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Failaine — Cold Tool
Published: 2008-01-15 00:39:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 236; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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Description You say your tired
of being told lies
and you tell me you want me
forever by your side

I get so emotional
I cover my face
and I begin to wonder
of your haste.

You said it so fast
it almost sounded fake
but could that have been
my mistake?

I uncover my face
and i see you smirk
I hit you violently
and call you a jerk.

I walk off in a huff
leaving you behind
muttering to myself
about how I'm so blind.

Tears begin to streak
my cold pale cheeks
I realize I'd been waiting
for weeks upon weeks.

I knew you'd ask me,
but I didn't think you'd be so cruel
how could you think
i was your tool?
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Comments: 12

orlina11 [2008-02-12 15:45:59 +0000 UTC]

sorry... heh i did that twice. my computer's screwey.

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orlina11 [2008-02-12 15:45:21 +0000 UTC]

I didn't mean it THAT way! Just in general... you're really good and your writing pleases me a lot!

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Failaine In reply to orlina11 [2008-02-18 00:28:18 +0000 UTC]

as it should. thank you.

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orlina11 In reply to Failaine [2008-03-01 20:15:17 +0000 UTC]

good. you're welcome. whats the song at the end of juno? i haven't seen it, but i want to. Anna from lakeview singers (8th grade) is doing that song for the talent show with her boyfriend, and the planned it out before juno came out. "now everybody's gonna think we're posers!" i kinda feel bad for her... her chucks are late, too!

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Failaine In reply to orlina11 [2008-03-28 14:38:22 +0000 UTC]

The song at the end is "all I want is you" by Barry Lois something

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orlina11 [2008-02-12 15:44:34 +0000 UTC]

I DIDNT MEAN IT THAT WAY! jeez... it pleases me a lot! you're really good.

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orlina11 [2008-02-08 16:04:56 +0000 UTC]

lol. that WOULD suck. a lot.

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Failaine In reply to orlina11 [2008-02-08 19:08:31 +0000 UTC]

yah, that would. This ones a really bad one I've written though. I came up with it in liek five minutes, and the rhyming totally doesn't blend. *sob*

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orlina11 In reply to Failaine [2008-02-08 22:54:27 +0000 UTC]

better than mine... and rhyming doesn't matter... as long as its pretty and goes in little lines... its good 'nuff for me

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Failaine In reply to orlina11 [2008-02-08 22:58:03 +0000 UTC]

cool!

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orlina11 In reply to Failaine [2008-02-08 23:20:19 +0000 UTC]

haha... doesn't take much to please me.

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Failaine In reply to orlina11 [2008-02-08 23:25:59 +0000 UTC]

you totally just lowered my self-esteem.

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