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Falany β€” the Rope
Published: 2006-12-19 10:02:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 146; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description Tied around your neck there lies
a rope, slowly making you of ice
made of faded hope it seems
killing all those brilliant dreams

forever in a dying grave
never fully flown away
the rope still tight around your neck
giving you your lively snack

burried six foot underneath
the darkened rain clouds cried this eve
the water's running through your veins
turning to blood, causing you pain

the rope is letting go of you
so now you fade into the blue
you say goodbye to suffering
to love and friends and all the things

Death has come, and crossed your path
you wanted it, you had enough
we miss you still, we cry of rage
that the rope told you, to let go of nowadays
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Comments: 9

Maanwezen [2007-01-09 18:55:48 +0000 UTC]

omg... i'm loving it!
Het maakt me tegelijkertijd triest... en vervult me van hoop enzo xD
En persoonlijk vind ik dit je mooiste gedicht! ^^
*Gaat het nog maar eens lezen*

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Falany In reply to Maanwezen [2007-01-12 16:45:24 +0000 UTC]

WOW omfg!! thnx for the fav!!

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zoetdropje [2006-12-19 16:47:24 +0000 UTC]

it is a really nice poem it is a different style thΓ‘n that i'm knowing from you but i really like it

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Falany In reply to zoetdropje [2006-12-20 17:37:12 +0000 UTC]

thankies!!!

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zoetdropje In reply to Falany [2006-12-20 18:47:17 +0000 UTC]

welcomies

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unknownmed [2006-12-19 16:28:18 +0000 UTC]

nice poem realy capturs the emagionation

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Falany In reply to unknownmed [2006-12-20 17:37:25 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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VelvetTears-I-Cry [2006-12-19 16:04:10 +0000 UTC]

it kinda scares me because it's almost a familiar feeling that's captured here for me, but mostly in my imagination.
It's beautiful

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Falany In reply to VelvetTears-I-Cry [2006-12-20 17:37:38 +0000 UTC]

thank youuuu

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