Mashimoshi [2010-09-24 18:02:17 +0000 UTC]
Wow... you're awesome.
And your writing is good as always! You always know what you're doing and what you're trying to get in the stories.
This sounds so sad and realistic, not even to mention... true... because everything you wrote is kinda like that nowadays...
But I hope that they are okay <3
And you wrote nice real facts about them too, like how Bill said that he feels more free when he's inside a car.
I especially liked the ending, about his younger years, what he thought then and what he had become now.
So sad and awesome <3
I would like to help but I'm not really good at English :S
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