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Failaine β€” Neglect
Published: 2007-12-02 20:25:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 142; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description It took so long
to get this far
so listen to this song
as your driving in your car

You stare out before you
with tears flowing flowing free
wandering just like you do,
how could this be?

All those nights
of laying together
you felt so tight,
together forever

you drew little hearts
on all of your tests
but with your heart ripped apart
you can't clean up his mess

to leave you out
all alone
not able to shout
above the drone

whirling in your ears
in your final hour
are all of your fears
from which you'd coward

you thought you'd found
your one safe haven
But you hadn't heard a sound
at your minds caved in

you know your heart is stopping
as the monitor shuts off
but instead of all that sobbing
you only hear a few sad coughs

you float above
your body below
and watch with love
as hes bows and goes

he won't pay his respects
for your departed soul
cause he knows that it was his neglect
that made you pay his toll
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Comments: 12

orlina11 [2008-02-08 23:16:44 +0000 UTC]

death sux.

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Failaine In reply to orlina11 [2008-02-08 23:18:06 +0000 UTC]

i wouldn't know.

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orlina11 In reply to Failaine [2008-02-08 23:32:38 +0000 UTC]

u wouldn't? ha... death is like, my life. no comment...

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Failaine In reply to orlina11 [2008-02-08 23:33:29 +0000 UTC]

no comment.

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orlina11 In reply to Failaine [2008-02-12 15:58:18 +0000 UTC]

lol. well, it is.

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Failaine [2007-12-04 22:27:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! You should check out some of my others. My favorite is "this cold dark prison". It's the only one that took me more than a half hour or two.

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icedragonanime [2007-12-02 22:20:52 +0000 UTC]

"he won't pay his respects
for your departed soul
cause he knows that it was his neglect
that made you pay his toll" GOD I LOVE THAT LINE! it rhymes soooooo well and it means alot! keep it up!

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Failaine In reply to icedragonanime [2008-04-24 00:17:42 +0000 UTC]

wow, I never replied to this? I'm a poor friend! Well, thank you! I'm glad that you liked it!

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icedragonanime In reply to Failaine [2008-04-25 01:55:23 +0000 UTC]

yesh!!! Your poems kick my poems butt!!! and you are a great freaind!!!

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Failaine In reply to icedragonanime [2008-04-26 14:40:48 +0000 UTC]

WHA!!!!??? Dude, your poems could probably BEAT ME UP! Your an amazing writer!!! I ish totally jealous.... you can't tell, but I'm wearing my jealous face right now.

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icedragonanime In reply to Failaine [2008-04-27 02:41:11 +0000 UTC]

Well that’s cuz’ you haven’t read any of my poems!!! *cringes*

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Failaine In reply to icedragonanime [2008-05-03 16:36:18 +0000 UTC]

truth, truth. Maybe I should sometime.

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