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Anselmeth [2010-10-12 16:54:37 +0000 UTC]

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it is a rather beautiful woman. My focus goes directly towards the eyes. i think that there should be more depth when it comes to the shadows and lights. it makes it a little bland the way you have excecuted the light/shadow department. Don`t be afraid to go darker. i like how sharp the nose is and i also like the details in the eye area. the eyebrows are spot on. Also the mouth is rather good. overall the anatomy of the face is correct it`s just the details that needs more work.

you are on a very good way, my tip is that you look at pictures of people in certain light and then study that light. go to the extreme. That makes it better when you draw something more neutral as well.

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VOGUEdarling [2010-10-13 12:09:12 +0000 UTC]

This is a beautiful piece of work. The eyes immediately draw you in. They speak of truth and life - they manage to tell a life story by saying so much yet so little.
You are truly a talented artist... Keep up the paintings/drawings and photography!

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Ella-kayleigh [2010-10-12 16:36:15 +0000 UTC]

I'm a bit nervous about giving a proper big critique so i'll just do one in a comment box instead.
This is very good! I can see a lot of work has cone into the eyes and nose and the hair looks quite.. well "hair-like!"
(I am very envious of your shadowing skills by the way. I'm still trying to perfect mine xD)
The eyes to me however look slightly too big but I think the main issue is the lack of detail from the neck down.. but it's look good! great work! C:

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Stile87 [2010-09-30 14:05:51 +0000 UTC]

Nicely done, very eye-catching.

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