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Really good work over all: Her hair, face, complexion, expression and her eyes are very well done.
The Clothing is also really good, though might want to experiment with the colors of the golden pattern. maybe try a red copper color or a darker gold. I feel that its too yellow/light to fit the other very dark and bold colors. (I like the gold color on the upper part of the photo, rather than the lighter bottom)
In regards to the pendant, I feel it gets lost in the light color of the pattern and skin tone. The pendant could be a bolder more pronounced metal color. (gun metal or Copper?) It seems to have an amazing design but its too lost in the picture to tell. The gem stone I feel should be more brilliant and expressive of her fiery/intense soul. Right now it resembles a poorly cut & polished jasper stone ([link] But I would really like to see a painite stone in the rough cut stage: ([link] Having the fire and brilance that matches the intensity of her eyes, in my mind would bring this piece from a very good to a shock and awe Wow.
The scenery in the background is also very well suited but I really dislike that bird... Pretty much everything is wrong with that bird. I find it distracting, in a non graceful form/stance, and just weird posture. The warm backdrop is fading from red to black gets disrupted by that bird and the random black vine/branches at the top are also distracting.
The placement of the watermark/copyright is done right. Though for the purpose of selling prints, I would keep the width position and just lower the the vertical position to under the pine cone. Thus giving you a place to sign in the corner, right in line with the pine cone. But print your name and website so people can still read your name. (I have some prints from C2E2, that are signed and hung but I could not tell you who created them... can't read the handwritting)
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beautiful, her hair is gorgeous, love the color and tone
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Oh forgot to mention a title idea: Autumn blush or a Crimson Fall.
Just a thought
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Thank you so much for the critique and the suggestions. I will have to go back and see if I can correct those...
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Thanks, let me know when you have fixed it up and I can take another look.
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Your welcome Dear
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I like that...
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