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Extranzia — Hard Work by-nc-nd
Published: 2012-06-10 19:35:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 2037; Favourites: 50; Downloads: 10
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Description Be yourself they said.
Through truth you'll get anywhere.
You're perfect the way you are they said.
You're something beautiful to share.

I remember hearing this all the time,
recollecting those words as I write this rhyme.
There was one thing that they forgot to say
which is what my mantra is here and today.

Though you may be you and the best to believe
you still need to work to be beneficial
in the lives of others and yours to achieve
anything that will not be something superficial.

People forgot to say that work is needed.
Not the normal amount that keeps you in the gray,
but mind wrenching, sweat creating, limit exceeded.
To stand out and pave your way in life today.

It's the type of work that will make you shine,
to help you stand out and remain unforgettable.
The type of work that's so difficult to define.
The kind makes those gone feel their absence regrettable.

Average work that makes you blend in with others
that gives one average recognition and reward
is the kind that I don't even go bother.
For it makes me feel like a useless shard.

My newest mantra, one of the many,
is no work and average work
is essentially worthless.
And I am not worthless.

I will continue to work hard
and reach successes galore.
I will continue to work hard
and prove the world I'm not a bore.

One day when it's said and done,
I will have finally reached the sun.
Through my hard work through trial
I will have reached that emerald isle.

That's what people never said to me,
when I was living my simple life of glee.
That monotonous work is and will never be enough,
even with less than average friends, isn't that tough?

I honestly don't care
if it's here or there.
Work has become my life.
Even amidst my strife.

So one day I will have worth.
One day I won't be left alone.
One day I will be irreplaceable.
One day my work will get me my dreams.

I will continue to work hard
and reach successes galore.
I will continue to work hard
and prove the world I'm not a bore.
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Comments: 29

WordOfChen [2012-08-01 13:06:57 +0000 UTC]

A very lovely piece, I enjoyed the read and it reminded me of one of my first philosophy pieces on "Hardwork v.s. Talent"

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates

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Extranzia In reply to WordOfChen [2012-08-01 17:22:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

Really? I will look it up if you posted it on here when I have time

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Awayfromtrouble [2012-06-15 20:24:22 +0000 UTC]

darn right

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Extranzia In reply to Awayfromtrouble [2012-06-15 20:51:54 +0000 UTC]

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Awayfromtrouble [2012-06-15 18:37:00 +0000 UTC]

Simplicity achieved great things

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Extranzia In reply to Awayfromtrouble [2012-06-15 18:38:39 +0000 UTC]

True, a small amount of things over time achieves a lot.

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Awayfromtrouble In reply to Extranzia [2012-06-15 18:48:17 +0000 UTC]

We are not an equation indeed
We are greater than the parts that make us whole

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Extranzia In reply to Awayfromtrouble [2012-06-15 20:15:14 +0000 UTC]

We all have the ability to transcend our weakest parts that help create and even limit our whole self-being.

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Awayfromtrouble [2012-06-15 18:10:53 +0000 UTC]

Indeed what we are is freely inspired from our lives
and expressions

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Extranzia In reply to Awayfromtrouble [2012-06-15 18:35:08 +0000 UTC]

A simple reaction to the actions seen in life

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Awayfromtrouble [2012-06-15 17:56:02 +0000 UTC]

Should we all be authentic
And believe in ourselves
Like in true happiness
Meaningfull abide the greater consciousness

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Extranzia In reply to Awayfromtrouble [2012-06-15 18:00:14 +0000 UTC]

Authenticity even through trial gains freedom
Belief is up to oneself
Happiness is always existent if looked for
The conscious is a confusing yet powerful thing

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JoyfulSpirit [2012-06-12 06:18:25 +0000 UTC]

I love it!! Like Ecclesiastes acknowledges, mankind was made to work, so labor hard and labor joyfully unto the LORD.

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Extranzia In reply to JoyfulSpirit [2012-06-12 06:24:08 +0000 UTC]

True that! Thanks for the favourite lovely~

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YumiSmiles [2012-06-11 18:29:54 +0000 UTC]

You've put words to the thoughts I couldn't express. Thank you! This is an amazing poem, you're a great writer

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Extranzia In reply to YumiSmiles [2012-06-11 19:05:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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YumiSmiles In reply to Extranzia [2012-06-12 09:24:21 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome ^^

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Chaleka [2012-06-11 16:54:07 +0000 UTC]

This poem definately inspires me to get to my goals' reality. At the moment my most difficult task is staying sane amidst the insanity surrounding me, and poetry like this goes a long way in helping me do that. Thank you and all the best in your article!

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Extranzia In reply to Chaleka [2012-06-11 17:11:08 +0000 UTC]

That's great that it gives you inspiration. With keeping your cool when surrounded by a bunch of loons learn to tune things out and even write down a list of the steps to get your goal to have that reminder with you.

You're welcome and also thank you!

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TawneyK [2012-06-11 05:52:16 +0000 UTC]

You're pretty much my counsellor now, Extranzia!
And please provide the link to your article once it's up!

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Extranzia In reply to TawneyK [2012-06-11 06:00:23 +0000 UTC]

Anytime! If you need anything let me know, seriously.

Also providing the link is the plan! It will be in a journal tomorrow

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beccathetalented [2012-06-11 03:00:23 +0000 UTC]

This is some amazing poetry. I can really relate to this. I wish you luck with lifee!

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Extranzia In reply to beccathetalented [2012-06-11 03:33:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Kinglorshi [2012-06-11 00:38:22 +0000 UTC]

Holy sh**! I'm on the exact some boat!

Recently my friend wanted me to go to a party, but I wanted to stay home so I could work on, well, work. Unfortunately he did not understand, as I came from an applied level and all my new classes are more academic, and he did not acknowledge my point of view. It was saddening...

Seeing this is quite...interesting. I wish the best of luck to you for all your hard efforts, stranger!

Good work by the way.

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Extranzia In reply to Kinglorshi [2012-06-11 00:55:20 +0000 UTC]

That's brilliant. I'm glad I am not alone in this idea. Work pays off more in the end though we still do need to play time to time. A lot of people don't understand the work minded thought, until recently I didn't either.

The best of luck to you as well and thank you~

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Kinglorshi In reply to Extranzia [2012-06-11 02:10:26 +0000 UTC]

Notta a problem. I thought I was alone too.

Cheers, and thanks.

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Extranzia In reply to Kinglorshi [2012-06-11 02:16:49 +0000 UTC]

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19izzati [2012-06-10 20:02:18 +0000 UTC]

This is a motivational poem for me. A reminder for me that I need triple Hard Work to be the Best Doctor in Future.

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Extranzia In reply to 19izzati [2012-06-10 21:16:21 +0000 UTC]

That's awesome. I'm glad it gave you motivation.

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