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Published: 2003-10-25 18:14:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 505; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 101
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Description It was thought,
that in the eye's of the angel, I shall
forever lay.
Eternally locked
in the time-stopping void
where the sinful cold is no more.
Where every gesture could
determine my fate.
So wrongfully trapped
in that soul searching gaze
that I wish I could touch, and
hold forever more.

And now how I wish,
that dream could last
where the rain falls because
you missed me so
and our hearts lay bare
for all to see
and search
for we have no secrets.

This Angel,
oh so broken; knows I love him so
and as he weeps crimson
down porcelin skin
I know
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Comments: 18

chambered-nautilus [2004-12-18 08:37:51 +0000 UTC]

very beautiful.... brilliant use of words... i like it...

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inmyroom [2004-12-09 17:01:57 +0000 UTC]

ok, i am convinced. you are a great poet. i must add you to my watch.

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alik [2003-12-05 11:52:47 +0000 UTC]

i wish i could use the language you do!!!! its sooooo good! i love this poem!!! xx

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cafy [2003-12-03 22:38:04 +0000 UTC]

damn you kim....so talented....such vast vocabulary...such beautiful work....i wish i could do something like this...my poems are all like..." beep beep beep you to die and me to live you are stupid die" (HAHAHAH the beth poem to erin ) yes i like... very well done...cough plus fave cough

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f0xy In reply to cafy [2003-12-04 00:14:50 +0000 UTC]

Hahahahaha....Beth....

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my-empty-tears [2003-11-28 02:41:32 +0000 UTC]

EEE! >.< I can't beleive I didn't comment on this before! I'm sowwy Anyway, this is my alltime favourite poem by you! I absolutly love it, I read it like, a million times... it's so awesome!.. you're so talented pfft, Wish I could write stuff like this. I'd really love to read that book of poems you have in your room... You're poems aren't all cliche, they're so original and pretty. I'm sorry I never took the time to really comment on your poems, but I just wanna say I've always loved em

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f0xy In reply to my-empty-tears [2003-11-29 04:19:56 +0000 UTC]

Awww thanks :hugs:.

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bakabwa [2003-10-29 21:02:49 +0000 UTC]

wow kim i love this poem, its so full of thoughts, why dont you share these with catherine or me etc? you seem to have these hidden feelings -_- lol anyways this is in my favourites

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f0xy In reply to bakabwa [2003-10-29 22:16:12 +0000 UTC]

Lol. Oh i have many hidden feelings. And god knows Catherine doesn't want to hear them.

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bakabwa In reply to f0xy [2003-10-29 23:18:55 +0000 UTC]

i do. tell me. i seriously... am i really the type of person who cant tell things too. thats upsetting i heard someone said that about me.

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NINTheFragile [2003-10-25 20:49:28 +0000 UTC]

very beautiful... love this writng ... great work...

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AntiTrip [2003-10-25 18:19:38 +0000 UTC]

hahaha bullshit.. sorry i dont think you made this.. this has been floating around the internet for a long while now

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f0xy In reply to AntiTrip [2003-10-25 18:21:38 +0000 UTC]

It's the poem not the pic. I never said I made the pic.

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AntiTrip In reply to f0xy [2003-10-25 18:23:30 +0000 UTC]

oh hahaha soooo Sorry My bad,, i havnt slept yet.. *:S* Incredibly sorry

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f0xy In reply to AntiTrip [2003-10-25 18:25:47 +0000 UTC]

Lmao, no problem. It's my mistake for not clarifing after all.

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SDMcCarty [2003-10-25 18:19:16 +0000 UTC]

One word: Beautiful^.^

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alik [2003-10-25 18:18:40 +0000 UTC]

that is fukin class i love how the blue runs! i want eyes like that! nice i luv ur work i wud appreciate it if u checked mine out sumtime !!!

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f0xy In reply to alik [2003-10-25 18:22:26 +0000 UTC]

Sigh...mistake on my part. Read my other reply.

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