple baticorn look into the Crystal Heart, the mirror she was watching from. As soon as they made eye contact, her eyes went cold. The Bat Pony Princess stared at Hyde for what seemed like forever, before Hyde decided to make a move. She flew straight into the mirror as hard and as fast as she could. Of course the impact didn't shatter the mirror, or even make a crack, but it did frighten the Princess. The impact caused something else to happen.
"Oh my, how could have this fallen out?" Cadence asked.
The Crystal Heart fell from it's pedestal. Of course, because of that, the view was knocked from Ender's face, but as soon as Cadence placed the Heart back, Hyde was able to see Ender's horror.
"Come, let us find Flurry Heart, I have been dying to meet her!" Ender said to the pink alicorn, leading her away from Hyde and the Heart. Hyde watched, shifting her eyes mirror to mirror, watching Ender in every reflection until she couldn't find the will to look any more.
A shadowy tentacle wrapped around Hyde's neck and hooves. She wasn't afraid though... she knew what triggered them: Fear. And even if she was afraid, she knew the creature that created them, didn't have the heart to kill her. It didn't even have a heart at all.
Hyde pulled the shadows apart. "I'm fine, Dorchadas..."
The darkness began to form into a familiar face, well, to Hyde it's familiar. Dark gray and black shadows cast over the Mirror Realm and surround the mare. Shadows formed to make a mane and a face. They cover most mirrors and the rest turn dark. Nothing can be seen through them any longer. 2 Eyes emerged from the darkness, the pupils were a bright white, the only light in this dark place.
"Y͢҉҉ò̧͏u̷͞ ̕҉k̨̡͜ǹ̶͢o͟͝w̸̵̡̕ ͏̶̶̡̡Í͏̀ ̴̶͝w̴͢͢͡a̵̸ǹ͟͡t̛̀͜͠ ͏͏w̧h̸̴̨͟͠a̸̸̧͠t̷̢̡'̴͟ş̴͞͞ ̧̢͘b͡͡és͘͢t͞҉͢ ́̀f̸̡̛̛́o̴͠͞ŕ̢̢́ ̷̸̴͡ý̴̡҉̨o͡͡u̢̕̕.̵̕͞"
Hyde scoffs, "Yeah... what's best for you? Not telling me a way to escape this torture chamber..."
The shadowy creature drew closer to the mare and she only took a step back.
"Yóu͜ ͏a͟r͢e ́f͢l̵a͟w̴ed p̕erf̴e͘c̷t͠io̵n, Hyde. ̕I̕ ̷onl̵y͡ wa͡nt͝ w͟h͞a̵t̴'͡ş b̴es͞t ͞f͡o͘r͢ y͝o҉ù, b̨u͝t̸ ̢n͠ơw̡ is ͜n̵ot̴ ͘t̨he b͟est ́t̷ime̶ ͢fo͟r̛ ͠y̵óu͠r rel͡e̡ase̴.͞.."
"That's the third time you said that to me in the last 5 minutes... 'Set me free', you say? When will that be? Maybe in another 500 years maybe? OH! I know! Maybe never! How does that sound?! Isn't that a perfect time to set me free?!"
Hyde saw the anger growing in Dorchadas' eyes. She knew he hated it when she mocked him.
"Hy͏de.͜..̸ ̷I ͏ca̸n'͢t ̀l͡e͢t y̵ou̵ go͜ n̵ow.̵.̢.͠ ̶It ̧to͘o҉k me ̢ce̴nturi̛es̕ ҉upon̶ ̕cent̴u̧ri̢e̶s ̕to ge͟t i̴n̵to ͡th͜is͜ for͜m!̡ I ̛d́o҉n'͟t́ ̵e͟v̢ȩn̛ ̴h̵a̴v͠e҉ ́a ̧full ͞b̷o̡dy.̧.̷. ͘D̢ǫ yo͞u͢ ŗe͞m̧e҉m͡b̶e͘r ͝w҉ho̸ ͞g̢av̀e ̨y͜o͞u ҉a ̧sec̸on̸d c͟h͞a̢n̵c͡e͞ t̢o̵ ̶l͞i̡v̨è ͏aft̴ér ẁh͞a̕t́ ̸h͜ap͟peņed͏ t̵o yo̶ù..͢.͢?̀"
Hyde looked down, "I know..."
"B̨e͝ ͞l͜u͢ck̢y ̶I͘ was̛ t̡h̢e͟re̡ whe҉n͝ ̵yóu ͞weŗe o͏n͠ ͡t͡h̴e̵ ͏brink ̨o̢f ̶d҉eat̸h!͞ Y̴ou͞ a͞re no̴t ́i͘m͡mo̶r̕t͞al, H͜y͠de!̢ E͢nder may ̶be҉, ̡b̢ut̛ ́n̴ót ͝yo҉u̴!͢ I͠ to̷ld͏ you ͝wh̕at̢ to ̴do̷ t͘o ͝su͘rv҉ive͝, a͏n̶d for ҉t̡h̀at,̀ ̷y̸o͜u ̸v́ow̛e̕d to̸ be-͟"
"I know... You don't need to remind me..."
A wailing scream from the distance caused Hyde to wince. A pain in her chest, not heart, was found.
"I am a monster..." I thought...
She thought...
"Am I nothing more than a reflection...?" I asked Dorchadas. He simply looked at me and told Hyde the truth.
"H͟yde. Yòu͡ ar͟e n͝ot ҉a ̴ŕęfl̀e̡c̛t́i̵on͠... Y͞ou҉ ̀ar͘e̢ ́En͝d͏e̕r̡'͡s e̢nem̶y... ̴Y͠ou͝ ̶ar̨e̴ ͞hęr̵ wor͝s̛t͞ ̡fea͠r..҉.͘ ̧You a҉re go̸in̵g͏ t́o ͢t͏o҉rtu͝r̶e her̶ ̢f͞or̡ ̶a̵s̸ l̢o͟nǵ ̨as ̡she͡ ҉di͘d͘ ͜t͞ơ ̸you..͢.̴ ̸Sh͟e w͠i̕ll ͟n͠o̢t die̴, ͜o͝n͏l͘y͞ ̸sųf͢fe͢r.͟.̛. ̀You ̧wi̵l͡l ̨t͘a̛k̡é awa̧y҉ ͠Ȩqu͜e̸st͏r̨ia͠'̛s͟ ͡a͜lįc͡orn҉s̵.̨.͏.̛ ̨Y͞o͏ư ͢w͏i̢ll͢ m̛ak͡e s͏ur͏e͏ ̢E̴qu͡est̡ria̶ burn͜ş...͟ ̛Y̛ou wi̕ll b͘e͠ t͡he ̀Q͘ue̵e͞n͢ ̢o͏f a͞ d̴y̢i̸ng wo͏rl̕d̸.̡.."
I was told the truth. Hyde looked down at my hooves and lifted one up. I saw that a shadow began to travel up at my will. When it reached the top of my hoof and telepathically forced it to caress my face. Oh how I loved the darkness in my empty soul... I will make Dorchadas proud when I leave here. If I ever leave here. No... I WILL escape here. He helped me... He will help me... He is my mentor... He gave me a second chance to live...
Oh, Zahir...
I am not sorry for what I did... You saw something else in me. My how wrong you were...
Equestria...
You will burn... I will make sure nothing is left untouched. No pony left unharmed by my rage...
Ender...
I am coming for you...
I am coming for you, Ender... and after what you have done to me, after everything your ripped from my soul, after everything you took from me, I will make sure you suffer for eternity as you watch your precious Equestria burn to the ground! Ponies will die of starvation, disease, and straight our murder. I will attack to my pleasure. Statues of ponies in every corner! Corpses and overfilled cemeteries... And Ender will watch it all happen...
"D̴on͝'͜t foŕg̕ét͜ ̶w̶h̀ǫ y̕o̸u a̕r̡è,̀ ̀Hyd̕e͢.͟.͠.͜"
I turned to Dorchadas and smiled. He was the one who made me mad. The one who helped. The one who called my destiny...
The one I called my father...
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Okay so this happened before the events October... That's all I wish to say... Everything here is up to interpretation.
The format I written this in is rather complicated or confusing, but I hope you understand what's going on.
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*Dresses up like Doctor Strange*
Dorchadas… I've come to Bargen
(Ok only marvel fans will understand this joke and to those people I say: Well done. You are awesome. ) XD
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Go Bargen with Doctor Strange... >w>
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*Falls down* Thank you QuQ
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No, he is Hyde's dad. He adopted her
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Sylvaan: "Oh yes I understand the ways of darkness and how it lies and corrupts. But... I will show Hyde that it only brings pain.
Destroying Equestria only will bring pain. Not to those who perish but to Hyde. Dorchadas is not to be honored. What he
gave to her is only a lie."
You are getting dark Ender. It's cool though.
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Oh Sylvaan, she knows so much more than Hyde could ever understand... She was created to bring souls to hell, but instead, she tries to spare them... That's why I really like her! I can bet she knows a lot about the horrors darkness brings, and the severe consequences that follow those who choose the wrong path.
Hyde: "Oh... Sylvaan... hello again. I suppose you saw a little bit of my past..." *Slightly turns away* "Dorchadas is my father... he adopted me when I was on the brink of death, and... gave me a second chance... He told me what I wanted to hear, or what I thought I wanted to hear..."
I know some of my pieces can get rather dark, which kinda makes me worry, but I love writing stories with a complex plot. Not so much confusing and random, but difficult to understand until you have the whole story presented to you. But thank you so much!
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Oh I love that your story's can get dark and complex. It makes for great character development.
You area a great and imaginative writer.
Sylvaan: "Dorchadas saw you at a most vulnerable point and took advantage of it Hyde. He may have
adopted you but you are not "of Him" Just remember that. Yes you have been given a second
chance but the decision as to what to do with it is still yours. The Dark Lord is quite irritated that
I am "Of Him" and he has lost me but I still think fondly of Him even though I don't do his bidding.
Actually... in a way, He enjoys that a part of him roams Equestria freely and He did not break the deal
with Celestia for this to happen. I am a wild card created by chance and as such both Celestia and Dark Lord
still hold the deal as unbroken.
*takes Hydes face gently in her hooves and turns her back to face her. She smiles
at Hyde.*
"I still hold out hope for you. Your path is a long one and full of choices. To me that is magic, Oh and I don't
care who you call father. You are the writer of your own destiny. Never doubt it... friend." *lightly kisses Hydes nose.*
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C̳͢a̸u͖͘s̻̜̘͓̲͈͞e̙̰̲̜͎͠ ҉̮̳̲͚t͓̻͓̙͈̬̩̕h̗̬̮̤̜͕̗i̛͔̲̩s̜̱̪̫͠ ͈̥͇͎̰i̵ş̬ͅ ̪̳͈̤ͅf̬̝̯u̸n̟̰̯͇!̧̝ ̘̲̫̟͘:̫̮̖͟D̶̻̖̹
̜̙͎̫̝Ṯ̙̗̮h͍̝̦̹͇a̘ņ͖̞͉͍̜̪k̛̩͇̩͔̣͓͈ ̞͍́y̦̠̩̱̣̟o͕̮̰u͈͕ ̯̤̙͙̤͔t̖̕h̳o̬̺͜u̥̳̠g̛h̰͖̞̭͉́!̨͕͈͙͎̲̝̝ ̙̼͓͡:͏3̤̲̟̩͡3͉̫̹͍̠3̦̺̝̜̼͓̦͝
̗͚͟I̟̺̣̺ ̯̣͘a̩̝p͕̜͈̪p̪͚̯ṟ͙͚̺̮͉̼e҉̣͙̣c͉͍̺i͍̰̦͕̺͞ͅa̙͚̱t̺͓͍͝e͈͎̥̲͉̳ ̷̝͔͕̥i͔̰̦̥̰t̪̻̹̼!̴͙!̸͚̭̝!̬̦͓̖̥
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O.O
Okay the other thing talks like Chao does, in like glitches o.O
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: "My daddy? Dorchadas?"
Shush Hyde, no one is talking to you...
That's cool! Glitchy text is fun XP
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Check my status <3
spoilers~
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We finally get a hint of Zahir's story. Also this dorchocolate whatever his name is 
Also Hydy, you realise how bored you'd be after killing everyone and destroying everything? Whats the point of being immortal if there's nothing to do?
no one to talk to, no games to play, nothing for the rest of eternity.
but hey i'm not a baticorn embodiment of darkness soooo XD
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(First of all, dat gif XD)
Well for Zahir, it's only a small bit, but it's something... if anyone even remembers Zahir! Glad you do, so thank you for that ^^
Dorcholoate
Hyde: Well... I am not immortal, believe it or not. I am simply an evil entity, as soon as I am done with this world, I will move on to the next! There are endless dimensions! Trillions of worlds to destroy!!! Of course, I'll keep one dimension alive, just because... And in every dimension, I'll find the Ender there and torture her!!! Then I will kill her!
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you know what hyde...
you really need a better hobby
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Hyde: "I... I.... I was thinking about stamp collecting... what do you think about that?"
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... Well then...
We will stop you, if there's no convincing you, i'll have no choice but to stop you.
We'll save Ender, and stop you from destroying the realm, maybe then you'll listen to reason.
And no matter how much you break the world, we will fix it
(DAAAAm look at meh being dramatic
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Hyde: "B-b-but... I did nothing wrong... I gave Astral a marshmallow... and we played Hyde & Seek with Seek! Ender promised that I could be free if I be good!"
(Dang... Hyde being sensitive... and you being serious and dramatic O_O... I must call in Sherlock Silver and BloodMoon Watson)
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Wait wait wait!
You just threatened to destroy the realm
"as soon as I am done with this world, I will move on to the next! There are endless dimensions! Trillions of worlds to destroy!!! Of course, I'll keep one dimension alive, just because... And in every dimension, I'll find the Ender there and torture her!!! Then I will kill her!"
Quote: Purple bat horsie!
Are you bad or not? I'm so confused
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Hyde: "Eh... they are just mood swings I guess... But I AM THE BAD GUY!!!" ^^
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Woah! So Hyde never broke out of the mirror realm herself? It was her dad that made those plans for her?
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Nope, she had a lot of help. When I trapped her in the Mirror Realm 500 years ago, I made sure she wouldn't escape. Her dad basically broke the connection between Hyde and her chains, thus setting her free and all that scary stuff -_-
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Kimmy: Your Welcome
Ender: I SAID SHUT UP!!!
Kimmy:...
Ender:...
Kimmy: Do you know da way?
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Aww XP
You have the freedom of speech! Use your voice for your opinions and ideas
Don't listen to my commands
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This makes so much sense! I loved the story, even though it is sad. I am happy we get to know more about Dorchadas, (XD not Dorischacha) The details were amazing and I could almost feel Hydes anger while reading. I loved the story, and I am happy to understand a little more about hydes backstory as well as her father. Awesome work Ender and amazing art as well
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Doris cha cha XP
I can never get used to that
I can tell you a secret right...
>_>
<_<
Dorchadas isn't really evil...
XP Okay I am done...
But I am so glad you like the story and the art! I need to give Hyde a reason to escape... because she kinda just did with no reason or sign of help... I hope this cleared something up, and judging by your awesome comment, I think it might have done a little ^^
Thanks again!
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Thanks, Electra!!! I appreciate the support and kind words
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