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FallenReflection — If Only I Could
Published: 2007-05-26 02:52:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 140; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description I called you up one day,
And the phone,
It went all crazy.

I decided to call you up,
Another time,
Because I was being rather lazy.

I never thought about it,
Not a thought,
Ever crossed my mind.

Then a few days later,
A knew something,
Just wasn’t right.

I was with my mom,
And she told me,
Something happened to you.

I then hung my head,
And embraced myself,
For the horrible, painful, truth.

I asked if you were ok,
She shook her head,
And replied no.

My body shook,
And my brain froze,
From the pain I didn’t know.

I asked if you were still living,
And my mom,
She briefly stopped.

She then told me,
You had passed away,
And my stomach slowly dropped.

I felt the pain consume me,
The sadness as it,
Filled my pores.

I tried to hold back the tears,
Because only I knew,
I couldn’t hear any more.

I then thought of six days before,
When I called you,
And heard your voice.

How you seemed just fine,
Nothing was wrong,
And I remembered my stupid choice.

How could I have been,
So foolish,
I should have called you back.

But something told me not to,
And now,
I’m about to crack.

I wanted to tell you,
I loved you,
How you meant so much to me.

And you’re gone forever,
In your peaceful,
Serenity.

If I could go back,
Just one last time,
I would have called you back.

But since,
I cannot do that,
I live with the heart attack.

I should have said something,
And instead,
I was so dumb.

Now you’re gone forever,
And to me,
You’ll always be,
Someone.
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Comments: 2

Kittensoft [2007-06-07 17:00:27 +0000 UTC]

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lilangelgurl [2007-05-31 04:09:16 +0000 UTC]

It was a very deep and drawing poem. I really felt the emotions and connected with it

On a technical note: sometimes when you attempted to add rhyme it sort of threw off the poem a little. sometimes rhyme isn't necessary

But overall great poem. I'm sorry bout what happened.

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