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EugeneCh — Fanmanga TO RETURN part 1-13
Published: 2004-09-29 17:26:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 5620; Favourites: 43; Downloads: 1290
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Always thanks to my English Sensei, ~irk
We talked about usage of "You". Like Japanese, there are some variations of "You" in Korean. In this scene, we replaced Zel's saying "You" with "Lina", since we couldn't find any other good English words having appropriate meanings and emotions: Zel's full of angry and heart-wrenching mood.
(Actually the levitation spell nearly worked. The flashback took only a short time...)
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I can almost feel Zel's pain in this page. You do such a wonderful job of expressing him. I love the way he looks in the first frame. X3
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fav first, continuity later ^^ 👍: 0 ⏩: 0
His expressions is ... whoa... i dn't know what to say - I love this ^^ 
Lovely way to wake up tho Sword righ by your head.
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Already, the first panel gets to me XD Love the speed lines...whew, that is one close call, Zel XD I'm hooked by the look in his eye as he wakes up 
I like how the panels switch from full or half-body shots and then go for a close up of the face XD Zel's hair...omg, it's gorgeous
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Oh yeah, that's frenzied. ^.^ Thanks a lot for checking! ^____^
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The first image (zel embracing Lina, closeup) is ver beautiful! Lovely scene, and the kiss (later) is awesome too! I'm commenting everything on this page ^_^!!! How can you do manga so well?! Last time I've tried it came out a total mess!
And I'm going to fav that page I like so much....(cause I keep staring at it, but that's a secret... :3)
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Thank you very much 
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AWWWWWWWWWW!!! Poor lina...*ish depressed now* ............ u drew Lina so well on making her look like she's in shock!!! And u did an awesome job on the english and Zel's worried expressions!! +fav!!! It's soooo pretty^^
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Hahaha I depend my English expression on ~irk after second posting of this fanmanga...That's why it looks alright THank you~
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... seeing them lying there is so sweet, despite the situation. I really like how you draw Lina when she is "zoned out"... it really shows.... how out of it she is....
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Oh you noticed that? Zel's very hot also when he looks be weak as well as strong...XD
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Ouch...they hit ground?! I'm suprised that Zel ain't sporting any broken bones...
Wow...and TALK ABOUT A CLOSE SHAVE! That's a LOVELY thing to wake up to! A sword not an inch away from your face!
And ahhh....the angst...LINA MUST WAKE UP~!!
*squeals at the amount of Zel/Lina-ness*
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Eh, Not really....The nearly worked levitation spell absorbed the collision, I think 
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Curse DA! (for the moment) They'll only let you put up a page at a time!!! I wish I could just read it all through...like a book...or something...!!!
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OMG... That's SO beautiful! The emotion in this page is STUNNING!! Zel looks so worried about her! ;_;
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