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warped3 [2017-07-25 14:34:14 +0000 UTC]
great story....more please!
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Hi9157 [2016-04-12 03:47:11 +0000 UTC]
Are you going to continue this story or not? I have been checking it for like 5 months and still no activity, coming soon is taking a lot longer than usual. I hope you're okay and didn't get into an accident.
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experimenter73 In reply to Hi9157 [2016-08-24 18:36:05 +0000 UTC]
Well, if you haven't died of old age while you waited for me to find inspiration to continue the story, I am proud to report that a new chapter has been posted. If you don't skip reading it on general principle, you can find it here:
Ashley's Choice"You like games, girls?" The policewoman asked as she abruptly thrust the stumbling Kyla forward. "I've got just the thing for you."
Ashley knelt on the bed, still dressed in the tight schoolgirl uniform she'd been thrust into a seeming lifetime ago. Her arms were drawn out behind her and held in place by tight handcuffs that were attached to the headboard of the bed. Tight ropes were wrapped around her thighs just above her knees to hold them pressed together as she knelt, with additional ropes stretching from her ankles out to each corner of the bed behind her as well. The socks inside her mouth were a wad of wet mess, held in place by a scarf that bit into the corners of her mouth.
A whimpering sound reminded Ashley of the girl who joined her on the bed. Samantha was dressed in a matching set of 'Hello Kitty' bra and panties with fuzzy little cat ears tucked into her hair. The girl's wrists were crossed behind her neck and held in place with rope, arms bent out to either side of her
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shadowchild360 [2016-03-29 12:29:46 +0000 UTC]
Is the next chapter coming soon?
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experimenter73 In reply to shadowchild360 [2016-08-24 18:37:18 +0000 UTC]
I have good news and bad news for you.
The bad news is that it was definitely not posted soon after you asked the question.
The good news is that it is now finally posted!
Thanks for reading! I hope you enjoy the continuation. There will actually be more to come soon, for real, this time.
Ashley's Choice"You like games, girls?" The policewoman asked as she abruptly thrust the stumbling Kyla forward. "I've got just the thing for you."
Ashley knelt on the bed, still dressed in the tight schoolgirl uniform she'd been thrust into a seeming lifetime ago. Her arms were drawn out behind her and held in place by tight handcuffs that were attached to the headboard of the bed. Tight ropes were wrapped around her thighs just above her knees to hold them pressed together as she knelt, with additional ropes stretching from her ankles out to each corner of the bed behind her as well. The socks inside her mouth were a wad of wet mess, held in place by a scarf that bit into the corners of her mouth.
A whimpering sound reminded Ashley of the girl who joined her on the bed. Samantha was dressed in a matching set of 'Hello Kitty' bra and panties with fuzzy little cat ears tucked into her hair. The girl's wrists were crossed behind her neck and held in place with rope, arms bent out to either side of her
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goblue97 [2015-12-20 06:55:07 +0000 UTC]
So is this story coming to its conclusion soon or have you decided not to continue it?
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ScorpionSplash [2015-12-12 22:01:32 +0000 UTC]
Would this be considered police brutality, cruel and unusual punishment, or both?
I love over this series of stories very much. Great work! ^_^
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experimenter73 In reply to ScorpionSplash [2016-08-24 18:39:11 +0000 UTC]
That's an interesting question. By any standard, it would definitely be police brutality, because Kyla hadn't shown any sign that such a use of force was necessary.
However, cruel and unusual punishment is a different matter. The AND, you see, between cruel and unusual is a key component. The punishment has to be both or it's okay. I'd say that it's definitely cruel, but unusual is a different matter. Definitely not unusual for my stories!
I'm also happy to report that the continuation, at long last, can be found here:
Ashley's Choice"You like games, girls?" The policewoman asked as she abruptly thrust the stumbling Kyla forward. "I've got just the thing for you."
Ashley knelt on the bed, still dressed in the tight schoolgirl uniform she'd been thrust into a seeming lifetime ago. Her arms were drawn out behind her and held in place by tight handcuffs that were attached to the headboard of the bed. Tight ropes were wrapped around her thighs just above her knees to hold them pressed together as she knelt, with additional ropes stretching from her ankles out to each corner of the bed behind her as well. The socks inside her mouth were a wad of wet mess, held in place by a scarf that bit into the corners of her mouth.
A whimpering sound reminded Ashley of the girl who joined her on the bed. Samantha was dressed in a matching set of 'Hello Kitty' bra and panties with fuzzy little cat ears tucked into her hair. The girl's wrists were crossed behind her neck and held in place with rope, arms bent out to either side of her
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KalEl8547 [2015-08-27 01:46:44 +0000 UTC]
Very well written. I was pulled in almost immediately. You really make the reader feel Ashley's plight. The sudden glimmers of hope that are inevitablly dashed. The introduction of a new captutor rather than savior is a great twist. That's assuming we find out if Ashley is freed (I hope she is). Thanks and I look forward to the next installment. I hope you get to finish it.
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experimenter73 In reply to KalEl8547 [2016-08-24 18:41:36 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for the thoughtful comment. I'm really glad you enjoyed it and took the time to share some of what you liked about it. Comments like this are what have always brought me back to posting here on dA.
What you mentioned is something I always try my level best to focus on in my stories. I want my characters (victims? heroines?) to feel like living, breathing people and not just paper cutouts. Sometimes, I think I even succeed.
In any case, I am happy to report that I have found my inspiration to continue the story, and you can find the new update here:
Ashley's Choice"You like games, girls?" The policewoman asked as she abruptly thrust the stumbling Kyla forward. "I've got just the thing for you."
Ashley knelt on the bed, still dressed in the tight schoolgirl uniform she'd been thrust into a seeming lifetime ago. Her arms were drawn out behind her and held in place by tight handcuffs that were attached to the headboard of the bed. Tight ropes were wrapped around her thighs just above her knees to hold them pressed together as she knelt, with additional ropes stretching from her ankles out to each corner of the bed behind her as well. The socks inside her mouth were a wad of wet mess, held in place by a scarf that bit into the corners of her mouth.
A whimpering sound reminded Ashley of the girl who joined her on the bed. Samantha was dressed in a matching set of 'Hello Kitty' bra and panties with fuzzy little cat ears tucked into her hair. The girl's wrists were crossed behind her neck and held in place with rope, arms bent out to either side of her
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RDL13 [2015-04-22 04:54:04 +0000 UTC]
nice twist, hope this story gets done
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experimenter73 In reply to RDL13 [2016-08-24 18:42:04 +0000 UTC]
It's on its way! Approximately one thousand years after you posted this comment, a continuation is up!
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Sweet-Gem [2014-06-23 05:46:28 +0000 UTC]
Wow! I'm honestly grateful that the girls were busted, but I'm just hoping that the justice will be fair.
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experimenter73 In reply to Sweet-Gem [2016-08-24 18:42:41 +0000 UTC]
Time will tell on whether the justice will be fair. A continuation has now been posted, if you are still curious to find out!
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Sweet-Gem In reply to experimenter73 [2016-08-24 22:29:31 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a bunch. ^ ^ btw, what is it titled?
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Bravetiger101 [2014-05-26 02:54:56 +0000 UTC]
I literally raged at the cliffhanger. Do it. Please.
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experimenter73 In reply to Bravetiger101 [2016-08-24 18:42:57 +0000 UTC]
Rage no longer, brave tiger! A continuation has been posted!
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shaggy01ca [2014-05-19 18:00:46 +0000 UTC]
Can't wait for the continuation!
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1edd123 [2014-04-18 01:32:57 +0000 UTC]
are you still working on the next part in the series? i would love to read it and can't wait
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experimenter73 In reply to 1edd123 [2016-08-24 18:43:38 +0000 UTC]
I wasn't when you posted this comment... but I am happy to say that I am now. The next part is up!
Ashley's Choice"You like games, girls?" The policewoman asked as she abruptly thrust the stumbling Kyla forward. "I've got just the thing for you."
Ashley knelt on the bed, still dressed in the tight schoolgirl uniform she'd been thrust into a seeming lifetime ago. Her arms were drawn out behind her and held in place by tight handcuffs that were attached to the headboard of the bed. Tight ropes were wrapped around her thighs just above her knees to hold them pressed together as she knelt, with additional ropes stretching from her ankles out to each corner of the bed behind her as well. The socks inside her mouth were a wad of wet mess, held in place by a scarf that bit into the corners of her mouth.
A whimpering sound reminded Ashley of the girl who joined her on the bed. Samantha was dressed in a matching set of 'Hello Kitty' bra and panties with fuzzy little cat ears tucked into her hair. The girl's wrists were crossed behind her neck and held in place with rope, arms bent out to either side of her
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Ballsack100 [2014-03-01 00:08:34 +0000 UTC]
General Audience Reaction: No! Tie ups are gross I hate this "cop!" My Reaction: I'm not sure if I'm just really drunk, disturbed, or strangely turned on.
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experimenter73 In reply to Ballsack100 [2014-03-03 16:05:45 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad I got your attention, regardless of the reaction. Thanks for reading and commenting!
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Ballsack100 In reply to experimenter73 [2014-03-04 00:09:57 +0000 UTC]
No problem! As for the reaction, well... I've considered my stability, and concluded I'm slightly less sane than Pinkie Pie from My Little Pony.
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agentofchaos53 [2013-12-26 15:30:10 +0000 UTC]
Did u give up on the story
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experimenter73 In reply to agentofchaos53 [2014-01-08 15:21:41 +0000 UTC]
I didn't give up. It's been more of a matter of motivation and time, but I find myself drawing closer once again. Keep the faith!
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HappyHiker92 [2013-08-14 22:52:26 +0000 UTC]
This is a great story and you are an excellent writer! Keep up the good work!
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rboy999 [2013-06-14 07:40:59 +0000 UTC]
POOR ASHLEY PLEASE END THIS STORY AND HER MISERY!
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experimenter73 In reply to rboy999 [2012-07-17 14:43:20 +0000 UTC]
Yes, a total lie, though it was not an intentional one. Sadly, the rest of the world got in the way. I hope to have another chapter written before too much longer. Thanks for the enthusiasm!
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experimenter73 In reply to rboy999 [2012-07-17 14:43:42 +0000 UTC]
Yes, it WILL be finished. I can't promise when it will be, but I can't leave poor Ashley like that.
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Lordoffantasy [2012-04-26 18:23:29 +0000 UTC]
interesting;. but where is the rest of the story?
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experimenter73 In reply to Lordoffantasy [2012-07-17 14:44:11 +0000 UTC]
It is, sadly, in my mind and currently on the back burner. There will be a continuation and the story will reach its end... I just can't promise when.
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oldspice145 [2012-04-12 21:45:56 +0000 UTC]
Are you ever going to finish this story?
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experimenter73 In reply to smilesforfairies [2012-07-17 14:44:58 +0000 UTC]
As soon as I can quit my day job... But seriously, there will be another chapter coming before TOO much longer.
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shika-vic [2010-12-16 03:16:32 +0000 UTC]
where is the next one?
i really want to know what happens next
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experimenter73 In reply to shika-vic [2011-10-31 02:20:43 +0000 UTC]
It's coming! I promise. So many stories, and so much to share. Thanks for reading!
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shika-vic [2010-10-22 00:57:39 +0000 UTC]
wen will da next part come out?
i cant wait!!!!!
i jus hope dat da end wont come soon
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experimenter73 In reply to shika-vic [2011-10-31 02:21:08 +0000 UTC]
This one will have at least 4 or 5 more chapters before it is over, and they will be coming before too long. Sorry about all the waiting!
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katecullen [2010-07-19 12:38:42 +0000 UTC]
it should be ashley's friend come to save the day or something. that would be awesome.
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experimenter73 In reply to katecullen [2011-10-31 02:21:26 +0000 UTC]
Someone will be saving the day... though it might be someone inside the room. More to come soon!
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