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Evil-Count-Proteus In reply to Scholarly-Cimmerian [2020-04-17 16:53:32 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the compliment on Tempest's design. The uniform on Cinch is supposed to give a feel of authority and oppression.. The plain tones of the Consortium's uniforms, of black, grey and white, are meant to contrast with the explosion of vibrant colors of the Rainbooms.As for Tempest's bionic eye, she lost her horn in the FiM movie, so I needed an analogue, so I went with her eye, since Humans don't have horns, of course.
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Scholarly-Cimmerian In reply to Evil-Count-Proteus [2020-04-18 01:57:57 +0000 UTC]
No problem. Happy to share my thoughts. It really is an interesting AU you've come up with here. I definitely really like what you've done for the Shadowbolts, Tempest, and Daring Do with this Consortium idea.
And it's... interesting what you've done with Cinch too. I'll admit, I'm not a fan of the "Cinch is Sunny's mother" fanon (mainly because I just can't see her ever taking the time from her job to have a child), but it's not exactly a deal-breaker for me. *shrugs*
Really, the biggest potential criticism I have with this idea about Cinch is the idea of her actually becoming a better person as time goes on. I mean, even if this version of the character *didn't* endanger the world all for a stupid interschool contest, I still find it pretty indefensible that she pushed Twilight to unleash the magic... to what, prove that unleashed magic is dangerous? I find that a pretty self-fulfilling/circular way of thinking; which might fit with her character admittedly, but even so... if I were her boss in the Technological Consortium, I probably would have had her stripped of rank for that stunt just because of the menace that Midnight Sparkle posed to the world. (And that's at a bare minimum. A dark part of me would seriously be considering a firing squad just to make an example to the others, not to follow her example.)
But then again, take all of that with a grain of salt. I have a pretty tough, unsympathetic view of the character based on their original incarnation, and while I *have* read some fics that have given her more depth, I can pretty readily default to "Cinch, you blackmailed your own student all for the sake of a stupid contest. You're an idiot." So, yeah.
Still quite interested to see what else you come up with for this AU though!
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DEMarq [2020-04-15 12:43:19 +0000 UTC]
Waiting for the Dazzling's turn around =^_*=....please?
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Negaboss2000 [2020-04-15 12:27:02 +0000 UTC]
Awesome designs ^^
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RedWolf5207 [2020-04-15 04:08:15 +0000 UTC]
Very nice world-building and new character ideas. Where do you plan to post the story when you start writing it?
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Evil-Count-Proteus In reply to RedWolf5207 [2020-04-15 04:19:10 +0000 UTC]
When I get around to writing it proper, I will be posting it here and on Derpybooru. At the moment I am world building and character designing. I am starting with the main rival/antagonist group since they will be appearing the most out of any of the other rivals/antagonists.
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RedWolf5207 In reply to Evil-Count-Proteus [2020-04-15 04:21:59 +0000 UTC]
How about posting on FimFiction as well? I use that regularly.
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Evil-Count-Proteus In reply to RedWolf5207 [2020-04-15 04:29:11 +0000 UTC]
I forgot that existed. I will have to make a note so I don't forget about it again.
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RedWolf5207 In reply to Evil-Count-Proteus [2020-04-15 04:39:54 +0000 UTC]
I hope so. FimFiction is the go-to place for me to find MLP: FiM fanfics. Plus, there a lots of readers there so finding readers should be good.
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StoneMan85 [2020-04-15 03:57:14 +0000 UTC]
Interesting
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