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Published: 2007-10-28 01:10:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 1336; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 0
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The beautiful Allison
from our October 26th photoshoot at Mirror Lake state park in Wisconsin. This is probably my favorite park in all of Wisconsin. I will be uploading more from this shoot for sure. 
Please enjoy!! Comments and critiques are welcome!!
-Mike
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Comments: 4
Well, you say advanced critique.
I think the photo here is nice. The pose is great and I like her facial expression here a lot.
I dont think she stands out from the background enough though. In general, you use a lot of very stroung outfits, a lot of pleather etc. but I'm not sure if it benefits the photos. she has in general very subtle expressions, but the outfits take away from that, making it almost pornographic. I would like to see a little more of something delicate from the two of you.
Also, in every photo of her I've seen, she looks very melancholy. Please have her give something else in her eyes to add a little more clarity to what she intends to express.
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Sacha...thank you!!! It's about darn time someone takes the 'advanced critique' for what it means! How the heck am I going to get better at this if people don't give me things to work on? You have no idea how much I appreciate this. Thank you for the compliments on the pic. I actually have some shoot ideas that Allison and I are planning on that will have more delicate and intimate outfits and settings. We're also working on more facial expressions and me being a better director. We are both new at this, but we're learning. 
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Hoo-nilly thats a short skirt right there! Looks like a beautiful area for a shoot.
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Thanks! 
It is a gorgeous area!! I've been there 3 times this year already.
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