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Published: 2013-03-22 00:22:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 119; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 1
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Guys, I did it! My first successful attempt at watercolor! <333Sorry about the photo, it's too big for my scanner to scan it.
Critiques and comments are always appreciated! ^^
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Those mountains! ;D;
Very nice, especially for a first try at watercolor! ^_^
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Thank you! <333
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Thanks so much~
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Critiques and comm- alright, that means I may critic it! lol, it's a minor critic though, because there are not many errors, it is really good! 
The first thing that is noticeable to me is the sky; the brown splotches confuse me, and with the clouds in the sky, I don't know if the sun is almost done setting, or if it is still high in the sky. This is because the dawn/dusk color makes it look like it is setting, but then the lighting of the clouds throws me off. This is because the lighting of the clouds is positioned at the top of the clouds, though, if the sun was setting, wouldn't the top of the clouds be darker than the bottom? That is it though, I personally love the extra natural things you added to the front of the painting like the flower. It is the first think that caught my eye, so it caused me to become interested and look at the rest of it. First impression is everything! I love it though! Just amazing!
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Yay~<3 thank you!
Haha, the 'brown' splotches are blimps from the city. Not that I made that too clear.
Haha...whoops. Didn't think about that. That makes sense, it was supposed to be setting.
Thanks! ^^ Im glad the flower is eye-catching! <333
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No Problem!
Alright, that would be a good thing to make more clear, lol.
Alright!
No problem!
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