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Published: 2014-12-30 22:38:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 1105; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 4
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If wishes were horses then beggars would ride.
don't walk in circles or swim against the tide.
sometimes things spin out of control,
But love has a way of breaking your fall.
praying is useless when you're out of control,
nobody's asking to shadow your soul.
give all you've got unconditionally,
'cause love has a way of breaking your fall.
Song Inspired: Danny Avila - Breaking Your Fall
HOLY POOP GUYS. IT'S BEEN AN ETERNITY SINCE I DREW A HUMAN. Anyways, I was bored, so I decided to draw this. Give a critique if you want!
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Comments: 2
This is really good!
The face doesn't look weird and cheesy, and the glass shards that aren't focused on have a good blurriness to it! His cuts look really good, and the falling action looks good. I think the big glass piece should've had it's cracks on it be a little translucent, as it's still glass. Some of the pieces seemed a bit too blurred out, and you couldn't tell what it was. I think you did fairly well on this, and would rate it 8.5/10 in total based on all the qualities. Keep up the good work!
Sincerely,
NINJA
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This is a really good job, I really like it! The textures were easy to notice so it makes the human look like, well, an actual human, and you made sure that the glass and the overall background look like it was nearly real.
However there were also a few things that I could not only give a suggestion to, but rather throw out as a minor flaw. No big deal, it might as well just be me seeing it.
First of all I noticed that the lineart looks a bit bulky; it takes a lot of the true feeling of the artwork and makes the picture look a lot bigger than it actually has to be. I would suggest to make those black lines a little smaller, but it's not exactly necessary. I just know that being one that used to use such big lines, it gives you much more room to add better detail, shade, and so on.
Next is the shading. I noticed there is s few spots that don't really require the lighting. Sure the shading is on spot but the light? Not so much. Also, where is the light coming from? This also inclines with the blood. Even if the floor broke his fall, there could have been a bit more blood which could have been better detailed. However with me being a huge fan of gore maybe this is just me speaking my whacked up fantasy.
Finally is the texture. You did a great job! But I feel as though it was a bit overused. You could maybe try a different style to make it look a little more like a anime style or something less robust. Seeing all the smudges I notice all the odd textures and it irritates the eyes every so often. Maybe not adding some of them in and adding some other type of detail would really make the tie or suit pop out in a different kind of way.
All in the this deserves a lot more views as well as more improvement. Give it more description rather than just a song and its lyrics, more background and less outlines and you'll shine bright!!! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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