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everdeen13 — 100 Theme Challenge: Hatred
Published: 2011-06-17 20:34:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 518; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 7
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Description Camie.  Camie Buni.  She was in true love with Peter Holsor.  They'd run to the same forest every day, kissing and laughing.  They'd take a hike, she'd tell the same goofy joke each time.  "Why don't you make like a tree and leaf, Holsor?"  He'd laugh, she'd kiss him.  They had no problems.  They were perfect together.
Camie woke with a gasp in the middle of the night.  She'd had a terrible dream.  Closer to crying then she'd been since they got together, her hand searched along her bedside table for her cell.  She then realized she'd left it in her locker.  I'll go over there, she thought.  After all, he'd given her the key and said to come over anytime.  She got dressed in the dark, pulled on her sneakers, and set off.
She parked her car behind his, and glanced up at his window.  She smiled.  He must've been awake.  Peter never slept until at least three, and it was two.  She pushed the key into the lock and pushed open the door.  Climbing the steep steps up to his room, her footsteps couldn't cover the loud music playing.  This wasn't unusual, but there was something different about the music.  Usually it was upbeat and peppy, now it was soft and sweet.  She opened the door, and found Peter alone.
Well, almost alone.
Yes, he cheated on her.
No, she never forgave him.
You might want to know why I'm telling you something you already know.
Yes, it's me, Camie.  
Yes, I hate you.
No, don't try to say anything.  Nothing will help.  I'll hate you forever no matter what you do.  Yes, I told your new girlfriend Clarissa how much you used to say she annoyed you to high heaven.  Good luck being alone forever.
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Comments: 41

WimpyBookworm101 [2011-08-12 03:36:56 +0000 UTC]

Not bad!!!! I really like it!!!!! D

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everdeen13 In reply to WimpyBookworm101 [2011-08-12 16:33:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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WimpyBookworm101 In reply to everdeen13 [2011-09-13 03:47:35 +0000 UTC]

Your very welcome!

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RavenXNevermore [2011-06-28 20:32:24 +0000 UTC]

This isn't bad, dear. It's actually quite good. The imagery is great. I think it was a bit rushed. Everyone has room for improvement. I enjoyed reading this, very much! as my friend tells me: "You're your own worst critic, dear."

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everdeen13 In reply to RavenXNevermore [2011-06-29 02:03:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for all your kind comments

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roadfullofpromise [2011-06-24 15:57:56 +0000 UTC]

Wow. o.o

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everdeen13 In reply to roadfullofpromise [2011-06-24 16:01:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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xxbreezyoceanxx [2011-06-23 02:12:17 +0000 UTC]

Love ittttt <333333

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everdeen13 In reply to xxbreezyoceanxx [2011-06-23 15:46:51 +0000 UTC]

You inspired me <3

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xxbreezyoceanxx In reply to everdeen13 [2011-06-24 16:30:38 +0000 UTC]

Dawwww glad I could help. xD

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KitFireart1 [2011-06-19 00:56:07 +0000 UTC]

I really like it!

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everdeen13 In reply to KitFireart1 [2011-06-19 01:13:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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KitFireart1 In reply to everdeen13 [2011-06-19 01:16:05 +0000 UTC]

U dont need to write better...

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everdeen13 In reply to KitFireart1 [2011-06-19 01:33:15 +0000 UTC]

Yes i do

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KitFireart1 In reply to everdeen13 [2011-06-19 17:15:10 +0000 UTC]

garsh ur way bttr thn me

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everdeen13 In reply to KitFireart1 [2011-06-19 22:56:55 +0000 UTC]

Aww... Thanks.

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KitFireart1 In reply to everdeen13 [2011-06-19 23:07:53 +0000 UTC]

but u mite need to to get Suzanne Collins good...

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shuckerpea [2011-06-17 23:57:22 +0000 UTC]

I really like it

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everdeen13 In reply to shuckerpea [2011-06-18 00:53:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks And I love your icon.

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shuckerpea In reply to everdeen13 [2011-06-18 02:13:52 +0000 UTC]

Youre welcome. And thank you, L pwns XD

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everdeen13 In reply to shuckerpea [2011-06-18 02:54:07 +0000 UTC]

DEATH NOTE FANS, UNITE!

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shuckerpea In reply to everdeen13 [2011-06-18 19:40:34 +0000 UTC]

OHEMMGEE YES~! lol

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everdeen13 In reply to shuckerpea [2011-06-18 19:45:05 +0000 UTC]

So, is your favorite character L?

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shuckerpea In reply to everdeen13 [2011-06-19 22:04:55 +0000 UTC]

yeah, wbu~?

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everdeen13 In reply to shuckerpea [2011-06-19 22:57:11 +0000 UTC]

Take a good look at my icon and guess XD

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shuckerpea In reply to everdeen13 [2011-06-20 02:18:51 +0000 UTC]

Lol, im stupid *shot* Hahaha. I see now XD

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everdeen13 In reply to shuckerpea [2011-06-20 19:16:00 +0000 UTC]

LOL it's okay. My bro just got DN figurines. ME GUSTA.

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shuckerpea In reply to everdeen13 [2011-06-20 19:44:30 +0000 UTC]

Thats amazing

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everdeen13 In reply to shuckerpea [2011-06-20 19:55:15 +0000 UTC]

And it has bubble wrap. LIFE. MADE.

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shuckerpea In reply to everdeen13 [2011-06-20 19:56:18 +0000 UTC]

Z-oh my goodness, BUBBLE WRAP

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everdeen13 In reply to shuckerpea [2011-06-20 20:03:30 +0000 UTC]

You changed your icon

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shuckerpea In reply to everdeen13 [2011-06-20 20:06:25 +0000 UTC]

yeah... I did. But I still love L, he lives in my heart forever~! Forever, I say.

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everdeen13 In reply to shuckerpea [2011-06-20 20:14:31 +0000 UTC]

Oh well XD

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shuckerpea In reply to everdeen13 [2011-06-20 20:19:54 +0000 UTC]

Lol XD ....forever.... hehe

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MonaParvin [2011-06-17 21:40:51 +0000 UTC]

I like it very nice

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everdeen13 In reply to MonaParvin [2011-06-17 21:45:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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MonaParvin In reply to everdeen13 [2011-06-17 21:50:56 +0000 UTC]

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Jemima947 [2011-06-17 21:38:47 +0000 UTC]

Your writing's not bad ^^

Also Peter ->

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everdeen13 In reply to Jemima947 [2011-06-17 21:40:26 +0000 UTC]

You just made my day

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Sartosis [2011-06-17 21:29:55 +0000 UTC]

well, it's not nearly as bad as you say. We've all got to improve, but your writing is fine

Just remember to constantly read over it. I find that it helps for me...abit anyway, it's a hard thing writing

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everdeen13 In reply to Sartosis [2011-06-17 21:35:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much

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