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A sudden sense of panic overtakes Valerin at the loss of her mace, and rotating down and on to her armored stomach, she lunges for it.

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Dedicated, as are all of my reaching images in this storyline, to ~reacherfan Cindy.

This is an expansion page to the general play-by-play of the fight with the gremlins. It and the other I've been working on to be posted next took me much longer than anticipated. The model is ~catchan and the photographer is *Viator-Defessus They make this work much more fun!

Enjoy!
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ElvenRaptor [2014-01-28 23:04:11 +0000 UTC]

At this point, her options are not that great. Just about the only thing she can do is try to throw her weight around.

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dougb770 [2013-05-11 12:27:25 +0000 UTC]

Oh no sweet meat, no weapon for you

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BurnedSmackdown [2013-02-18 16:08:14 +0000 UTC]

The one in the button right corner realises he has to get rid of the mace

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LaceTheory [2012-12-11 12:53:02 +0000 UTC]

heh, I like ll the sinister gremlin eyes glowing in the bckground

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Shento [2012-12-10 13:44:25 +0000 UTC]

loving expressions. well done.

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reacherfan [2012-12-10 03:00:36 +0000 UTC]

Love it!

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faile35 In reply to reacherfan [2012-12-10 05:12:37 +0000 UTC]

Ah, good! Thanks.

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Wytherwing [2012-12-09 15:38:18 +0000 UTC]

awesome work!

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faile35 In reply to Wytherwing [2012-12-09 18:04:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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aprildawn3332000 [2012-12-09 13:34:03 +0000 UTC]

This is very well done. My only concern is that is might make the part in the next chapter when she is reaching for the wand seem repetitive.

Then again, as I type this, I remember now that she actually does get her hands on the wand again, so the different outcome will make it fresh. I guess I have nothig to say but, great foreshortening.

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faile35 In reply to aprildawn3332000 [2012-12-09 18:04:45 +0000 UTC]

A great observation and concern there, and I agree with why you find it not "un-fresh." Thanks for the compliment!

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Amaniwolf [2012-12-09 12:51:45 +0000 UTC]

So close and yet so far.

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faile35 In reply to Amaniwolf [2012-12-09 18:06:03 +0000 UTC]

And getting farther. I originally envisioned showing the gremlins pulling it away in the frame as well, but it would have made Valerin too small, so I didn't show them. But I'll probably try and work them in to another frame before or after this one.

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DocRedfield [2012-12-09 01:43:16 +0000 UTC]

Nice foreshortening, Jeff, and a great sense of helplessness. I salute you

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faile35 In reply to DocRedfield [2012-12-09 18:06:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Mistersneaky [2012-12-08 22:20:03 +0000 UTC]

Well I will say, my hat's off to Cindy aka Reacherfan. She knows what she likes, alright!

Love the foreshortening. The hands carry almost as much feeling as the facial expression, which is tee-rific, as ever. And I do like the way Val's skirt seems to be stretching over that rump of hers. Hope the semester ended on the right note for ya!

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faile35 In reply to Mistersneaky [2012-12-09 18:08:04 +0000 UTC]

Semester ended on good notes all around, thank you! And thanks for the compliments on this.

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Skytower [2012-12-08 20:50:34 +0000 UTC]

That is a great shot.

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faile35 In reply to Skytower [2012-12-09 18:08:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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TheMeanCanadian [2012-12-08 20:34:12 +0000 UTC]

Why would they hurt the beutifull giant lady?
Why not let her play with them instead

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faile35 In reply to TheMeanCanadian [2012-12-09 18:14:45 +0000 UTC]

Two good questions. I don't have answers unfortunately.

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TheMeanCanadian In reply to faile35 [2012-12-09 21:07:42 +0000 UTC]

Maby someone has to explain to them what they are doing wrong and set them on the right path?

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ACE-Mat [2012-12-08 19:07:23 +0000 UTC]

wow, amazing work... That arm pops out in 3d

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faile35 In reply to ACE-Mat [2012-12-09 18:13:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm glad you like it.

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Mad-Gav [2012-12-08 17:14:19 +0000 UTC]

This is fantastic, all those coils of rope, the incredible look on her face (and the rather fetch curve of dat arse)... just excellent.

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faile35 In reply to Mad-Gav [2012-12-09 18:13:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a bunch! That curve felt right... well, "seemed" right.

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ebony-chan [2012-12-08 16:05:36 +0000 UTC]

Wow great work as always.

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faile35 In reply to ebony-chan [2012-12-09 18:12:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, as always!

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ebony-chan In reply to faile35 [2012-12-10 04:37:47 +0000 UTC]

Np!

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vvvan [2012-12-08 15:47:02 +0000 UTC]

Outstanding!
This almost makes it worth the wait to see what's happening to Judge Snake-Snack. Almost.
Seriously... GOOD STUFF!

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faile35 In reply to vvvan [2012-12-09 18:12:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! The plan is to finish this one and the start the publishing process up, but I have a few pages from the next chapter completed and somewhat completed, too. I'll post them when I'm getting closer.

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finex666 [2012-12-08 15:34:08 +0000 UTC]

poor lass

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faile35 In reply to finex666 [2012-12-09 18:10:25 +0000 UTC]

Yes, she's not in a good place right now.

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finex666 In reply to faile35 [2012-12-09 19:40:09 +0000 UTC]

for the Christmas i think we should get her mirror glasses or a shoe blade.

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Michel-le-fou [2012-12-08 15:22:48 +0000 UTC]

Jeff, bro, this is fantastic. You'll outdo yourself!

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faile35 In reply to Michel-le-fou [2012-12-09 18:10:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a bunch!

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Michel-le-fou In reply to faile35 [2012-12-10 04:17:39 +0000 UTC]

Ya got it, bro!

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