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Okay, so maybe only a few of you are surprised at this development. Lots of people saw it coming. The fact that the roses from pages 3 and 4 have turned into tendrilinguis plants suggests that this sequence we're viewing is probably not real--well, considering that the sequence shows Avora clothed and free and conscious, the fact merely supports the idea.

Rachel Jacobi was creative and gracious enough to pose and photograph herself for Maladyne's image. My impression of Rachel is that she is exceptionally expressive, both in photography and in painting. You can check out her gallery to see the paintings and some photographs, but I really hope I can do her personal stock images justice in the upcoming pages...


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faile35 In reply to ??? [2007-05-10 03:02:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! There are more up. I hope they are "kick ass," too.

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BryanBaugh [2007-05-08 19:19:50 +0000 UTC]

Cool terrified expressions on the girl!! And a very creepy looking threat indeed.

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faile35 In reply to BryanBaugh [2007-05-09 02:43:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! "cool," "creepy," "terrified," and "girl" all go well together, as you know.

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Yeti06 [2007-05-08 14:30:48 +0000 UTC]

Great expression and force.

Gran expresiΓ³n y fuerza.

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faile35 In reply to Yeti06 [2007-05-09 02:53:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm glad you think it works.

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DarkSpaceWolf [2007-05-08 00:53:04 +0000 UTC]

Looking at this pic, its as if Maladyne is lecturing the Tendrillingus. its as if they were enjoying bieng sniffed then she turns up.

Maladyne: *Ahem*!
Tendrillingus: Oh, gosh, right, the whole restrain thing, gotcha *leaps out*

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faile35 In reply to DarkSpaceWolf [2007-05-08 03:07:52 +0000 UTC]

That about sums up the way I was looking at this image as I drew it. "'A rose by any other name would smell as sweet'... but it might have tentacles and try to do you in, too..."

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GothiquePhoto [2007-05-05 15:27:26 +0000 UTC]

Mutant roses, I genuinely didn't see that coming. Another fine piece

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faile35 In reply to GothiquePhoto [2007-05-07 06:57:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! The flowers will get you every time...

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TBoneTony [2007-05-05 07:17:45 +0000 UTC]

Oh my god!!!!

The action is happening again!!!!!

OH YEAH!!!!!

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faile35 In reply to TBoneTony [2007-05-07 06:47:39 +0000 UTC]

Glad to entertain you. Thanks!

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Yggi11 [2007-05-04 23:20:41 +0000 UTC]

Alternative title: "Gah?!"
What a nasty jack-in-the-box THAT is.

Avora looks great, body, expression and clothing, and Sorcy is nicely intent.

I wish I could say I'd un-densed about what's really going on BEFORE studying the other comments and your responses to them, but alas.
I told you I wasn't very good at analysing art . . .

Erm, I wish I could think of something more profound or entertaining to say about this piece, but I'm tired and my brainpower is waiting on the other side of an eight-hour nap.

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faile35 In reply to Yggi11 [2007-05-05 03:10:15 +0000 UTC]

Sounds like an important activity. Have a good sleep then, and when you wake up, you should have a nice Page06 to look at. Thanks!

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Fatherbrain30 [2007-05-04 22:16:01 +0000 UTC]

I am awed at the sorceress character. Her stock model must be something to be awed for as well.

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RachelJacobi In reply to Fatherbrain30 [2007-05-05 01:01:07 +0000 UTC]

that totally made my day/week! *warm fuzzies* thanks!

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faile35 In reply to Fatherbrain30 [2007-05-04 22:30:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'll make sure she sees that comment--she enjoys the flattery.

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deyan32 [2007-05-04 20:54:18 +0000 UTC]

Now I'm starting to get nervous about this avatar you made me...

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faile35 In reply to deyan32 [2007-05-04 20:58:04 +0000 UTC]

Well, if after 18 years this is the first thing to make you nervous, I'm beginning to get a little nervous myself...

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deyan32 In reply to faile35 [2007-05-04 22:25:00 +0000 UTC]

I'm sure I don't know what you are talking about! They sure were pretty roses.

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faile35 In reply to deyan32 [2007-05-04 22:30:08 +0000 UTC]

Pretty roses for a pretty lady.

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Scythexv8 [2007-05-04 16:00:57 +0000 UTC]

Yes, well one would expect poor Avi to have such nasty dreams. After all, Daddy Plant is unforgettable, or so say all his "dates". Fear not Avi! When you wake up there will be no evil plan tendrils to restrain you! You'll be safe... in the tight, unforgiving embrase of stout rope, lots of it, and a nice fat gag :evilplotting:.(over the mouth? Pleeeeeaze!!![puppy eyes]).

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faile35 In reply to Scythexv8 [2007-05-04 20:59:31 +0000 UTC]

Ah, so you think you can see where this is going, eh? And I haven't forgotten the over-the-mouth gag view of Deirdre--it's on my list of bloopers/etc. to do, so it'll show up.

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Roninshinobi [2007-05-04 15:23:36 +0000 UTC]

Another great piece of story art.

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faile35 In reply to Roninshinobi [2007-05-04 20:59:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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HungryCats [2007-05-04 15:08:52 +0000 UTC]

So, I'm guessing that whoever captured her is purposely messing with her mind, that it's not just a ordinary dream/nightmare.

Hmm, you weren't using JA's face as a model earlier with Avora, were you? Her face looks quite different now than in the earlier panels with her. Since a number of people have commented on this, are you sure you want to keep this model (JA); isn't it somewhat distracting?

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faile35 In reply to HungryCats [2007-05-04 21:16:52 +0000 UTC]

I did use JA for some of the Twisted Plot pictures. [link] [link] [link] and [link] in Twisted Plot, and most of Avora's pages in Fair Harvest. So, yes, I'll stick with her when I can. All of the characters will change somewhat in the course of the story, I'm afraid, although the later ones (from Callista onward) will probably be a bit more consistent considering I'm going to stick to a single stock model for their images.

The nature of the dream/nightmare/whatnot will be more apparent in a bit.

Thanks!

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HungryCats In reply to faile35 [2007-05-05 03:14:15 +0000 UTC]

Well, I can see why no one noticed the similarity in Twisted Plot; Avora was pretty busy being undressed and plant-ravished at the time.

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faile35 In reply to HungryCats [2007-05-05 03:25:50 +0000 UTC]

It will be less obvious the longer this chapter goes, since Avora's face will be distorted and concealed a little bit.

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Cherille [2007-05-04 14:18:39 +0000 UTC]

Hehe! Nice expression!!

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faile35 In reply to Cherille [2007-05-04 21:38:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Cherille In reply to faile35 [2007-05-06 15:12:48 +0000 UTC]

Yer very welcome!!

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dashinvaine [2007-05-04 13:36:46 +0000 UTC]

I'm going to have to get inter-flora to deliver some of those to my ex.

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faile35 In reply to dashinvaine [2007-05-04 21:39:02 +0000 UTC]

"Flower-gram!"

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Amaniwolf [2007-05-04 12:48:40 +0000 UTC]

I warned her, never trust the plants! Very cool pic!

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faile35 In reply to Amaniwolf [2007-05-04 21:39:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Yes, she should have heeded your warning back in Chapter Two, I think...

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cmatrix4761 [2007-05-04 11:50:40 +0000 UTC]

Uh, oh -- I wonder what will happen next?

-- CM

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faile35 In reply to cmatrix4761 [2007-05-04 21:40:53 +0000 UTC]

The chorus line will show up and start doing their thing to the song, "Be Our Guest" from Disney's Beauty and the Beast...

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nosdregamon [2007-05-04 11:07:55 +0000 UTC]

I like the composition very much, but in the fullsize view and in comparison to your usual style Avoras face looks IMHO a little to cartoony (Her eyes look quite surreal).

But considering this is a dream sequence, it works.

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faile35 In reply to nosdregamon [2007-05-04 21:44:07 +0000 UTC]

Chalk that up to scanning and a wariness of getting her face too dark. The original picture looks a bit rougher and more realistic than that (but not much). Thanks!

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pissiMissi [2007-05-04 10:34:00 +0000 UTC]

Maladyne's expression is great. Poor Avora, hasn't she been traumatized enough? The venom from Daddy Flower or the muck she was fed must create horrible dreams.

As always, I can't wait to see more.

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faile35 In reply to pissiMissi [2007-05-04 21:47:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! You bring up a great point: The toxin that was forced into her by the sleeper's bane plant probably would contribute some rather bizarre neuro-chemical impulses...

"Traumatized enough?" I quote Chucky the Killer Doll: "Ain't no such thing."

Okay, well, there is such thing, but we haven't reached it yet, apparently...

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vladnos96 In reply to pissiMissi [2007-05-04 11:58:11 +0000 UTC]

Avora can never be traumatized enough!

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pissiMissi In reply to vladnos96 [2007-05-04 15:47:18 +0000 UTC]

True.

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faile35 In reply to pissiMissi [2007-05-08 02:26:47 +0000 UTC]

Shame, shame on both of you...

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Splend [2007-05-04 10:00:52 +0000 UTC]

Ah ... I think I get what's happening here. At last. Only took about 5 pages. A-duurrrrrrrrrrr

Hooray for the welcome 'return' of the tendrilingus!

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faile35 In reply to Splend [2007-05-04 21:49:12 +0000 UTC]

The gremlins showed up again, so it seemed like the appropriate thing to do. Thanks!

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Perigryn7280 [2007-05-04 09:31:38 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, this could be a magically induced dream in which she'd have to experience the Daddy Plant over and over again and not be able to wake up.

Keep up the good work

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faile35 In reply to Perigryn7280 [2007-05-04 21:49:48 +0000 UTC]

Could be a good thing, from a certain point of view... Thanks!

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MartinSilvertant [2007-05-04 09:21:01 +0000 UTC]

I didn't comment on the last few pages not because I didn't like them, but because with so many pages that are connected, they all share the same atmosphere, techniques, sometimes also expressions, that I can't say anything constructive on EVERY page. This one, however, contains some brilliant expressions. I love the immense look of shock. I'm not sure what kind of expression the right chick has, but I like it. I guess it's a little bit of shock, but still quite neutral because she knew what to expect. Really great work.

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faile35 In reply to MartinSilvertant [2007-05-04 22:00:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'll take whatever comments you can give, when you can give them. If you feel redundant, don't worry about it. Genuine interaction on one out of five is probably preferable to constant parroting comments. Of course, I don't mind parrots, either.

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