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Published: 2013-10-25 14:27:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 21387; Favourites: 190; Downloads: 90
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I'm quite more satisfied with this page than with the previous one... I'm sorry there is no Garrus here, but hey, there's Tali!
As for Miranda, I wanted to show that she and Shepard have been clashing since the beginning, as both are used to be in command.
I'm still using XNAlara as references for the panels, and also Mara3D and Handy apps. They are proving to be awesome!
Thanks to for his beta-read!
Chapter 12 - Unexpected
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Wow. You did an AMAZING job on Tali in this. She looks fantastic.
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Thank you so much! I'm glad you like Tali in this one
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Does it? Could you point our what exactly? I'll be glad to know to avoid the same mistake in future pictures
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nothing major, only the tilting makes it look like Miranda is the one delivering a berating.
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AAahhh... Ok. Now I see what you mean and the panel leads also to that interpretation. I didn't notice before. Thank you for pointing it out so I can keep an eye on future panels
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Ey, no problem. If it means more badass story-telling, I'll be glad to nag you to the end of times
Just kidding, keep calm and carry on.
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Shepard will not take any of your shit, Miranda >8D
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Nope, she won't
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Tali Tali Tali Tali! 
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Thanks!! I'm happy that you think that ^^
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So I decided to re-read this to see if my opinion had changed, but it hasn't. This page is beautiful, but there is ione issue that really bothers me. The issue is with Miranda's face in the fourth panel. It just doesn't look quite like her as the other panels do. I think it's the shading. I'm not saying it doesn't look good per se; it's just that it doesn't look the best with regards to resemblance. Otherwise, I love this page as much as any other. I especially love that I can see Tali's face silhouette in her visor! Please keep up the amazing work!
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Mmmm... I've been checking Miranda in that panel and you may be right in the shadow hypothesis... I'll try to pay more attention to that one in future pages (thank you for pointing it out!).
Thanks!! I was a little worried when I started to draft Tali here because I had to rely more on her body language and just a hint of her eyes shape. But it's being quite interesting to do it this way ^^
Thanks a lot for following the story!
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I'm loving this comic for so many reasons! The art is gorgeous. They look like the characters in game, but a lot more realistic than game rendering looks (does that make sense? I dunno. Let me try again.) I think your art makes them look more like a stylized photo than animated character. (Better? XD)
Your story line so far is so good too. Not just spitting out the game's timeline and rounding it out so nicely. It's like the best fanfiction in comic form.
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Thanks a lot for that comment!!!
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This is better then the game. And you only getting started.
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I love what you have done with MIranda's hair in the last panel. This whole story shows your skills increasing and increasing. hope you update soon!!!! 
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Thanks! I like drawing long hair, but doing that in this story is kind of difficult
There's a new update, I hope you like it!
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I love that you captured Tali's movements and body-language so well.
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Is it going to end up in a cat fight?
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That I'll let you see...
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I like Miranda and all, but its nice to see her ass get handed to her lol, other than that I am loving your illustrations! It spurs something in me to get into this kind of thing. I'm so glad i found this fanfic bless youuuu lol
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Yay! Another reader who is keen on Miranda! I must say I don't like her too much, but I don't hate her either.
Thanks a lot for your comment! I'm happy that you like it ^^
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And now I've caught up with you.
I was kinda hoping that this wouldn't happen.
I know that it's unfair the author, but don't like reading in progress stories.
I feel so bad about making people wait for updates that until my current story, I was finished or close to it when I started to post. That way I would post regularly until the end.
I guess I'll have to put a watch on you then. 
BTW, I like the angle you took on the second to last panel.
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Yes, (un)fortunately, you have. Believe me, I'd like to have this finished a long while ago, but what started as a little project, has grown spectacularly.
I don't think it's unfair, we all have our preferences
Thank you for the watch! I hope you enjoy the rest, even if it's uploaded at a slow pace
Thanks again! I'm quite happy with that panel, I think it breaks a little the pace and give a little dynamism to the dialogue.
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Ohh Wow!
Your art is fantastic.
Its so good. Much better then your early pages.
Everything about this page is perfect!
I really love the blue you used to illustrate a flash back.
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Thank you!!
I'm quite happy with this page, I'll try to keep this style for the rest of the story... Let's see if I can do it!
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Your welcome! This is a great improvement from the look of the very first page you did.
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Thanks!! I'm glad you think that ^^
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me encanta! it's wonderfull! i' ve spend this afretnoon reading your work and i'm so happy to find a comic dedicated to my favourite pairing :3. Thank you very very much
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Gracias!!! I'm glad that you've found it and that you've enjoyed the reading so much. Thank you for reading! (Puedes escribir en español si quieres, entiendo ambos 
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ajajaja, ok! mucho más fácil
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Thank you for reading it!
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Hey there Ersbeth!
I no longer posses my LisuPoland account, but I'm back to browse DevArt from time to time
It's great to see you continue your work on your outstanding comic!
Best Comic on DevArt
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Hi there!
I'm sorry to hear that you've lost the account, I hope nothing too bad happened.
Thanks for that one!!
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No problem
Keep up the great work
As we all wait for the next Mass Effect game it's always nice to have a quality fanart content on the way
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I'll do my best!
Indeed! We have to keep the interest in the series
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Hahahaha! I loved the last panel, how Aryen answered Miranda 
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