Comments: 39
KajAsl0lvir [2016-05-14 00:11:46 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
Suggestions:
The tail could use more work, it kinda looks like it'd be impractical in combat.
The head could be slightly bigger, it seems like it's brain would be too small to send messages to the rest of it's body.
Arm's could get a slight upscale as well.
The color pallets could do with a change, it kinda makes the texture seem cement like, not. Scale like
Now onto the good parts of this:
I liked the design as a whole, with a few bits that iff me.
It actually looks like a Kaiju that could fit in the Godzilla universe.
It could stand out as it's own version of Godzilla, like Space Godzilla, and the other re-enditions (save for Zilla)
Otherwise, it was pretty good, with a few minor kinks that could easily be tweaked
For Originality: I have to give it a 3, since there's so many versions of Godzilla it's hard to find something that hasn't been done
For technique: I give it a 4.5 since it looks like a kaiju that would fit in that universe.
For Vision: I give a 4, since I can see what you were going for.
For impact: I give a 5, since it's a real relief to find some decent worthwhile art that isn't the most disproportioned, cliche design, like so many other deviantart users make when drawing/painting.
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Travonstatus [2017-10-08 04:31:24 +0000 UTC]
very well doneΒ
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Zainaku [2017-09-15 04:23:12 +0000 UTC]
Man it bring back some old memory of that monster XD
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Godless-dreamer [2016-08-21 02:18:05 +0000 UTC]
"a monster? no,a god"
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KajAsl0lvir [2016-05-14 05:52:05 +0000 UTC]
I'm a bit surprised that my critique actually got accepted
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ERIC-ARTS-inc In reply to KajAsl0lvir [2016-05-14 15:17:45 +0000 UTC]
Whys that? I didn't get an opportunity to comment because I was tired last night and passed out. But I think it was informative, insightful, and helpful for making the design better. You pointed out things that could use tweaks, and even what may work better for the concepts over all impact. Given the popularity and prominence of the character. So yeah why wouldn't I accept such an awesome critique?
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KajAsl0lvir In reply to ERIC-ARTS-inc [2016-05-14 15:36:47 +0000 UTC]
Cause most of the time when I tell someone that their art could use work, they'd get super salty and send their white knights after me for telling them their at could use some improving
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ERIC-ARTS-inc In reply to KajAsl0lvir [2016-05-15 03:59:01 +0000 UTC]
Well, I am of the mind that only through constructive critiques can one grow as an artist.
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KajAsl0lvir In reply to ERIC-ARTS-inc [2016-05-16 01:17:19 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the watch by the way, I appreciate it
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alienator65 [2016-04-27 15:52:46 +0000 UTC]
I think his head looks a little small but it is good
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ilTassista [2016-04-16 07:36:00 +0000 UTC]
very cool
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Lunoxius [2016-04-16 07:23:44 +0000 UTC]
That looks amazing. There so much detail on it!Β
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