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Published: 2013-08-14 05:12:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 1292; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 1
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back the way we came pastyellow-eyed coyotes, two
caustic anachronisms
getting the hell out of
our futuristic vineyard,
expanses spilling oceans
on my neck. I wanted something
certain from you
the heart attack
I slept through
now, my lips pulse;
sanguine peaches making
music of arrhythmic lace
as you rupture in the sea:
a wet throat blooming
open in tessellations
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Comments: 28
Lovely piece bro. Cant get enough of this.
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" the heart attack
I slept through" is amazing.
This is well titled, too. I like how it does not whitewash, instead acknowledging the work that goes into maintaining things.
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i got out of bed to write that part down when i thought of it.
dedication. thank you.
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interesting piece.
I liked
the heart attack
I slept through
among other lines.
cool song.
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Well.. wow. I'm not sure whether to sigh, blush, or do both!
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'caustic anachronisms'
talk about lines that take my breath away.
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I want to party with you two. By which I mean get you drunk and plagiarize your souls.
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you should. we've had some good ones lately. rodhlann said that he woke up in the ocean (that's not possible? how would he not drown??)
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Sometimes the ocean dreams that it wakes up inside of us.
It's always a horror movie.
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that's beautiful.
with enough sharks, anything is possible.
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