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Estelli — Memory of Two by-nc-nd
Published: 2007-11-05 15:59:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 156; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description Walk towards the sun, and melt away.
Walk towards his partner, his wave will delay.
The sharpest stab you've given me,
The deadly grasp you came to see,
Pierces through my heart and as it bleeds,
You lie there with a smile of the day.

Walk towards the moon, a shiver goes down your spine.
Walk towards the other, his hand once touched mine.
The verdict will be oh severe,
The result have me shed a tear,
I'm stained away although I have fear,
You bring the light that will never shine.

Walk towards neither, nothing is there.
Emotions are dead, just an endless stare.
The burning eyes you stare with fire,
You sank your teeth but I admire,
The razor-sharp teeth of a vampire,
You cry to sleep for once I don't care.

Run far from the sun, run far from the moon.
Run away run away I will not return soon.
My head's corroding, all set to burst,
My veins filled with venom, call the nurse,
My reposed muscles will see that the hearse,
I'm driving will crash but I will be immune.

Invulnerable to the dark or light.
Delete my memory, remove my sight.

My body sleeps like a tarnished sheet.
'Cause without you, I'm incomplete.
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Comments: 4

Rocul [2007-11-14 16:23:05 +0000 UTC]

I really like this one XD although there are parts where the rhythm breaks, like this one

You sank your teeth but I admire,
The razor-sharp teeth of a vampire,

(don't mind this comment though, I don't know jack about poetry, I just like how things sound when I read it out aloud... the vampire line sounds as if it's like missing a syllable or something)... but it's still good The last four lines are really nice. I can't stop reading them out loud

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Estelli In reply to Rocul [2007-11-14 17:15:20 +0000 UTC]

WOOT lol yea some lines have me wondering if i should stick a word in there or something but meh. thanks for reading them out loud! They sound better that way lol ^__^

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AustN-Acer [2007-11-05 16:10:49 +0000 UTC]

I like the rythme!

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Estelli In reply to AustN-Acer [2007-11-05 19:01:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I like it too XD

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