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babylon-sticks [2012-06-23 08:47:36 +0000 UTC]
Nice art, but the dialogue balloons do not follow each other all that well. I'd cut down on the words or put more into fewer balloons.
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Eponymus In reply to babylon-sticks [2012-06-23 10:18:23 +0000 UTC]
You're right... it reads from the top to the bottom and from left to right... Actualmly, the problem is I restrain myself to 3 frames, it would deserve about 10. And, I conceive these stuff more as anime cartoon than actual comics strips.
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babylon-sticks In reply to Eponymus [2012-06-23 10:25:37 +0000 UTC]
It's a hard balance to achieve - after all these years I still struggle with it.
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Eponymus In reply to babylon-sticks [2012-06-23 15:29:53 +0000 UTC]
True ! In fact to give this chit chat dialogue type of effect in 3 frames, I couldn't find another way... The way the ballons are positioned is important... Taking into account your comment, I edited the balloons and it seems a bit better...
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