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enigmafreek — falling stars
Published: 2010-04-15 04:35:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 1296; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 0
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part of a poem i wrote:...crawling sounds in the dark, scampers and noises so unkind, i hear them now, they're starting to come for me, coming closer and closer, they want to get inside me, they want to feed on me, take my soul and make it rot, what do i do, what do i do, oh my god, what do i do, i hear them all around me, i feel them inside my place, my corner isn't safe, this darkness, it's hiding them, it's going to kill me, those sounds, getting closer, closer, closer, they're on me, they're in me, bursting through my skin, tearing at my flesh, i scream, i cry, i beg for help, i beg, i plead, i beg...
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_no critiques plz ^_^
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reminds me of being sick haha, good job!
i would've liked your eyes better focussed, pet peeve of mine when photographs of people dont have sharp eyes- its the area where a person naturally looks at the most. and a better background, maybe instead of the of dirty noisey backdrop, a pure white with the vignette effect would surve it better.
goodgood, like it
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Wow cool! What did you use for the black things? This is awesome
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