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GothicBunny10000 [2015-09-05 06:17:24 +0000 UTC]
Trafalgr has alllllll of the heeeeeearts~ >w0
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andersss [2015-09-04 18:30:24 +0000 UTC]
The colors are really great, especially the skin, the sky and the little bubbles in the water. Water is really hard to color and the white curvy line looks like a little bit "abstract", but it's interesting. This drawing has a proper style : it's not "Oda's style", I mean, the face is not like in the manga, but it's recognizable. Oh, and I like the hearts in the water, it's a little bit like a metaphor, because the hearts are not stopped by the bars of the cage (it's a cage, or the bridge between Dressrosa and Greenbit ?)
You say it's crappy, but I think it's a cool piece of fanart !
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Panda-OwO [2015-09-03 02:11:03 +0000 UTC]
Unf.....
I love everything it, except the eyes...
They look so dead/blank.
But.... Gwaaah I love Trafalgar Law~~~~!
Dressrosa Arc?
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Faesu In reply to Panda-OwO [2015-09-03 02:16:16 +0000 UTC]
Yess <3 <3
I forgot the Corazon mark on his hoodie though. And his neck. (Just realized)
Thank you for the feedback, I really appreciate it Q m Q <3
I felt like the eyes were off as well... I wonder how I should fix it :T
edit: I edited the eyes
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Panda-OwO In reply to Faesu [2015-09-03 12:21:29 +0000 UTC]
Well you don't really notice that. Bit you do know that he's a major Corazon fan boy... XD
You're welcome~ I didn't want to sound snippy and above you. But hey, you can critique my art. I like it when people help me improve.
Perfect!! ^^
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Faesu In reply to Panda-OwO [2015-09-04 01:43:29 +0000 UTC]
Indeed XD
Ahh it's fine, you didn't at all~ I really like criticism as well, it's awesome how other people can find the flaws that are hiding from the arist's eyes so he/she can make better drawings ^^
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Panda-OwO In reply to Faesu [2015-09-04 05:28:28 +0000 UTC]
Gwaah that's good! Because some people get admitted. I guess it's also how you deliver it.
Exactly!
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Faesu In reply to Panda-OwO [2015-09-07 20:57:02 +0000 UTC]
Yep. I remember learning that you should always include at least one positive in a critique~
Glad we can agree on that <3
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Panda-OwO In reply to Faesu [2015-09-07 21:25:33 +0000 UTC]
That's a good teacher then. Yup!
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Faesu In reply to Panda-OwO [2015-09-15 22:46:20 +0000 UTC]
Heheh yep <3
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