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Published: 2019-01-01 08:27:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 56695; Favourites: 1124; Downloads: 0
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Commission drawn byHere we have my first commission of the new year starting with the lovely Abeldo from the anime "Overlord" dominating her beautiful maids: Lupresregina, Narberal and Solution. Let me know what you guys think
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I would do a critique, but this is more a matter of personal opinion.
For me, I'm not overly fond of your style of shading on the feet. It's a bit... Sharp. Too much sheen, too glossy. Her feet look almost plastic-y. It looks substantially different compared to the shading on the faces, which appear much softer.
I get that some people like that style, and if you enjoy doing it, more power to you. It is executed very well; I just don't find it very personally appealing. I think your work would look better if you toned down the gloss on the feet to make them look less obscenely muscular and rubbery (it comes off that way to me)
For the rest of it, I love the pose and posture of the girls. Facial expressions are great. Albedo's face is pure dominatrix, while the others are a mix of loving it and hating it.
Could do with a bit more contrast between the wings and the backdrop. (or a different backdrop) They kinda drown each other out.
The way you do hair is absolutely top-notch. Fabric on the maids is noteworthy as well, but the fabric on albedo's dress is so detailed it kinda makes it tricky to discern one leg from the other; they kinda blend together.
Actually... It almost feels like you put *too* much effort in some areas. Like the feet shading and albedo's dress. I think it might be better for you to take it a little easier in some areas.
And that's about all I got to say about it. (and I said a bit more than I originally planned to) Maybe this should've been a critique....
(fuck it, imma make it a critique anyways)
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Thank you for the wonderful feedback but I think you might be mistaken, the artist is and he deserves all the credit. I always give him the credit in every description on my commissions. Nevertheless I appreciate your honesty
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In that case, I have quite a few pics mislabeled in my archives.
oops.
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great great picture, is amazing overlod is getting more and more love, certainly the 1st one you asked was amazing and this one is at same level or even better XD hope to see more jajaja, btw you did a mistake in the name, its albedo not abeldo
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Thanks, I'm glad you like it and oh sorry about that, I didn't even realized I spelled her name wrong, shame on me! Thanks for letting me know
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well its always great see more from overlod XD this is a lot of motivation material to do and ask more and more XD, alsoΒ glad to helpΒ , i guess you did the same mistake in 1st pic of her btwΒ
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OMG what is wrong with me
I can't even remember how to spell my favorite female character's name smh. Thank you so much for catching my mistakes. Btw I definitely intend on commissioning more Overlord in the future
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Well it happens XD dont be so harsh with yourself, but hope i could help at least a bit, im excited to see what mpre you come with ;D
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Thanks bro you were very helpful! 
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Awesome, scrunched up tense sole on one side and a relaxed foot resting on the face of a maid. The maids faces are very focused onto feet and their tongues are pretty delicate in licking her sole, fearful of upsetting the queen.
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I'm sure the maids aren't too happy about this one xD
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That would be the dream!
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