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Description Ashley watched Kyla's head snap up as the knock at the door repeated itself.  The bound babysitter could see the look of concern on the girl's face, and screamed into the packing that filled her mouth again, trying desperately to make herself heard to whoever was on the other side of the door.  A silence seemed to fall over the room, all of the girls save Ashley, falling deathly silent and still as they waited to see what would come of the knocking.

"This is the police."  A woman's voice called out from the other side of the door, breaking the silence.  "Open the door."

Kyla stepped quickly to the door, her fishnet-clad feet padding softly across the floor.  As she watched the girl slowly turn the doorknob, Ashley saw that the glow of maturity and confidence that the girl had been basking in was gone now.  She looked like a scared girl again, in a silly made costume, her back bare save for the straps of her bra and the apron strings.  Ashley groaned with relief, trying to look down into Sam's eyes to tell her fellow captive it would all be over soon.

"Can I help you?"  Kyla asked, opening the door only a crack to speak to the police, and Ashley called out into her gag once more.

"We've had some noise complaints."  The female's voice spoke from the other side of the door.  "Some complaints of crying, too.  Is everything all right in here?"

Ashley's heart pounded in her chest as she prayed that the officer would not be easily dissuaded, squirming on the bed on her knees as she strained to free herself from her tight bonds.

"Oh, I'm sorry."  Kyla giggles, and Ashley could see some of the girl's earlier confidence returning.  "That was just a movie I was watching."

"A movie?"  The voice inquired.

"Yeah, it was a horror movie."  Kyla answered quickly, still only peeping her head through the crack in the door.  "I should have turned it down.  I'm sorry."

"Horror?  I like horror movies."  The voice spoke, and Ashley noticed a change in its tenor.  "Which one was it?"

"Oh, it was..."  Kyla began, and Ashley saw the girl's hand tighten to a white-knuckled grip on the knob.  "It was... Oh yeah, sorry, it was the Eye."

"The Eye?"  The voice asked.  "Oh yeah, that's the one with Buffy the Vampire Slayer in it, right?"

"Yeah, that's it."  Kyla answered quickly, reaching up to place her free hand on the doorframe up at eye level, as she began to close the door.  "Well, thanks for checking things out, protect and serve and all that."

The next moments passed so quickly, in a burst of activity, that Ashley barely saw what was happening.  The outsider's  hand came through the opening in a burst of speed, taking hold of Kyla's wrist.  A moment later, the maid-girl was turned to face the room again, a grimace of pain on her face from the twisting of her arm up high behind her back.  

"Ow, stop it..."  Kyla whined, rising up on her toes as the woman came forward into the room with the other girl before her.  "That hurts."

Ashley groaned into the gag with relief as she saw the tall blonde, uniformed officer push Kyla into the room ahead of her.  She saw the officer's eyes go wide at the sight before her.  She imagined what the scene must look like to the policewoman. Samantha wearing nothing but hello kitty bra and panties, bound sitting on the bed and with her legs wrapped around Ashley, who was bound kneeling in a schoolgirl costume.  Payton on her knees on the floor in the the pink bodystocking and tight armbinder, and Lizzy bent over a table in a straightjacket.

"What the hell is going on here?"  The officer asked as she closed the door behind her with her boot, pushing Kyla further into the room ahead of her.

"It's just a game!"  Kyla whimpered, her face red as the woman kept her arm pulled up painfully behind her back.

"That's some game."  The officer almost laughed, but held it in.  "Is that true, girls?"

In unison, the girls in the room began to nod as best they could in their bindings.  Ashley quickly shook her head, grunting into the gag as the policewoman's eyes fell on her denial.

"She doesn't seem to think it's a game."  The policewoman spoke, pushing Kyla forward toward the bed.  "What do you have to say for that?"

"She's just sore 'cuz she lost first, is all."  Kyla lied, and Ashley glared at her.

"I'm sure that's it."  The officer did laugh this time, and Ashley saw her reach to pull her pair of handcuffs from the belt of her uniform.  "Have you ever been arrested before?"

"A-arrested?  No!"  Kyla looked shocked.  "I told you, it's just a game."

"You have the right to remain silent.  Anything you say can and will be used against you in a court of law."  The policewoman began, grabbing Kyla's free arm, and forcing it behind her back to meet the first before closing the hinged cuffs tightly in place.

"Ow, stop!"  Kyla cried out, and Ashley saw real tears in the girl's eyes.  "That hurts.  Please, not like that!"

Ashley winced for the girl as she saw what Kyla was complaining about.  Keeping the first hand in place up by the trembling girl's shoulderblades, the policewoman had drawn the second one up there as well, and then locked the hinged cuffs between them.  Kyla's arms were drawn up painfully up behind her back now in a position that would have looked like prayer, had they been held before her.

"You have the right to an attorney."  The policewoman spoke harshly, and Ashley watched with wide eyes as a thin leather belt was wrapped around Kyla's throat and then through the hinge between the handcuffs, pulling them even further up the crying girl's back as it was buckled.  "If you cannot afford an attorney, one will be appointed for you."

"Please, it's just a game."  Kyla began to sob, her shoulders shaking as she tugged at her painfully trapped arms, the belt around her slender neck biting into her soft flesh.  

"You have the right to a spanking, for being such a bad girl."  The police woman spoke, and a shiver of dread ran down Ashley's spine.

"Wh-what are you ta-"  Kyla began, turning her head to try and look back at the woman, only to have her words cut off as the officer thrust a large wad of cloth into her open mouth.

Ashley watched as Kyla tried to yank herself free of the other woman, but the cuffs that pinned her wrists up between her shoulderblades made her too easy to control.  Grinning wickedly, the policewoman began to wrap a long silk scarf around Kyla's head.  The soft material pressed first between the girl's open lips, holding the wadding in place, and then went around and around her head, finally stopping when it covered the bottom half of her face.  Ashley watched the newly bound girl's eyes widen as she struggled to breathe through the material that covered her mouth and nose.

"I've been just waiting for a chance to bust in on these little parties you girls hold for a long time now." The blonde woman spoke, seeming to practically purr with delight.

Tears streamed down Kyla's cheeks as another belt was added around her throat, this one passing also through the hinge of the cuffs on her wrists behind her, drawing them up further as the leather bit into her slender neck.

"You like games, girls?"  The policewoman asked as she abruptly thrust the stumbling Kyla forward.  "I've got just the thing for you."

Ashley groaned as she watched the uniformed woman roughly pull Kyla across the room toward where Lizzy was tied in place bent over the desk.  Moments before she'd have paid everything she owned to see the cruel girl treated like this, but now, in the moment, she could only wonder what was in store for them all.
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Comments: 85

warped3 [2017-07-25 14:34:14 +0000 UTC]

great story....more please!

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heropro7 [2017-01-20 22:36:34 +0000 UTC]

ay ik next chspter is out (I can read comments ) but maybe add it to the description as well

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Hi9157 [2016-04-12 03:47:11 +0000 UTC]

Are you going to continue this story or not? I have been checking it for like 5 months and still no activity, coming soon is taking a lot longer than usual. I hope you're okay and didn't get into an accident.

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experimenter73 In reply to Hi9157 [2016-08-24 18:36:05 +0000 UTC]

Well, if you haven't died of old age while you waited for me to find inspiration to continue the story, I am proud to report that a new chapter has been posted.  If you don't skip reading it on general principle, you can find it here:   Ashley's Choice"You like games, girls?" The policewoman asked as she abruptly thrust the stumbling Kyla forward. "I've got just the thing for you."
Ashley knelt on the bed, still dressed in the tight schoolgirl uniform she'd been thrust into a seeming lifetime ago. Her arms were drawn out behind her and held in place by tight handcuffs that were attached to the headboard of the bed. Tight ropes were wrapped around her thighs just above her knees to hold them pressed together as she knelt, with additional ropes stretching from her ankles out to each corner of the bed behind her as well. The socks inside her mouth were a wad of wet mess, held in place by a scarf that bit into the corners of her mouth.
A whimpering sound reminded Ashley of the girl who joined her on the bed. Samantha was dressed in a matching set of 'Hello Kitty' bra and panties with fuzzy little cat ears tucked into her hair. The girl's wrists were crossed behind her neck and held in place with rope, arms bent out to either side of her

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shadowchild360 [2016-03-29 12:29:46 +0000 UTC]

Is the next chapter coming soon?

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experimenter73 In reply to shadowchild360 [2016-08-24 18:37:18 +0000 UTC]

I have good news and bad news for you.

The bad news is that it was definitely not posted soon after you asked the question.

The good news is that it is now finally posted!

Thanks for reading!  I hope you enjoy the continuation.  There will actually be more to come soon, for real, this time.

Ashley's Choice"You like games, girls?" The policewoman asked as she abruptly thrust the stumbling Kyla forward. "I've got just the thing for you."
Ashley knelt on the bed, still dressed in the tight schoolgirl uniform she'd been thrust into a seeming lifetime ago. Her arms were drawn out behind her and held in place by tight handcuffs that were attached to the headboard of the bed. Tight ropes were wrapped around her thighs just above her knees to hold them pressed together as she knelt, with additional ropes stretching from her ankles out to each corner of the bed behind her as well. The socks inside her mouth were a wad of wet mess, held in place by a scarf that bit into the corners of her mouth.
A whimpering sound reminded Ashley of the girl who joined her on the bed. Samantha was dressed in a matching set of 'Hello Kitty' bra and panties with fuzzy little cat ears tucked into her hair. The girl's wrists were crossed behind her neck and held in place with rope, arms bent out to either side of her

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goblue97 [2015-12-20 06:55:07 +0000 UTC]

So is this story coming to its conclusion soon or have you decided not to continue it?

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ScorpionSplash [2015-12-12 22:01:32 +0000 UTC]

Would this be considered police brutality, cruel and unusual punishment, or both? 

I love over this series of stories very much. Great work! ^_^

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experimenter73 In reply to ScorpionSplash [2016-08-24 18:39:11 +0000 UTC]

That's an interesting question.  By any standard, it would definitely be police brutality, because Kyla hadn't shown any sign that such a use of force was necessary.

However, cruel and unusual punishment is a different matter.  The AND, you see, between cruel and unusual is a key component.  The punishment has to be both or it's okay.  I'd say that it's definitely cruel, but unusual is a different matter. Definitely not unusual for my stories!

I'm also happy to report that the continuation, at long last, can be found here:   Ashley's Choice"You like games, girls?" The policewoman asked as she abruptly thrust the stumbling Kyla forward. "I've got just the thing for you."
Ashley knelt on the bed, still dressed in the tight schoolgirl uniform she'd been thrust into a seeming lifetime ago. Her arms were drawn out behind her and held in place by tight handcuffs that were attached to the headboard of the bed. Tight ropes were wrapped around her thighs just above her knees to hold them pressed together as she knelt, with additional ropes stretching from her ankles out to each corner of the bed behind her as well. The socks inside her mouth were a wad of wet mess, held in place by a scarf that bit into the corners of her mouth.
A whimpering sound reminded Ashley of the girl who joined her on the bed. Samantha was dressed in a matching set of 'Hello Kitty' bra and panties with fuzzy little cat ears tucked into her hair. The girl's wrists were crossed behind her neck and held in place with rope, arms bent out to either side of her

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KalEl8547 [2015-08-27 01:46:44 +0000 UTC]

Very well written. I was pulled in almost immediately. You really make the reader feel Ashley's plight. The sudden glimmers of hope that are inevitablly dashed. The introduction of a new captutor rather than savior is a great twist. That's assuming we find out if Ashley is freed (I hope she is). Thanks and I look forward to the next installment. I hope you get to finish it.

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experimenter73 In reply to KalEl8547 [2016-08-24 18:41:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the thoughtful comment.  I'm really glad you enjoyed it and took the time to share some of what you liked about it.  Comments like this are what have always brought me back to posting here on dA.

What you mentioned is something I always try my level best to focus on in my stories.  I want my characters (victims? heroines?) to feel like living, breathing people and not just paper cutouts.  Sometimes, I think I even succeed.

In any case, I am happy to report that I have found my inspiration to continue the story, and you can find the new update here:   Ashley's Choice"You like games, girls?" The policewoman asked as she abruptly thrust the stumbling Kyla forward. "I've got just the thing for you."
Ashley knelt on the bed, still dressed in the tight schoolgirl uniform she'd been thrust into a seeming lifetime ago. Her arms were drawn out behind her and held in place by tight handcuffs that were attached to the headboard of the bed. Tight ropes were wrapped around her thighs just above her knees to hold them pressed together as she knelt, with additional ropes stretching from her ankles out to each corner of the bed behind her as well. The socks inside her mouth were a wad of wet mess, held in place by a scarf that bit into the corners of her mouth.
A whimpering sound reminded Ashley of the girl who joined her on the bed. Samantha was dressed in a matching set of 'Hello Kitty' bra and panties with fuzzy little cat ears tucked into her hair. The girl's wrists were crossed behind her neck and held in place with rope, arms bent out to either side of her

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RDL13 [2015-04-22 04:54:04 +0000 UTC]

nice twist, hope this story gets done

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experimenter73 In reply to RDL13 [2016-08-24 18:42:04 +0000 UTC]

It's on its way!  Approximately one thousand years after you posted this comment, a continuation is up!

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Sweet-Gem [2014-06-23 05:46:28 +0000 UTC]

Wow! I'm honestly grateful that the girls were busted, but I'm just hoping that the justice will be fair. 

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experimenter73 In reply to Sweet-Gem [2016-08-24 18:42:41 +0000 UTC]

Time will tell on whether the justice will be fair.  A continuation has now been posted, if you are still curious to find out!

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Sweet-Gem In reply to experimenter73 [2016-08-24 22:29:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a bunch. ^ ^ btw, what is it titled?

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Bravetiger101 [2014-05-26 02:54:56 +0000 UTC]

I literally raged at the cliffhanger. Do it. Please.

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experimenter73 In reply to Bravetiger101 [2016-08-24 18:42:57 +0000 UTC]

Rage no longer, brave tiger!  A continuation has been posted!

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shaggy01ca [2014-05-19 18:00:46 +0000 UTC]

Can't wait for the continuation!

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experimenter73 In reply to shaggy01ca [2016-08-24 18:43:17 +0000 UTC]

Wait no longer!  I figured that a couple years was long enough.

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1edd123 [2014-04-18 01:32:57 +0000 UTC]

are you still working on the next part in the series? i would love to read it and can't wait

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experimenter73 In reply to 1edd123 [2016-08-24 18:43:38 +0000 UTC]

I wasn't when you posted this comment... but I am happy to say that I am now.  The next part is up!  Ashley's Choice"You like games, girls?" The policewoman asked as she abruptly thrust the stumbling Kyla forward. "I've got just the thing for you."
Ashley knelt on the bed, still dressed in the tight schoolgirl uniform she'd been thrust into a seeming lifetime ago. Her arms were drawn out behind her and held in place by tight handcuffs that were attached to the headboard of the bed. Tight ropes were wrapped around her thighs just above her knees to hold them pressed together as she knelt, with additional ropes stretching from her ankles out to each corner of the bed behind her as well. The socks inside her mouth were a wad of wet mess, held in place by a scarf that bit into the corners of her mouth.
A whimpering sound reminded Ashley of the girl who joined her on the bed. Samantha was dressed in a matching set of 'Hello Kitty' bra and panties with fuzzy little cat ears tucked into her hair. The girl's wrists were crossed behind her neck and held in place with rope, arms bent out to either side of her

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Ballsack100 [2014-03-01 00:08:34 +0000 UTC]

General Audience Reaction: No! Tie ups are gross I hate this "cop!" My Reaction: I'm not sure if I'm just really drunk, disturbed, or strangely turned on.

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experimenter73 In reply to Ballsack100 [2014-03-03 16:05:45 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad I got your attention, regardless of the reaction.  Thanks for reading and commenting!

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Ballsack100 In reply to experimenter73 [2014-03-04 00:09:57 +0000 UTC]

No problem! As for the reaction, well... I've considered my stability, and concluded I'm slightly less sane than Pinkie Pie from My Little Pony.

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agentofchaos53 [2013-12-26 15:30:10 +0000 UTC]

Did u give up on the story

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experimenter73 In reply to agentofchaos53 [2014-01-08 15:21:41 +0000 UTC]

I didn't give up.  It's been more of a matter of motivation and time, but I find myself drawing closer once again.  Keep the faith!

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HappyHiker92 [2013-08-14 22:52:26 +0000 UTC]

This is a great story and you are an excellent writer! Keep up the good work!

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rboy999 [2013-06-14 07:40:59 +0000 UTC]

POOR ASHLEY PLEASE END THIS STORY AND HER MISERY!

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drseu55 [2012-08-01 01:58:11 +0000 UTC]

I hope theres more than 1 chapter to come

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rboy999 [2012-05-08 02:25:48 +0000 UTC]

THE (COMING SOON) IS A LIE
NOT TRYING TO 'RUSH' YOU OR ANYTHING,
BUT I REALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY WANT TO READ THIS STORY SO...
PLEASE HURRY UP THANKS

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experimenter73 In reply to rboy999 [2012-07-17 14:43:20 +0000 UTC]

Yes, a total lie, though it was not an intentional one. Sadly, the rest of the world got in the way. I hope to have another chapter written before too much longer. Thanks for the enthusiasm!

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rboy999 [2012-05-04 05:10:58 +0000 UTC]

is this story going to be finished or not??? please hurry up!!!
THANK YOU

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experimenter73 In reply to rboy999 [2012-07-17 14:43:42 +0000 UTC]

Yes, it WILL be finished. I can't promise when it will be, but I can't leave poor Ashley like that.

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Lordoffantasy [2012-04-26 18:23:29 +0000 UTC]

interesting;. but where is the rest of the story?

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experimenter73 In reply to Lordoffantasy [2012-07-17 14:44:11 +0000 UTC]

It is, sadly, in my mind and currently on the back burner. There will be a continuation and the story will reach its end... I just can't promise when.

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oldspice145 [2012-04-12 21:45:56 +0000 UTC]

Are you ever going to finish this story?

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experimenter73 In reply to oldspice145 [2012-07-17 14:44:22 +0000 UTC]

Yes, eventually. Hang in there.

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rboy999 [2012-03-16 01:50:51 +0000 UTC]

Please Hurry and write the next chapter(s) !!! THANKS !!!

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experimenter73 In reply to rboy999 [2012-07-17 14:44:29 +0000 UTC]

I'll try!

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rboy999 In reply to rboy999 [2012-03-16 01:57:17 +0000 UTC]

Also forgot to add... you're a great author... This story is GREAT, hope you hurry and finish the next few chapters... REALLY want to read them...

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smilesforfairies [2012-03-12 22:38:44 +0000 UTC]

Hurry up and write the next ones!

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experimenter73 In reply to smilesforfairies [2012-07-17 14:44:58 +0000 UTC]

As soon as I can quit my day job... But seriously, there will be another chapter coming before TOO much longer.

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shika-vic [2010-12-16 03:16:32 +0000 UTC]

where is the next one?
i really want to know what happens next

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experimenter73 In reply to shika-vic [2011-10-31 02:20:43 +0000 UTC]

It's coming! I promise. So many stories, and so much to share. Thanks for reading!

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shika-vic [2010-10-22 00:57:39 +0000 UTC]

wen will da next part come out?
i cant wait!!!!!
i jus hope dat da end wont come soon

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experimenter73 In reply to shika-vic [2011-10-31 02:21:08 +0000 UTC]

This one will have at least 4 or 5 more chapters before it is over, and they will be coming before too long. Sorry about all the waiting!

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shika-vic In reply to experimenter73 [2011-11-20 03:55:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!
It was getting too good lol
I have waited so long
Can't wait!

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katecullen [2010-07-19 12:38:42 +0000 UTC]

it should be ashley's friend come to save the day or something. that would be awesome.

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experimenter73 In reply to katecullen [2011-10-31 02:21:26 +0000 UTC]

Someone will be saving the day... though it might be someone inside the room. More to come soon!

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