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Ex-Magician — Verdant
Published: 2004-05-09 15:05:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 163; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 14
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I want to pick up plot lineswhere we left them off
the meeting of two
you and i
will require hellos
(and other conversations)
your reflecting eyes
show me something
more than a reflection
and a hue
(like nothing of a color wheel)
something comes to me. admiration
you are alive too, i noticed,
singing like a voice
beaming with every element
i am pressed for words
once more. admiration
i cant imagine what you think of me
happiness enough for me
to follow suit.
once more
i think there is an
understanding between us
i and you
maybe we can meet again
and act out a resolution
sometime.
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Comments: 1
Interesting poem, your use of decription is particulaly effective within the piece. Flow and rhythm are good, the structure is excellent, making it easy for the casual reader to grasp.
Well done.
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