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MLP FIM Fancomic The last adventure Chapter 6: Shattered heart

I didn't plan to post this page today but there something I need to talk about. For some time some people think that I was inspired/ I copied comic The heart of the draconequus by because TLA and HoD have some similarities like timberwolves. I knew this comic exist. I've seen the last few pages of this comic ( I guess??? ). The worst thins is that I don't remember if it was before I've made the first TLA pages or after. I remember that I watched version with dubbing on YT in December 2019 and I liked this story. I swear that when I got to know the whole comic I tried to make TLA as less similiar as possible. But I couldn't change some scenes since the script for the whole TLA was done and If I changed them then TLA would lost it's sense. Like Discord's death scene. What inspired me to create TLA were the first and last episodes of season 9 (such moments like the scene where "Discord was hurt by Sombra"). I began to wonder what would happen if Discord really died, sacrificed himself and did something heroic. But now I just feel bad that people thinks so.

 

But both comics have also differences. TLA is about Discord and his feelings for Fluttershy, about immortality and his fears: outliving Fluttershy and his other friends. Discord lost his powers much earlier than in the middle of the comic and I choose Timberwolves because they were easiest villians for me to "play". And Chimera was their boss. Chimera had magical medallion with dangerous monster inside it. Chimera poisoned Discord with veom. And fights was the main part of this comic. Fighting and running from Chimera and Timberwolves through the woods began on the 70th page of the comic. And Discord is REALLY DEAD. There's won't be cliche Hey I'm alive magic of love and friendship bring me back to life! : /



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The last adventure: MLP FIM Fancomic: The last adventure cover

Discord's journey through Death: Discord's journey through Death cover

Forest Spirits: FS cover

Team X: Team X cover


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Comments: 166

fendercruz [2022-11-07 02:50:19 +0000 UTC]

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Eveeka In reply to fendercruz [2022-11-07 08:46:25 +0000 UTC]

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fendercruz In reply to Eveeka [2022-11-08 00:02:40 +0000 UTC]

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Victorfazbear [2021-12-04 06:44:48 +0000 UTC]

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Eveeka In reply to Victorfazbear [2021-12-10 11:51:57 +0000 UTC]

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Pony4Koma [2021-06-27 14:58:53 +0000 UTC]

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Victorfazbear In reply to Pony4Koma [2021-12-04 06:44:59 +0000 UTC]

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eemoo1o [2021-03-31 13:40:33 +0000 UTC]

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Eveeka In reply to eemoo1o [2021-03-31 14:57:06 +0000 UTC]

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eemoo1o In reply to Eveeka [2021-03-31 15:09:19 +0000 UTC]

If you watch Mufasa’s death.... — I see no difference ... well, except that one was platonic (hopefully)

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Eveeka In reply to eemoo1o [2021-03-31 17:26:25 +0000 UTC]

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eemoo1o In reply to Eveeka [2021-03-31 17:58:05 +0000 UTC]

Definitely not.

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NotMeleeFox [2020-11-04 00:46:50 +0000 UTC]

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Eveeka In reply to NotMeleeFox [2020-11-05 08:58:02 +0000 UTC]

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NotMeleeFox In reply to Eveeka [2020-11-05 11:50:24 +0000 UTC]

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Eveeka In reply to NotMeleeFox [2020-11-05 15:45:07 +0000 UTC]

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NotMeleeFox In reply to Eveeka [2020-11-05 19:05:49 +0000 UTC]

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Eveeka In reply to NotMeleeFox [2020-11-06 10:17:22 +0000 UTC]

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Coolposh [2020-08-20 18:53:36 +0000 UTC]

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Eveeka In reply to Coolposh [2020-08-20 20:20:33 +0000 UTC]

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Batboy101 [2020-08-19 09:38:49 +0000 UTC]

Oh . . . I was into tears of seeing Fluttershy into tears and poor Discord . . . 😭

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Eveeka In reply to Batboy101 [2020-08-27 14:04:45 +0000 UTC]

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fotland42 [2020-04-17 06:32:36 +0000 UTC]

Come on, Flutters. If anypony here knows non-pony species well enough to figure out the right way to resuscitate a dead draconequus, it's you.

So I'd suggest you get to trying before it's too late.

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Eveeka In reply to fotland42 [2020-04-17 06:43:30 +0000 UTC]

I guess it wouldn't help because this magical venom

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tamrahecatebryd [2020-04-12 02:45:55 +0000 UTC]

I love your comic,but not even a little chance ? (´;︵;`)(Sorry,my English is bad...)

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Eveeka In reply to tamrahecatebryd [2020-04-15 17:53:42 +0000 UTC]

Well...we'll see

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kellemarine [2020-04-11 16:30:08 +0000 UTC]

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Eveeka In reply to kellemarine [2020-04-15 17:53:30 +0000 UTC]

Hehe

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Celestial-Rainstorm [2020-04-11 15:56:48 +0000 UTC]

oh shit he ded?!

iwaswonderingwheniwasgoingtogettaggedherelol 

Everyone is inspired by everyone, and the art in this is rather pretty. I've read through it, and its quite a good story! I'm quite flattered you like MY story! I will admit, if I'd written it today and not back in high school, (with hopefully a tad more matured writing) there would be some dramatic drops indeed.....

like flutters ur a vet check the damn pulse 


Can't wait for the next page

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Eveeka In reply to Celestial-Rainstorm [2020-04-11 16:28:17 +0000 UTC]

Yeah ;-;


Ooh I'm glad you like my story ^^    

Just few people keep telling me that I copied your comic. But I'm not even sure when I saw few pages of your comic for the first time. If it was before or after when I started wokring on TLA XD

I know how you feel. I had similiar problem with one of my comic


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Celestial-Rainstorm In reply to Eveeka [2020-04-11 17:10:47 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry that happened to you. I have no qualms whatsoever! They can speak to me if need be. But the emotions here are very well articulated and I love your expression work. Its a beautiful comic! 

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Eveeka In reply to Celestial-Rainstorm [2020-04-15 17:59:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much. I'm okay now And I'm glad that you enyoj my story

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XUhuruX [2020-04-11 14:47:46 +0000 UTC]

We saw Discord in the last episode so........there's a chance he'll live?  

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Eveeka In reply to XUhuruX [2020-04-15 17:52:30 +0000 UTC]

If I tell you this will be a spoiler

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tamrahecatebryd In reply to XUhuruX [2020-04-12 02:15:44 +0000 UTC]

I think so.

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animalman57 [2020-04-11 08:00:41 +0000 UTC]

I'll say this, I noticed a couple similarities to Heart of the Draconequus now that you mentioned it, but I never once thought you were ripping him off. The stories are very different. For one, in Heart of the Draconequus, Discord's relationship with Flutters is more ambitious, though there was lots of ship teases. On top of that, a lot of time in Heart of the Draconequus was spent on Discord's backstory and the pain he feels from his mother's death, while yours never touched that subject, minus a brief reference to his "ex" Cosmos. There is also an actual villain in your story with the Chimera, while Heart of the Draconequus was more about Discord's struggles with his past and thinking he's a threat to everypony around him. Yeah, you had Discord protects Flutters from Timberwolves, but I noticed lots of Discord facfics have him protect Fluttershy from Timberwolves, like Bride of Discord, and a few others. Plus, as you said, this death will be for forever, not a copout (though if done well like in Heart of the Draconequus, a copout death isn't bad). So I don't see any reason to compare the two. They have similarities, but not enough to claim ripoff. At least, that's my two cents.

Also.....😢

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Eveeka In reply to animalman57 [2020-04-15 17:50:57 +0000 UTC]

Copout death isn't bad but this a overused cliche And I see a lot of people are tired of it

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Celestial-Rainstorm In reply to animalman57 [2020-04-11 15:57:27 +0000 UTC]

^ Basically sums it up!! 


also you're sweet lol thanks 

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animalman57 In reply to Celestial-Rainstorm [2020-04-11 20:03:50 +0000 UTC]

No problem for the compliment.

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Megy26 [2020-04-11 06:38:34 +0000 UTC]

Oml I love the expressions sooo much❤️❤️👍🏻

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Eveeka In reply to Megy26 [2020-04-15 17:51:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^^

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VagabondHeartt [2020-04-11 06:03:04 +0000 UTC]

Nie przejmuj się zarzutami- Ci, co chcą się przypieprzyć, zawsze się przypieprzą. O wszystko. Ja olałam, bo szkoda życia na takich.

Kiedyś miałam dramę z jedną panną, której przeszkadzało, że moja postać to biały lew o rumuńskim imieniu Alexandru. Bo jest biały i ma tak na imię, a jej smocza postać jest biała z imieniem Alexander. I wogóle wszystko było dla niej zerżnięte od niej.Albo laska, co uczyła innych smoczej anatomii...Tacy się wszędzie znajdą. Rób swoje, nie przejmuj się niczym.

Co do komiksu- Kude, biedny Discord, choć mam przeczucie, że będzie żył. Chyba nie złamiesz serca małej Flutter, prawda?

PRAWDA????


XD

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Eveeka In reply to VagabondHeartt [2020-04-15 17:51:49 +0000 UTC]

O matko jedyna współczuję ci XD


Ano zobaczymy XD

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VagabondHeartt In reply to Eveeka [2020-04-16 07:22:24 +0000 UTC]

E, stare czasy, ale wiesz...nadal bawi XD

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Eveeka In reply to VagabondHeartt [2020-04-17 07:09:35 +0000 UTC]

No i dobrze xD

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VagabondHeartt In reply to Eveeka [2020-04-17 10:53:46 +0000 UTC]

XD

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arago3 [2020-04-11 02:35:52 +0000 UTC]

Since she mentions the other comic, I must say that you remember to put Pinkie Pie's hair straight, since the second memory (and I hope you'll forgive me if I'm wrong), she is sad because her hair becomes smooth.    

I'm using google translator .

By the way, I love your comic, I think this ending makes it special.

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Alabandra [2020-04-11 00:36:03 +0000 UTC]

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Eveeka In reply to Alabandra [2020-04-15 17:47:18 +0000 UTC]

It's okay ^^

They will be traumatized lol

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Aurychase [2020-04-11 00:25:51 +0000 UTC]

The angst here is so powerful! It feeds my dramatic heart UwU Absolutely stunning!!
The expressions, the coloring and the style. Everything is gorgeous! 
I'm fed :3

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