harukakimiko [2006-06-17 04:15:10 +0000 UTC]
I like this poem a lot. I especially love the two lines Thinking of the time we had together. The time we had before I became no more.I have those feelings some time but can't write them down. You should check some of the spelling and the words past tense and future tense....(I'm not good with english terms) ex. become and became...stuff like that. You did a good job, keep up the good work!
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