Kittensoft [2007-06-07 17:00:27 +0000 UTC]
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lilangelgurl [2007-05-31 04:09:16 +0000 UTC]
It was a very deep and drawing poem. I really felt the emotions and connected with it On a technical note: sometimes when you attempted to add rhyme it sort of threw off the poem a little. sometimes rhyme isn't necessary But overall great poem. I'm sorry bout what happened.