bluespike56 [2019-07-13 00:50:51 +0000 UTC]
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Love the progression especially around the lighting and shading. There's something a bit off with the perspective though. Looking at her left arm, it looks like you inadvertently shortened it. The perspective implies that the view is above her eyeline (looking at her legs), but her torso is facing the viewer. Giving the impression that she's bending backwards while keeping her legs straight.It looks like you've set the length to her waist but with how the waist is showing and the position of the viewer, the length looks too short to be looking down on her, but it's okay if you were facing her straight on.The right arm looks great and is proportional.
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EuphoricVoice In reply to bluespike56 [2019-07-13 08:12:29 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
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TheTubich [2019-05-19 18:45:10 +0000 UTC]
Great progression
EuphoricVoice In reply to TheTubich [2019-05-19 20:41:29 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!I hope to continue in the same vein
TheTubich In reply to EuphoricVoice [2019-05-19 20:50:04 +0000 UTC]
Welcome <3