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Published: 2011-08-06 07:15:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 1897; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 0
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Description This is an illustration of sorts of the two main characters of an erotic story I am, well, struggling to write, for a board not too far from here. So to speak.

I need to refine my technique for going from the pencil sketch to the final pen - not enough solidity and confidence to the pen lines. Anyways...

The big 'un is known by the moniker "Dis", and is regarded, although no one had ever seen her, as an ogress, or some sort of witch. She's a little over 9 feet tall, and built like a brick shithouse. She should be, as she's a huntress.

The li'l 'un is named 'Samantha'. She's 35 1/2" tall, and lives alone as a milkmaid. She's the first person to ever see Dis up close. Like, REALLY close
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TriffRaff [2011-08-06 21:55:16 +0000 UTC]

Its actually a pretty neat art style. Quite a bit of nice detail in the linework.

I like the little one. She's got a very spunky look to her.

But the big one....Seems a bit ill-proportioned. Maybe that's because she's meant to be an ogre, but...Her torso just looks way too long, and her legs way too short.

But the costume details look really neat! They've got a bit of an authentic flair to them. Made-up or inspired by real fashion, they look like they're something that's actually been sewn together.

....The look on Samantha's face, I'm trying to decide if that's just her looking spunky, or if she's in a bit of shock and about to do a double take at the figure behind her....

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EVLWNS In reply to TriffRaff [2011-08-07 04:29:26 +0000 UTC]

Oh no, she's not actually an ogre - that's just what the few people who caught distant glimpses of her thought and said to others. After all, what else would such a huge, man-shaped creature be? But no, she's human, pretty much, just impossibly tall and well-built.

But actually the proportions are just about perfect, by which I mean anatomically typical -> ~3 heads of torso from the beginning of the neck to the bottom of the crotch, and ~3.5 heads of leg to match. That's roughly the way most people are built, with an extra head on top to make 7.5 heads high. Too stocky to adhere to the ideals of feminine beauty (which is ~8 heads high, with ~4 heads of leg - which is why high heels were invented) and their typical artistic depictions, I grant you, but still perfectly average for a human being.

The costumes are inspired by real ones. Samantha's are based on Viking and Victorian common women's garb. Dis's are inspired, in their general aesthetic anyway, by the clothes of peoples of the far north: the Inuit and Native Siberians, for example.

I'm not absolutely sure what the content of the scene is. Whether Samantha is just posing with Dis looking on, amused at her tiny friend's bravado, or whether Samantha doesn't know Dis is there, and Dis is about to remind her...

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TriffRaff In reply to EVLWNS [2011-08-09 23:08:56 +0000 UTC]

Eh, still looks wrong. With her knees so close to the ground...

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