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No poetry was written,No fairytales were read.
As if it was forbidden,
By the monsters in her head.
And all they thought was silly,
Was quickly thrown away.
By a girl who had to grow up,
By a girl who couldn't play.
All her dreams and fantasies,
All her fears and hopes.
Thrown in a bag of garbage,
Balloons and skipping ropes.
The teddybears and puzzles,
All had to retreat.
For new puzzles in her head,
She never would complete.
No poetry was written,
No fairytales were told.
Her eyes spoke of a sad tale,
Her hands were always cold.
She thought of no white horses,
For she was no princess.
Her life was about papers,
And secret loneliness
All her dreams and fantasies,
Would never come true now.
For she had forsaken them,
Without knowing how.
Remember how happy she was.
She doesn't even know.
The little girl she used to be,
Was forgotten long ago.
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Absolutely beautiful,actually brought tears to my eyes. it flows smoothly, almost like a ((albeit sad))lullaby, and I know all to well the angers of growing up, especially to fast. Bravo and well done, I'd love to see more!
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I like this a lot. Β It has great imgery.
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Amazing. Nice flow and very well written. I love it.
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This, is why I love writing so much. 
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This is sooooooo good!!!!!! :3 WAY better than my poetry!
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Wonderful! I love it! I'm glad I came upon it in random deviations. ^_^
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This deserves much praise! How blessed am I to have found it when randomly searching poetry. Great work, really. Beautiful!
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wow this shit hit me so hard it is so true. this describes me to the T. im amazed at how well this descibes me.
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kayyyyy this made me want to cry but it was amazing. absolutely worthy of being called poetry
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i'm very happy that you have observed rhyme.
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You mean making the words rhyme? I always do that in my poetry, it makes the work roll of the tongue better. Prettier to read :3
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poetry doesn't have to rhyme
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This is very soft and sweet. It flows nicely together. Beautiful :3
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This is so sad
Normally I see poetry with unnatural, uncommon words stretched into more syllables than needed. But this all flows perfectly. This is still massively sad, though :c
Seeing that you actually made me force back tears, this is a great poem
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I've had this in my favorites for years now and I still come back to read it.
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i like it, its similar to some of mine.... i like yours better though and it well deserves to be called poetry
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BRILLIANT!!! the monsters in her head is a little cliche now, though it is the only error to the much pleased eye!
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Omg only wish i could write as beautifly as this
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yes this is amazing i can write but you are wonderful thank you for this amazing write
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That was beautiful. Thank you very much for writing
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I can relate to your poem so deeply, and this is what I really liked about what you wrote.
This part especially touched me the most:
"No poetry was written,
No fairytales were told.
Her eyes spoke of a sad tale,
Her hands were always cold.
She thought of no white horses,
For she was no princess.
Her life was about papers,
And secret loneliness
All her dreams and fantasies,
Would never come true now.
For she had forsaken them,
Without knowing how.
Remember how happy she was.
She doesn't even know.
The little girl she used to be,
Was forgotten long ago."
Very well written, good job
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Very sad... it reminds me of how my eating disorder made me. But now I'm kicking it to the curb and taking myself back! I'll remember this poem to help me get through it. Thank you.
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I like the rhyme scheme. Simple, and brings the emotion and power out of the words. I took a sharp breath reading this. As one poet to another, Outstanding.
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Wow, that's quite the poem! I've gotta say I'm jealous.
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What breathtaking poetry. You have an amazing gift for writing
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wow this is amazing. its the best i've heard in a long time
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This is powerful you really managed to capture the child spoken of. The way this is written seems to allow the reader to understand almost from within the mind of the girl. Simply breathtaking.
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