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ExctonIc — Carry My Love
Published: 2012-02-14 22:49:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 9825; Favourites: 505; Downloads: 105
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Carry my heart, not because you need to, but because my heart found you.Carry my dreams, not because you understand, but because my dreams were only about you.
Carry my blood as it was yours, not because I depend on you, but because our blood is sealed.
Carry my body as it was yours, not because I'm gone, but because I will always be with you.
Carry my love through eternity, not because I'm the only one, but because I will always love you.
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Comments: 66
It's so beautiful
I love it, you're writting so well
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Nice one, realy thinging aboat it and try make it like imiges, But every time i try it its a little bit diferent story.
Nice one...
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This is terrible. It doesn't even make sense, it's like a computer program wrote it. I think people were tricked by the preview image. This doesn't even make sense, there's no emotional content, it's just dribble.
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well in that case you are really stupidd. because it makes perfect sense. STUPPIDD! or heartless. probably both though.
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explain it if it makes perfect sense
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woww. okay the main point of this is he/she is telling their lover that although we may not be the ones meant for each other, i still love you.
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You've only explained the last line, the first four don't even make sense.
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oh thats weird. it never sent the last part. let me rewrite. "although we may not be the ones meant for each other, i still love you. So love me back.." happy? or do you need a detailed explanation of every verse?
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I just asked for that dumbass
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u are being a rude piece of shit, u know that? you could've simply said I don't get it, what does it mean instead of saying this makes no sense, a computer must've written it because its just dribble shit.
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OMFG! you are so stupid! ExctonIc simply used the idea of the heart in book because it was valentines and it was a PHOTO FOR A POEM! They even OBVIOUSLY CREDITTED THE OWNER.! You want an explanation? Then stop being bitchy and sarcastic. HERE!
"Carry my heart, not because you need to, but because my heart found you." Carry my heart aka love. Love me, not because you have to, but because I fell for you.
"Carry my dreams, not because you understand, but because my dreams were only about you." Know that my dreams or thoughts are about you; although you may not understand what they are or why I have them, just know they're about you.
"Carry my blood as it was yours, not because I depend on you, but because our blood is sealed." (this is the confusing one for me) Care for me, not because I ABSOLUTELY NEED IT, but because I love you, sealing blood like those obsessive ancient couples.
"Carry my body as it was yours, not because I'm gone, but because I will always be with you." If the couple broke up or one of them died: the gone/dead one says dont ever forget about me, not because I'm gone but because Ill always be with you, idk like a spirit or the gone/dead one will always remember the other one..
"Carry my love through eternity, not because I'm the only one, but because I will always love you." Love me, not because I am "The One", your soul mate, but because I will always love YOU!
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It is dribble shit, why do people get mad when you tell the truth on this site. I mean they steal a preview image that was previously a DD in order to get views, for some generic poem that doesn't make sense. And you still can't explain the poem. If a poem is good, you should be able to explain why it's good. And you insulted me for insulting the crappy poem, you're no better than I am.
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unfortunately the idea is not new.... someone thought of the heart shaped shade before you.
sorry to say it's art theft! (not you but the guy you've credited)
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Words=beauty. This is fabulous, really well written! Simple, yet effective.
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I wish stuff like this didn't end up on the front page.
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wow, great comeback. I am defeated.
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and i wish people like you weren't on dA but you don't hear me complaining 
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yeah so leave him alone and stop commenting on something if you don't like it
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BUT
SOMETHING MUST BE DONE
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yeah its called learning to ignore it
now i think you should say sorry to ExctonIc
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for stating my opinion on his/her poem?
no.
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well maybe ill go and state my opinion on your god damn poems huh? how about that!! ... no that's to rude
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so is that how people are supposed to deal with art? if they don't like it, don't say anything? does that make sense in that tiny little head of yours? the point I've been trying to make is that it's sad that this stuff ends up on the front page, along with nudity, when so many people work hard to have some recognition and end up not getting it. if you were a few years older, you'd agree with me regarding this poem.
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yeah because people have what we call "feelings" and you dont go around hurting them by saying "that sucks dick man" or "i wish this stuff wasnt on the front page" because its rude not "awesome" its fucking rude
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my feelings wouldn't be hurt if someone said that to me, or about my poems. it's a matter of opinion.
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well thats you
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if you don't like literature, you don't need to comment on it. just move on.
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I have four literature daily deviations. I've won literary contests in a national level. I enjoy literature, which is why I said it's awful. It's teen crap with no literary value.
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there's still no need to be rude about it. don't take away the position of being on the front page from someone by saying you don't understand why its there in the first place. you can think that all you want, but don't disrespect someone based on your own opinion.
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I didn't disrespect anyone, just this particular poem.
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by disrespecting the poem like that, it is also disrespecting the person who wrote it. i don't see anyone going to your literature pieces and saying, "this isn't worthy" or "this is awful." its rude regardless.
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