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WordOfChen [2012-08-01 13:06:57 +0000 UTC]
A very lovely piece, I enjoyed the read and it reminded me of one of my first philosophy pieces on "Hardwork v.s. Talent"
-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates
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Awayfromtrouble [2012-06-15 18:37:00 +0000 UTC]
Simplicity achieved great things
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Extranzia In reply to Awayfromtrouble [2012-06-15 18:38:39 +0000 UTC]
True, a small amount of things over time achieves a lot.
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Awayfromtrouble In reply to Extranzia [2012-06-15 18:48:17 +0000 UTC]
We are not an equation indeed
We are greater than the parts that make us whole
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Extranzia In reply to Awayfromtrouble [2012-06-15 20:15:14 +0000 UTC]
We all have the ability to transcend our weakest parts that help create and even limit our whole self-being.
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Awayfromtrouble [2012-06-15 18:10:53 +0000 UTC]
Indeed what we are is freely inspired from our lives
and expressions
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Awayfromtrouble [2012-06-15 17:56:02 +0000 UTC]
Should we all be authentic
And believe in ourselves
Like in true happiness
Meaningfull abide the greater consciousness
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Extranzia In reply to JoyfulSpirit [2012-06-12 06:24:08 +0000 UTC]
True that! Thanks for the favourite lovely~
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Chaleka [2012-06-11 16:54:07 +0000 UTC]
This poem definately inspires me to get to my goals' reality. At the moment my most difficult task is staying sane amidst the insanity surrounding me, and poetry like this goes a long way in helping me do that. Thank you and all the best in your article!
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TawneyK [2012-06-11 05:52:16 +0000 UTC]
You're pretty much my counsellor now, Extranzia!
And please provide the link to your article once it's up!
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beccathetalented [2012-06-11 03:00:23 +0000 UTC]
This is some amazing poetry. I can really relate to this. I wish you luck with lifee!
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Extranzia In reply to Kinglorshi [2012-06-11 00:55:20 +0000 UTC]
That's brilliant. I'm glad I am not alone in this idea. Work pays off more in the end though we still do need to play time to time. A lot of people don't understand the work minded thought, until recently I didn't either.
The best of luck to you as well and thank you~
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19izzati [2012-06-10 20:02:18 +0000 UTC]
This is a motivational poem for me. A reminder for me that I need triple Hard Work to be the Best Doctor in Future.
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Extranzia In reply to 19izzati [2012-06-10 21:16:21 +0000 UTC]
That's awesome. I'm glad it gave you motivation.
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