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Published: 2012-08-28 17:48:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 102021; Favourites: 1665; Downloads: 781
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First of all, I am an unproffesional critic... but oh well! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="37" height="25" alt="
The expressions were shown clearly.
The words were easy to understand... so it has a very clear story in it.
Twilight was very cute.
I loved the details!
I liked how some water spilled out of the bottle when Twi fell, er.. ran away?
The only part that wasn't clear was if Twilight was falling or running away- I honestly couldn't tell.
The comic overall was really nice! a.deviantart.net/avatars/c/e/c⦠" alt=" " title="celestialaplz" /> I love Trollestia!
Keep being awesome! a.deviantart.net/avatars/t/r/t⦠" alt=" " title="trollestia3plz" />
~ XxQueenOfPiexXβ€
PS la la la la la la la la la la la la lol
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TROLLESTIA IS A STUPID IDEA A STUPID PERSON MADE UP!!! SAVE CELESTIA FROM EVIL CRITICISM!!!
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Wow, Celestias gonna be mad.
Imma tell Molestia.
Where you sleeep.
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Howdy! Never show to anyone you are unprofessional, it's better when they don't know it 
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This is my first critique, so I know a BUNCH of people will ignore this. BUT, I have to say that the background looks pretty close to the background in the show. Plus, Twilight and Princess Celestia are VERY cute! Its really funny how Twilight fell for one of the most OBVIOUS tricks in the book -- in other words, poisoned water. Its so funny because she's like, one of the smartest characters in Mlp: FiM!!! Oh Trollestia, you get them every time,don't you. a.deviantart.net/avatars/t/r/t⦠" alt=" " title="trollestiaplz" />
Well, in other words, good job. I think you did a great job. 5 stars all the way!!! ^^
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hello this is my first time making a cririque. i think it was great... everything was perfect even that silly little ponys die fom drinking water joke i hope you like my critique e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
oh and i like celestias face at panel 1 though panel 2 good job at this comic
EDIT: you are too awsome and i love love love love this comic too much!
Second edit: im just doing this much edits becouse it wont let me turn it in until its been used a certain amount of words so i hope this works this time i do it.
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I'm sorry, but this is a way too short to apply as critique. To be honest at it - it's non-constructive also. Good luck with your future critiques, whenever they will land
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its ok.I understand.Not many people like me and i predicted it would be the same on here
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You are getting it wrong. It's not about YOU, but about way you wrote that critique. I sure you could write more about that comic, stick to subject, what you like and what don't, strengths and weaknesses of that comic, add your own thoughts about matter, don't write you're putting words in there only to meet minimum words count. I KNOW you can do better. In a past I have been accepting that kind of critiques, but everyone can learn and improve, by listening to feedback and critics. And if you predicted it would be same here - you wouldn't write that critique... so you CAN do better. And remember, that no one like you - it's the way YOU (and only) you think. Cheers!
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Well, this is my first critique, so I doubt 90% of you guys will ignore this. Anyway, here's what I have to say.
The comic is really well drawn, the outline and colours and all. It has originality too. One of the most hilarious Trollestia comics I have ever read! The technique is good too. Of course, the ponies are really cute!!!!!!! It really has a great impact on people after they read this. Reminding themselves not to fall for a trick that others say that your water is poisoned and you are going to die and all. Oh Trollestia.... a.deviantart.net/avatars/t/r/t⦠" alt=" " title="trollestiaplz" />
I'm done here. Crappy critique by the way....
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Thank you for critique. By the way, never admit you think your work/job/words are crappy. People tends to ignore such ramblings, and person as well. Live with full ambition, please. It's the one of the most important thing I've learnt on DeviantArt. Cheers!
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Hehehe thanks for the advice.
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It's actually 99.999something percent; Celestia herself drinks water too :3
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TH3Y S33 M3H TR0LL1NG.
TH3Y H4T1NG.
4ND TH3Y P4TR0L1NG TRY1N T4 C4TCH M3H R1D1NG D1RTY.
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Of course, we all drink water and we're all going to die Β
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Oh, Celestia... I see what you did there... 
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...For some reason, Trollestia reminds me of snivy.
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OK, so far I've read only 2 of your comics and have come to the conclusion that you sir are a fan. Am I correct?
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Yes, indeed I am. Do you like her as well?
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you know im going to kill you for this
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I think Celestia is wrong there, Β with 'one hundred percent of ponies who drink water die'. I mean, Celestia also drink water, right?
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Raven: ......... Of course one hundred percent! 'Cause they all end up DYING EVENTUALLY!
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Rosey:lol its true but not 100% luna celestia and cadence Β Β iconlplz:
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Raven: Luna and Celestia can live forever, yes. Cadance, not proven yet. Even if she can, just because their lifespans are endless doesn't mean they can't get killed. All creatures die in the end. Celestia and Luna will die eventually. Ain't that right, Grim?
Grim Reaper: Indeed.
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rosey:yeah i guess so but i wish i couldn't die :3
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Raven: So many people wish for that. However, I tell you this: You do not want to be immortal.
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Raven: So I can assume you know why?
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yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyeeup
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That epic Trollestia grin in the last panel.
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