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englermeister — Not My Tears
Published: 2008-09-10 10:31:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 100; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Life without out your influence,is one I don’t want to face.
Your perfection and kindness
always, will put me in my place.
When you take my hand,
you take my fears in yours.
When I‘m disheartened,
they’re not my tears, but yours.
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I really like this concept (and I hope I've taken the conclusion from it that you wanted a reader to draw 
Really great form, but it could possibly do with a few more stanzas in between... Just a suggestion. It sounds like it could incorporate a lot more.
Well done!
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