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Published: 2009-10-28 21:42:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 2846; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 62
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Thought I might get this in 30 mins before I go to school.

Anywho, page 2. I'm still contemplating whether or not to do a page 3, since I'm taking the last panel isn't enough to justify that Lox wishes to enter the comp..

I like the extreme close up in panel #5. It subtly shows his anti-sleep drug addiction. Irkens can take drugs, right? Any form, I don't know. Doesn't have to be pills I guess. But Irkens eat, I am sure of that!

No need to say how long this one took me, other than the fact it took me longer

Perspective, perspective.

Irkens © Jhonen Vasquez
Lox created by the ~enigmatia


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Comments: 37

InvaderSony12345 [2012-04-16 21:05:09 +0000 UTC]

the button page 1 doesn't work wanna let you know

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De-PAKed [2011-06-23 18:56:06 +0000 UTC]

Yaaaaaay!! I love this. <3333
Eight days till the entries for the Blood Sports entries are done... So much time to kill...

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enigmatia In reply to De-PAKed [2011-07-08 08:16:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you
Is that in reference to yourself?

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De-PAKed In reply to enigmatia [2011-07-08 09:28:27 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.
Yes it is, I've entered another OCT. But... I'm the only one with a complete entry...

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enigmatia In reply to De-PAKed [2011-07-08 09:30:09 +0000 UTC]

Oh, maybe the group doesn't have enough fandom coverage? The interest in OCTs dropped after people started making their own adter Blood Sport. Before that, BS was the only one! A bunch of people started to make their own and I guess it as a singularity, left people uninterested P:

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De-PAKed In reply to enigmatia [2011-07-08 09:41:26 +0000 UTC]

Oh... Curses... I was hoping to unleash Scen on people...
Okays, well my idle idea is gone to than... *flushes Gladitorial combat down the drain* People wouldn't want three on three combat anyway, to much work.

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Zerna [2009-11-16 04:18:50 +0000 UTC]

I love your layout. <3

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enigmatia In reply to Zerna [2009-11-16 05:53:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I was thinking "Eeh, is it too dark? ". It adds to the mood, but it also adds to the confusion of "WHERE THE HELL ARE HIS ANTENNAE?" with all these darker monitors people have

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Zerna In reply to enigmatia [2009-11-16 16:03:44 +0000 UTC]

I thought the biggest problem, actually, was that the dialogue was hard to keep up with. it sort of seemed to jump around from panel to panel.

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enigmatia In reply to Zerna [2009-11-18 07:11:53 +0000 UTC]

Oh, really? Gosh! I think it might be because I was working too hard on perspective, and the fact that they're not actually facing each other.. I really don't know how to fix that though Thanks for telling me! Nobody seems to give a valuable critique these days!

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Zerna In reply to enigmatia [2009-11-18 16:47:53 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome. And I'll try to...be more critical from now on. xD;;;;

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enigmatia In reply to Zerna [2009-11-19 09:20:14 +0000 UTC]

Haha, that would be lovely I'm always to afraid to give critique these days. Nobody ever seems to want it

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Zerna In reply to enigmatia [2009-11-20 00:50:03 +0000 UTC]

I would appreciate it personally. to me, critics are just ways to improve. <3

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Yucailian-wolf [2009-11-01 22:57:32 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Still love the coloring!

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enigmatia In reply to Yucailian-wolf [2009-11-02 07:30:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much <3 It was all airbrush It makes a great watercolour effect! Just a lot less messy ;D

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Yucailian-wolf In reply to enigmatia [2009-11-02 13:37:19 +0000 UTC]

Welcome! ^^

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Moonrisepower [2009-10-29 15:39:33 +0000 UTC]

Please continue!! It's so interesting. Really well done too!! I also like the close-up.

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enigmatia In reply to Moonrisepower [2009-10-30 23:00:01 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I say though, the last page won't really match up for interesting-ness because it would only be two panels, and that's just him saying he's entering But you're not the only one to say, so I might as well. Thanks so much!

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AnnaKlava [2009-10-29 13:42:32 +0000 UTC]

Ooh this is getting interesting. I like how the story is going. Interesting you had your OC Lox take drugs, that makes him an interesting character.

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enigmatia In reply to AnnaKlava [2009-10-31 09:20:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm really glad it is. I have only ever made 2 other comic intros, and I'm sad to say, the attention was quite poor, even to myself XD Those I must say, where both written in broad daylight. It seems my best time of inspiration is late at night

I sure hope so! I didn't want it to seem superfluous and just thrown in. I wanted him to seem a bit of a baddy, not to mention sorta paranoid. Like, stay up all night and hopefully nobody will chop his head off

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AnnaKlava In reply to enigmatia [2009-10-31 16:40:50 +0000 UTC]

Well It's turning out really good so far.

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JakieDINOSAURrawrxD [2009-10-29 04:11:28 +0000 UTC]

Once again you amaze me with your ablities, and I find your comic very interesting

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enigmatia In reply to JakieDINOSAURrawrxD [2009-10-29 08:35:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Really, it warms my heart
Goodness, I hope so! I'd hate to see my works in the late ours of the night go to waste!

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JakieDINOSAURrawrxD In reply to enigmatia [2009-10-29 15:57:27 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome

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Deeteedilly [2009-10-29 01:57:40 +0000 UTC]

I'm sure drugs of some form exist on irk. Please do a 3. This is awesome ^^

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enigmatia In reply to Deeteedilly [2009-10-29 06:09:24 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Thanks! I knew people would probably like it, but I didn't think anyone would really be interesting in seeing another page!

Hehe, I thought so too. I dunno, I just thought it would make him an interesting character if he had them.. like, to keep himself awake for longer, out of fear of getting assassinated or something. I dunno! He's still in the developmental phase

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Yeakuaf [2009-10-29 01:03:38 +0000 UTC]

I think that irkens can take drugs. If they had drugs. I don't know if they do.

I'm sure that they don't NEED to eat though. They eat snacks just because they want to, but PAKs provide all the nutrients and stuff they need.

Nice perspective and close-up by the way.

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enigmatia In reply to Yeakuaf [2009-10-29 05:58:15 +0000 UTC]

Well, I'm sure that JV wouldn't have cared enough to think about whether or not they would use drugs. (I dunno, if not drugs, why couldn't they have some sort of other enhancement?)But I liked him being a bit of a loser to have to take them, so I went with it. I guess it's not really needed, but to me, it gives the character something extra! ..and I can't think of anything extra else I'll think of something by January. Besides, it makes it seem like he always has to be alert for as much time possible.

Is that a fact? I dunno, I just went with Sizzlor being a big guy at Foodcourtia, who makes all the fast food, so they must eat somewhat, if not for enjoyment

Thanks

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Yeakuaf In reply to enigmatia [2009-10-29 06:29:41 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, he IS a thief. Gotta be on the look out and stuff in case something goes wrong.

Yeah, it's a fact in one of the unfinished episodes. I can't remember which one though...
But they DO eat a fair amount of snacks. So many snacks... It's a wonder how they all stay so thin. (though, not all are thin)

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enigmatia In reply to Yeakuaf [2009-10-29 08:39:12 +0000 UTC]

Oh yes. I'm afraid, if he doesn't die from anything physical, it'd be his paranoia

Ah, haven't read all the episodes, STILL. And I have no motivation to as of yet

Haha, of course not! Must be their metabolisms! But for all those twiggy Irkens, I would believe it's something to do with phenylalanine, and other mysterious artificial goodie sweetness Heck, who knows how far alien technology can take them!

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Yeakuaf In reply to enigmatia [2009-10-29 22:09:41 +0000 UTC]

How very sad.

Yeah, really. Alien technology is the shniz and can do all.

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mysterypoodle [2009-10-28 22:32:55 +0000 UTC]

Nice ^^ I like there expressions :3 I'm not entering but I'll cheer ya on ^^

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enigmatia In reply to mysterypoodle [2009-10-29 05:52:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!
Daww, why not?

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mysterypoodle In reply to enigmatia [2009-10-29 14:52:05 +0000 UTC]

Welcome
Reason 1# I needa improve more in my comic making skills.
Reason 2# My parents are divorced so I probably if I really wanted to wouldn't have any time. And I have school and other art to do.
Reason 3# I'm kinda LAZY when it comes to making comics ...I still needa work on my two I have!

Those are all the reasons, plus I'd get crushed the first round probably ...and there having one the year after this one so I'll enter that one. Time is not on my side this year ^^'.

But seriously I'll cheer all my friends that are going on, ON!!! C:

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littlecheese [2009-10-28 22:11:39 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, i would say add a nother page for it and do something dramatic like, idk like AND SO IT BEGINS or something lol i might be entering

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enigmatia In reply to littlecheese [2009-10-29 05:52:10 +0000 UTC]

And So It Begins.. LOL xD Now that's drama!

You're only "Might be" entering? Eekk D; What stops you?!

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littlecheese In reply to enigmatia [2009-10-29 05:58:57 +0000 UTC]

when i do a comic, i get lazy at it and not finish it alot --' darn lazyness lol

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