Comments: 18
deepermeaning17 [2016-02-09 22:00:02 +0000 UTC]
DONT READ THIS. YOU WILL BE KISSED ON THE BEST DAY OF YOUR LIFE. NOW THAT YOU'VE STARTED READING, DONT STOP. THIS IS SO FREAKY. 1 say your name 10 times 2. say your mum's name 5 times and your crushes name 3 times 4. paste this onto 4 other games. If you do this, your crush will kiss you on the nearest Friday possible. But if you read this and do not paste this, you will get bad luck. SEND THIS ON 5 DIFFERENT GAMES IN 143 MINUTES. WHEN YOUR DONE, PRESS F6 AND YOUR CRUSHES NAME WILL APPEAR IN BIG LETTERS. THIS IS SO FREAKY IT ACTUALLY WORKS
mwuhahahaha
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Rukia-sama24 [2012-10-08 18:24:13 +0000 UTC]
Cute story, I liked it ^^
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flamerai [2012-09-23 15:18:01 +0000 UTC]
cool I loved it the very classic Ichiruki fanfic
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apocalyxtic98 [2012-09-17 20:40:53 +0000 UTC]
Aww...so cute. Yes, FTW!! ^^
Your writing style is precise and descriptive, and it has a nice pace. Your use of adjectives keeps the story interesting, and I love how you are able to work multiple elements into the story and then sum it together for a very cute ending.
The only thing I think you could work on would be varying the dialogue a little bit, as it sounds a bit stiff, but other than that this was adorable and one of the best Bleach fan-fics I've read.
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evenstar-lady In reply to anifanatical [2012-09-17 06:51:53 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! I'm glad you like the fic.
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monkycid [2012-09-17 04:48:01 +0000 UTC]
It was really good! Best of luck
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