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Published: 2009-02-10 09:50:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 1274; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 46
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Description The sunset fades into the darkest night
as the wind goes howling through my bones
mislead by others I felt I could trust
I face the world unknown

I hear them laughing as they pass me by
too occupied to know that I exist
so I retreat to what I know best
within a world in which I won't be missed

This is a lonely lonely state
the only way for you I really can relate
is to pretend that you don't matter
the world could shatter
why feel at all if one only can hate

This is a lonely lonely time
do people talk about me
should I really mind
I must go on with good intentions
and never mention
how much you've hurt me, it's all in my mind
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Comments: 9

living-bones [2009-02-18 16:35:49 +0000 UTC]

wicked awsome E, it has a nice flow to it

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cuteswan [2009-02-12 23:10:59 +0000 UTC]

It's a touching little poem in itself, giving a glimpse into your feelings back then. (I'm glad your life is much better now.)

It's just too bad that I don't have that love song for Chibiusa and Pegas.. er, I mean, for that song you mentioned which I know absolutely nothing about. And I definitely don't have on my system in a Sailor... er, uhm, folder for whatever show it's from, which I don't know.

I used to make my own lyrics to songs, but in an attempt to be funny — so failed attempts. I did make my own subtitles for a couple of eps. that weren't aired in the U.S. though....

In any case, thanks for sharing that bit of yourself.

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metalformer [2009-02-11 15:55:35 +0000 UTC]

Its scary how can we both relate tho this things. very nicely done despite the sad edge (Fuck it if it sounds emo! better worry about getting it out of your system before it eats you!).

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PondDreamer [2009-02-11 02:26:39 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful and sad. I relate to this easily. Nice work.

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rhr396 [2009-02-10 23:47:04 +0000 UTC]

Very meaningful lyrics. Nothing emo about it.

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Lambocoon [2009-02-10 20:13:12 +0000 UTC]

mm, nice
i like it

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HaleyCkitten [2009-02-10 16:39:41 +0000 UTC]

Omg... how did you write this?! It's so true...

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DogmaticKerr [2009-02-10 11:21:21 +0000 UTC]

Wow... I must say, I love this and I'm impressed. Also, I think that applying a tag like "emo" to it is just terrible - this is beautifully stated.

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FlipsideMivy [2009-02-10 10:22:41 +0000 UTC]

Emo, lol.

It's still cool though, very well written. For old work it's very good sis

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