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Miketheweird [2010-01-04 11:13:26 +0000 UTC]
Very Nice
Wish I could draw even 1/50th as well =]
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Mistgod [2009-12-30 08:13:16 +0000 UTC]
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katapraktoi [2008-02-25 19:52:35 +0000 UTC]
Hi David, its been a long time since I commented on one of your works (or anything here, I have been out of deviantart for a while like I said in my journal of one hundred pages )
Anyway, I like this one a lot. The other versions are maybe more elaborated, but you can see the rawness of your hand work here, and I appreciate it of the traditional art.
About the art itself, the tower is really impressive, a really imposing sight an its awesome how you managed to represent it using proportions and composition... a centered composition of "lone" element (lone because its the only object of its size) always works in my book!The birds are a nice touch, I liked them a lot.
I dont have much to criticize, perhaps more confidence in your lines, but thats all I could critique and is not really a bad thing here...
Good Work!!
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weathermanoc [2008-01-22 08:18:08 +0000 UTC]
"Nice tower...you think I can use it to..." Rush is interrupted.
"Didn't Mom ground you from messing with ANYMORE towers after what happened last time???" asked James.
"Oh yeah...you know for some reason they are still mad at me for making it lean!?" says Rush innocently.
"Wow, who knew huh," says James sarcastically.
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weathermanoc In reply to EthalenSkye [2008-01-24 14:45:50 +0000 UTC]
lol, I knew you'd like that -- I think I will!! -- stand by for more!
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ExAbrupto [2008-01-21 19:17:42 +0000 UTC]
" Suddenly, what seemed to be a small breeze transformed into a mini-tornado under the very gaze of Ogden the Great. The silhouette of what looked like an old man appeared out of nothingness and made its way in front of the campfire. The humanoid shadow seemed to play a game of hide and seek with the light and the darkness surrounding an amazed and puzzled Ogden. Who... Or what is it? Flames were twisting and turning and crawling and flickering and vanishing into the darkness until the only light remaining was from Ogden's ever-shining sword. He stood up, facing what seemed to be a being of pure evil ( well, it stank a lot, and to Ogden, that was enough to label it as "evil" ).
" Who may you be, old man? " asked Ogden, greatly impressed by the old man's introduction, yet facing him without any fear.
" Who I am is none of your concern, Ogden. "
" How do you know my name, who are you? "
" DAMNIT I TOLD YOU THIS IS NOT IMPORTANT... but the question you might really want to ask is this: Who entered this holy tower? Who may HE be... Or "It" be... Yes... "
The old man seemed to know a lot of things. Ogden's stupidity couldn't let him say anything smart, so he let the old man explain everything.
" This being, this very flame you saw, it is an old man, older than I. His name is Kriss. "
" That's it? Kriss? "
" Yes. Kriss Kringle. He is also known as Santa Claus. "
" Santa what? "
" Never heard of him? "
" Nope. "
" Well, every christmas he rides on his magical sleigh with his deers and he gives presents to the children of the world. "
A half-drunk soldier came and joined the conversation.
" Well, my two sons, Ulfgren, Ragnok and even my sweet little daughter Arlaine never got any gifts from that Santa guy. I think you're just yet another old man searching for spare change. WELL YOU CAN SHOVE IT. " yelled the fat and ugly soldier. He had a big beard and some chicken meat could be seen here and there through his facial hair. For every two or three words coming out along his fetid breath, some saliva would find its way out of his mouth. His eyes were round and small, pretty much like a guinea pig. "His", but it could easily have been "It", given his physical appearance and horrid behavior. His name was Barney. Barney was such a pain in the ass. But alas, his father was Robert de la Roche, a famous lawyer of Palinroe, and he could never be thrown out of the army, how idiotic he might be. Most of the soldiers were already fueled with what remained of the finest ale and some drunk-yards had been listening to the conversation. About 40 men in all were staring at the evolving situation.
" Who is this impudent speck? " asked the old man.
" That's- "
" I CAN HANDLE MYSELF OGDEN!!! " Barney was really angry now. " I'm Barney, second in command. I'm the guy who's in charge of kicking old men in the throat! "
" How rude. I stand right there, a simple, unarmed old man, naked under my thin robe, with no muscles, no money and, and... and you dare threaten me!? "
Ogden quickly came between both sides, ending the argument by drawing his luminous blade.
" GENTLEMEN! Gentlemen... Do calm down. We are not mere barbarians. We are soldiers, we have been educated with pride for ourselves and respect for others and we have been employed to protect the law and thus we must obey the law. There will be no bloodshed here... Bring the old man in the sand pit so he can be devoured alive by the giant spiders of Lorthon. "
" You'll pay for this Ogden! " angrily cried the old man. Some soldiers took the old man away. Worried, Barney came to Ogden with haste.
" Ogden, I don't like that tower and that Santa guy. "
" Me neither, Barney, but what can we do about it? "
" Let's destroy that goddamn tower. I never liked it anyway. It's attracting those pigeons and I got many complaints from soldiers who got shit on their helmets. "
" Yeah. Bring the catapults! ""
And this, alas, was the last day the brilliant tower of Aleth Hult stood still. Oh... And it was also the day Santa Claus died.
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ExAbrupto In reply to EthalenSkye [2008-01-24 03:55:58 +0000 UTC]
I enjoyed it so much I believe I'll do more of this in the upcoming days. I hate ordinary comments so I'm doing my best at doing something original that's worth the time and skills the artist ( in this case; YOU ) took and used for making his/her artwork.
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Vadrielith [2008-01-20 15:58:31 +0000 UTC]
so beauty!
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Isil22 [2008-01-20 09:41:19 +0000 UTC]
I love IT!!!!!
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galeclaw [2008-01-20 01:09:46 +0000 UTC]
One word....BEAUTIFUL!
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Fennilyn [2008-01-20 00:29:06 +0000 UTC]
I love it! Breathtaking work here, my friend. I wish I had the patience to do landscapes.
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creeps2002 [2008-01-20 00:17:03 +0000 UTC]
Wow - that is absolutley amazing!!
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