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Published: 2005-10-06 22:49:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 24401; Favourites: 842; Downloads: 168
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I can’t breatheI want to but no air comes out
I want to speak but no words come out
Why do I feel... hurt?
I feel betray
I feel like love had forgotten me
Like God only help those who have love
My heart hurts
My heart feels like a thousand needles went through my chest
and now it’s bleeding slowly for me to die
Why
Why when I try to move my hands to touch the ground I can't
Touch the ground
Just to know it’s still there
Just to know I am still alive
Broken
I feel like a broken doll
Shatter into pieces
Pieces all over the floor
With no one there to put me back together
...no one...
Will fix me
No one will love me
No one will help me breath
not feel things that is real
not to even to tell me that I’m alive
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Comments: 123
I cried after I read this! I just love this *sniff* *sniff*
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its really good~ If you used stronger words im sure i would have cried~~~ lol ~ im a crybaby when it comes to romance and poetry~~~
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I Read This Poem And it Reminds Me Of My Crush, He Likes Me Too But Now Whenever He Sees My Friend He Runs Off With Her. 
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I love this. it has so much deep meaning and the way you express it is lovely. I feel this way, like my hearts being tortured but no one notices, or if they do, then no one cares. this is wonderful.
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I love this <3 I am broken heart But I feel no emotion only broken. Perfect this is just perfect ~
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so true my heart is just broken.No one wants to fix or help me they just leave me brokenheartplz
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i feel that now.... i wish he could see what he is putting me through...... but i cant.....
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I love this. Well besides that, I am creating a website about a sci-fi galaxy. The website will be a bookstore for books about this galaxy. Already, in a few months, I have about ten writers interested. I hope you also will be interested. Well if you are, contact me.
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Poetry like that is called slam poetry. It's meant to be read by the poet to an audience. It's usually full of complex, personal meanings. There's your daily dose of definitions. Lovely poem, by the way.
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It would go under "free verse" for the poetry type and emotive like this - Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Free Verse kk?
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It really touched my heart!! It's really beautiful! ^^
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Do you mind if I put this up in my locker?
I really really like this ♥ I feel like this everyday, except for the occassional smile ):
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I'm really feeling this right now man... I recently lost my GF of over 4 years...
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i know this..... feeling every day i wake up this is what i feel i love it im not emo but this is what i feel all day long
this is a fav
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This is so beautifully honest and heatwrenching thank you for this... it really hit me hard cuz im not good at putting my emotions into words but this really was...beautiful..
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this is amazing work. exactly how i feel right now. my bf dumped me and 5 hours later wants me back! he is dating my best friend and he said that he would dump her for me. i told him to f*ck off!
this speaks to me. its truely amazing. pure poetry. instsfave.
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ok. Whatev to you saying it's not good. It's exactly what I'm feeling right now.
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sad but beautiful. It reflects how im feeling atm. good work
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This is really good, almost exactly my words today! Fav
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My gosh, I almost cried. That's everything I felt in words that just wouldn't fully come out.
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This is really good. I love it and feel the same way
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I can relate, this very instant. Recently had my love lost. Very powerful emotions.
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