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Failaine — You saved me somehow
Published: 2008-01-02 23:27:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 232; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 1
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Description I’m breathing now
I didn’t drown
You saved me
Somehow

I read your mind
You say it’s time
I smile and reply
That’s the lamest line

You grin and laugh
I take it back
I love to hear you
Say stuff fast

I feel it too
It’s me and you
Time will stop
Until we’re through

I’m breathing now
I didn’t drown
How did you save me
Somehow?

I love you more
As we close the door
And as we walk
Across the floor

I grab my book
You take a look
And you smile as I remember
How long it took

You give me the ring
And I hear angels sing
As you propose
I call you my king

I say I do
And kiss you too
For now I know
We’ll never be through

We’re meant to be
As now I see
That all along
You held the key.

I told you I would remember
All the days we spent together
And that I would miss you
Forever and ever

You really thought I might say no
How could I be that low?
I love you
Or, so you should know.

I’m breathing now
I didn’t drown
How did you save me
Somehow?
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Comments: 17

Kingboo2 [2008-05-09 02:00:21 +0000 UTC]

That's pretty
Great job

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Failaine In reply to Kingboo2 [2008-05-09 20:42:10 +0000 UTC]

thanks.

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Kingboo2 In reply to Failaine [2008-05-09 21:03:14 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome

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orlina11 [2008-02-08 22:58:58 +0000 UTC]

awwwww!

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Failaine In reply to orlina11 [2008-02-08 23:00:30 +0000 UTC]

haha, sporks are utensils. People forget that too often.

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orlina11 In reply to Failaine [2008-02-08 23:22:27 +0000 UTC]

ya... my mom's like "i hate sporks!" that's what i said... haha.

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Failaine In reply to orlina11 [2008-02-08 23:24:31 +0000 UTC]

sporks rock peoples pants.

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orlina11 In reply to Failaine [2008-02-12 15:48:13 +0000 UTC]

WTF?????????? i dont want my pants rocked... that would just be kinda weird...

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Failaine In reply to orlina11 [2008-02-18 00:27:32 +0000 UTC]

it's gonna happen sooner or later.

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orlina11 In reply to Failaine [2008-12-23 20:57:44 +0000 UTC]

what are you plannin there hannah?

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Failaine In reply to orlina11 [2008-12-24 18:16:09 +0000 UTC]

I forget...

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orlina11 In reply to orlina11 [2008-02-13 15:49:20 +0000 UTC]

but they do... they roq my sox off.

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Failaine In reply to orlina11 [2008-02-18 00:27:19 +0000 UTC]

sox? Pants are so much cooler.

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orlina11 In reply to Failaine [2008-03-01 20:17:18 +0000 UTC]

well if they're cooler, i wouldn't want them to be rocked off. i would want them to stay on. your logic is off!

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littlemissmoody [2008-01-21 04:43:27 +0000 UTC]

I like this one although I think IMO the obvious rhyming pattern gets a bit repetitive to listen to. I love this verse

I told you I would remember
All the days we spent together
And that I would miss you
Forever and ever

mainly because the rhyming pattern is less in your face.

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Failaine In reply to littlemissmoody [2008-01-21 16:08:33 +0000 UTC]

oh thank you!

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littlemissmoody In reply to Failaine [2008-01-22 13:37:21 +0000 UTC]

No problems

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