HOME | DD

EvenDeathLies β€” Her Secret Lies In The Woods

Published: 2010-03-12 15:42:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 2318; Favourites: 49; Downloads: 0
Redirect to original
Description Ok!!! So this deviation has a very long story behind it and it's making!!! Basically I've been struggling to make a "good enough" deviation for the contest from and here it is!! Now, this is the "darker" side that we didn't hear about in the stories about Cinderella. This is her hiding out in the woods finally done brewing a poisonous magical potion which she wants to slip into her evil mother and step-sister's porridge. Wish me luck in the contest guys!!!


-Stock-

Girl: *mizzd-stock
Background: *anaRasha-stock
Magical Brushes: `spiritsighs
Black Birds (also the distant ones): =flordelys
White Bird: *Tasastock

Stock Outside of dA:
Stars: creepydolly.com
Related content
Comments: 16

VisionCat12345 [2014-08-06 11:08:25 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Idea-Picture is great,and so is idea.Honestly,after so many years of abuse,there are only two options:develop inferiority complex or become incredibly cruel.Call me cruel,but I prefer second option.5/5.

Concept-Victim turned avenger,old but still great.It is refreshing to see this character to do so.5/5.
And now,critique of details.


Face-Good,cold look in her eyes gives us clue what she thinks about her step-family and what she is going to do,without regret.However,it's little too much,almost as if she was villain.makeup should go off,she is servant after all. 3/5.

Clothes-Simple and beautiful,but little too new.hard to notice she was servant.2/5.

Birds-Realistical,and nice nod to Grimm's fairy tale.Ones in background are bit blurry.4.7/5.

Bottle-Great,crystal and clear,light seems to take form of flower,butterfly or pixie,I'm not sure,but still great.5/5.

Light-Shining and special effects are incredible.5/5.

Forest-Great and creepy,contrast of dead wood and blooming plants works so well,but transition should be little slower.4.5/5.

Wood-Bare and eerie,like corpse,which her family will soon be.5/5.

Mist-Omnious,it hides her secret well,and adds to mystery of magic.5/5.

Colours-Mostly cold,with warm yet weak in background,showing how abuse took it's toll on her.5/5.


Overall-4.65.Deserved for hard work.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

EvenDeathLies In reply to VisionCat12345 [2014-08-07 14:11:26 +0000 UTC]

wow thank you so much!!! I really appreciate this critique!! It's so refreshing and gratifying to see a critique like this in my inbox. I truly appreciate it so much. Thank you!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

VisionCat12345 In reply to EvenDeathLies [2014-08-07 17:21:22 +0000 UTC]

You deserved it,no need to thank.But I'm not sure did I calculate points precisely,maybe I gave you little less of them in mistake.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

VisionCat12345 [2014-08-03 20:22:12 +0000 UTC]

Idea-Picture is great,and so is idea.Honestly,after so many years of abuse,there are only two options:develop inferiority complex or becomeΒ  incredibly cruel.Call me cruel,but I prefer second option.5/5.

Concept-Victim turned avenger,old but still great.It is refreshing to see this character to do so.5/5.
And now,critique of details.


Face-Good,cold look in her eyes gives us clue what she thinks about her step-family and what she is going to do,without regret.However,it's little too much,almost as if she was villain.makeup should go off,she is servant after all. 3/5.

Clothes-Simple and beautiful,but little too new.hard to notice she was servant.2/5.

Birds-Realistical,and nice nod to Grimm's fairy tale.Ones in background are bit blurry.4.7/5.

Bottle-Great,crystal and clear,light seems to take form of flower,butterfly or pixie,I'm not sure,but still great.5/5.

Light-Shining and special effects are incredible.5/5.

Forest-Great and creepy,contrast ofΒ  dead wood and blooming plants works so well,but transition should be little slower.4.5/5.

Wood-Bare and eerie,like corpse,which her family will soon be.5/5.

Mist-Omnious,it hides her secret well,and adds to mystery of magic.5/5.

Colours-Mostly cold,with warm yet weak in background,showing how abuse took it's toll on her.5/5.


Overall-4.65.Deserved for hard work.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

unmerwe [2010-04-03 00:28:06 +0000 UTC]

very nice..hope you have good contest results!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

EvenDeathLies In reply to unmerwe [2010-04-06 05:13:40 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much ur support is very much appreciated

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

unmerwe In reply to EvenDeathLies [2010-04-06 23:29:52 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

EvenDeathLies In reply to unmerwe [2010-04-06 23:53:43 +0000 UTC]

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

unmerwe In reply to EvenDeathLies [2010-04-07 00:17:22 +0000 UTC]

!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

BabyBlueButterfly [2010-03-27 01:27:25 +0000 UTC]

Great Work! I love this too

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

EvenDeathLies In reply to BabyBlueButterfly [2010-03-27 02:42:11 +0000 UTC]

thank u

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

BohemienFleur [2010-03-21 19:34:36 +0000 UTC]

amazing, really. Love the colors and the concept itself, you really did an amazing job.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

EvenDeathLies In reply to BohemienFleur [2010-03-22 00:21:15 +0000 UTC]

thank u so much!!! That means a lot to me

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

skatechick120 [2010-03-12 15:49:58 +0000 UTC]

love it amazing

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

EvenDeathLies In reply to skatechick120 [2010-03-12 16:07:02 +0000 UTC]

awwww!!! thanks so much!!!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

skatechick120 In reply to EvenDeathLies [2010-03-12 16:52:04 +0000 UTC]

p-leasure
check out my HELLO dev !!!!!!!!
[link]

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0