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If you're following this series in order, click here next . For more information on the entire series, read the "'Demon's Due' Defined" journal entry here [link] or the "'Demon's Due' Plus" journal entry here [link] .********************************************
Valerin decides to follow the wisp, for better or worse.
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This is the new Page04. This puts me at 20 new Rats images posted here, and I've got 3-4 more nearing completion that should be up later this week.
The model is ~catchan and the photographer is *Viator-Defessus They make this work much more fun!
Enjoy!
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Very lovely!
What's so weird is I used to have a haircut like hers...it's like you knew! (because I know my hair didn't look like this in the photos lol)
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Thank you! It's true that I'm psycho.
Er, "psychic"! I mean "psychic."
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I know her expression is supposed to indicate she's straining to see through the darkness, but I just can't help thinking it also looks like she sees something weird.
Valerin: "What the-? When did Albert take up Jazzercising?"
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Ah, a bit of retconning. I take you hadn't thought of the Runemotes yet when you illustrated the original batch of "Rats in the Cellar" images.
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Nope, I hadn't. They didn't figure in until I was partway done with Fair Harvest (after Jervil appeared with Valerin and the gremlins). When I redo those images, I'll probably toss a few Runemotes in as well.
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I've done that a few times in writing, too. You come up with a good idea to use and introduce it well into the story. Then you spend the rest of the writing process kicking yourself for not having thought of it earlier.
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Wow! Loving how 'squinty' Valerin's looking here. Very atmospheric and... well you know the drill by now.
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Every aspect of this drawing by itself is, dare I say, perfect, but aren't her eyes normally a little bigger?
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They are indeed. She's squinting to see in the dark.
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Oh, and also, been meaning to mention this, hopefully now we can get to the real nudity!
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There are plenty of nipples in some of the previous re-dos. If you're looking for crotch-shots, those art pretty rare in the story in general.
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Course they're rare, otherwise I wouldn't be looking forward to them! Jeff truly understands the meaning of "less is more".
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Thank you! Had a good photo to work from, which helped a lot!
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Ok, this is just plain awesome. Your facial rendering skills man, I can't even touch them. Respect.
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