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oj1001 [2022-02-05 13:07:50 +0000 UTC]
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manati20 [2021-05-03 01:21:38 +0000 UTC]
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WhIppIng-b0y [2019-09-18 23:44:01 +0000 UTC]
My favorite has to be the one in the middle, though the chameleon is also very cool.
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Kinkorhyncha [2017-12-18 18:31:17 +0000 UTC]
Where are the raptor's wings?
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Eternal-Shadow-S In reply to Kinkorhyncha [2017-12-18 21:11:40 +0000 UTC]
It's the feathers on the elbows. Tried to make them small.
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CLCanadyArts [2017-06-03 02:46:42 +0000 UTC]
YES! These are fantastic.
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sailorscoutmike [2017-06-01 16:03:24 +0000 UTC]
I'm still trying to figure out why they feel flat. I don't know why because they make sense, and nothing looks wrong might be the back ground.
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DracoGale [2017-05-31 18:51:03 +0000 UTC]
These are really good, you can see what reptiles they're supposed to resemble and they all share the same style. I like all the stripes too, these are really good! The only thing that's slightly off and bothering me is the raptor's left side of his chest. It looks a little too smooth and round compared to the hard and sharp planes on the right side, almost kind of femalish. It's not too bad but my eye keeps drifting to it.
Other than that, really nice work!
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Eternal-Shadow-S In reply to DracoGale [2017-06-01 00:07:10 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Yeah, someone pointed out that the Raptor's chest did look like a woman's.Β
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foxythepiratesanss [2017-05-31 12:10:42 +0000 UTC]
Hi Im here from ProjectComment likeΒ IstranderΒ and I'm here because of the give and get 2 Comments thingy so I saw this and it was cool to me soooooooo....... Cool :3 Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β
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CageyJay [2017-05-31 01:38:30 +0000 UTC]
The attitudes conveyed in these come through wonderfully strongly, and it is very cool that you have matched their hunting styles to their postures.
One part that rather... pointedly needs improvement on these particular lizard-men is the shape of their highlight stripes. You did so much good work with the shading and vivid colors to give them volume, and the stripes on Mr. O'Dile maintain that. But on Mr. Tor the stripes on his right side (observed) look very straight, making his arm and tail rather flat in appearance. And on Mr. Leon, the stripes everywhere but the base of his tail are straight enough to make him look flat. Just a little bit of reworking for curvature, to wrap the stripes around the limbs, would quickly return your illusion of depth.
I'm very much a fan of your ground shadows. You obviously put a lot of consideration of how the shapes of the lizard-men would make them appear from a high angle. Nice work on those.
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Eternal-Shadow-S In reply to CageyJay [2017-05-31 02:27:49 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Regarding the stripes, I will admit that they may seem a bit off. I originally had no intention of putting stripes, but when I accidentally smeared a line on, I thought that maybe I ought to put. Thanks for the advice, though.
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CageyJay In reply to Eternal-Shadow-S [2017-05-31 02:43:51 +0000 UTC]
Ah. I see. Well, the idea of the stripes is great!
Thanks for the response, and also for being such a good sport about critique.
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