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Published: 2008-05-12 14:59:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 227; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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"Driving Myself Insane"Date: 5.7.08
I can beg and plead all I want,
but it will never do me any good,
you just can't come home to me,
even though I know, you would.
I feel so lost without you,
my heart flips and flops,
without you around,
my heart just stops.
I want nothing but to replace,
what I know I've found,
but they never complete me,
cause you still aren't around.
I want the true love,
I know I have with you,
but with you so far away,
I don't know what to do.
I feel so lost without you,
With my crumbled, broken heart,
I feel like you can never be there,
and all we'll ever be is apart.
I want you home,
and back into my life,
but this seems never ending,
so comes more sleepless nights.
Save me from myself,
my never ending pain,
cause I cannot go on,
I'm driving myself insane.
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Comments: 3
Wow...you may not think so, but I actually think this one is really good. You threw a few unique things in there that you don't usually have in your writing. I love "but this seems never ending, so comes more sleepless nights." Your writing keeps getting better. I do have one suggestion; it doesn't need a comma every line because that breaks it up a lot. I would find it easier to read if there were only commas when needed. That is of course, just me though. Lol. Anyways, great job on this and keep writing.
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I'm glad you can relate and thank you for the favorite.
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