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FallenReflection — My Promise To You
Published: 2006-05-26 02:44:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 747; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 8
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Description I tell you that I love you,
but all you hear are lies,
I tell that I care for you,
You can see it in my eyes.

You refuse to care about anyone,
You just push yourself away,
You tell me you can't let yourself,
but I know you're just afraid.

Afraid to let you're heart be shown,
Afraid to let someone truely care,
Afraid to watch yourself fall,
Afraid that they'll be there.

I wish I could help you,
To take all your pain inside,
I wish I could show you,
But you always run and hide.

You run to your room,
The only place you're safe,
The place where you feel so free,
You can hide from your mistakes.

As you let those tears flow,
As they fall down your face,
You wonder why you're here,
Why the truth you can't escape.

I watched you fall so many times,
I just can't do it again,
I told you that I loved you,
I promise you that to the end.

I could never leave you,
Your friendship is a gift,
If you were to leave me,
It's you I'd always miss.

You're here for a reason,
I can't let you fall,
You have a purpose in life,
I'll be here through it all.

When you're all alone,
You're crying in your room,
Just whipe away those tears,
I'll never let you see your doom.

I promise you my friend,
I'll never let you down,
I'll always guild your way,
I won't ever let you drown.

This I promise you forever,
It will always be true,
Never ever will I let you go,
For I meant it, "I love you"
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Comments: 24

Sallydapunpkinqueen [2006-10-19 02:11:14 +0000 UTC]

It's amazing. It's personal, but at the same time, just about everyone can relate to it

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FallenReflection In reply to Sallydapunpkinqueen [2006-11-01 18:41:25 +0000 UTC]

thanks. i'm glad you like it.

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blondnsmart101 [2006-06-16 18:51:37 +0000 UTC]

i absolutely love this poem it is definatly somthing i can realate to soo soo soo much. i cant tell u how much i have told this to some of my friends yet they just say the entire world is out to get them or how horrible life is to just them yet they have soo many friends who care but are flustered with their consistancy to overlook it. *favs*

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FallenReflection In reply to blondnsmart101 [2006-06-16 21:31:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the fave.

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Jazzy-Jazz [2006-06-15 18:53:45 +0000 UTC]

Wow!! This ia amazing!!!
Great work!!

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FallenReflection In reply to Jazzy-Jazz [2006-06-16 21:32:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much Jazz. I'm glad you like it.

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Jazzy-Jazz [2006-06-15 18:53:45 +0000 UTC]

Wow!! This ia amazing!!!
Great work!!

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wantsomepi314 [2006-05-26 23:00:51 +0000 UTC]

SO GOOD!!!

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FallenReflection In reply to wantsomepi314 [2006-05-27 20:53:16 +0000 UTC]

thanks.

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darktsukasa7 [2006-05-26 03:37:31 +0000 UTC]

Very nice poem

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FallenReflection In reply to darktsukasa7 [2006-05-27 20:53:27 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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darktsukasa7 In reply to FallenReflection [2006-05-27 23:05:40 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome =3

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bgoodell08 [2006-05-26 03:30:20 +0000 UTC]

Pure elegance....loved it.

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FallenReflection In reply to bgoodell08 [2006-05-27 20:53:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much.

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lord-shadows [2006-05-26 02:58:07 +0000 UTC]

hehe man that so deep, that bring up memory if a friend, we had a fight and we never talk again. This is great nice work....

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FallenReflection In reply to lord-shadows [2006-05-26 02:59:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I'm glad you like it. Thanks for the fave.

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lord-shadows In reply to FallenReflection [2006-05-26 03:29:31 +0000 UTC]

not a problem....

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FallenReflection In reply to lord-shadows [2006-05-27 20:53:35 +0000 UTC]

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Dolphins-Crystal [2006-05-26 02:50:04 +0000 UTC]

This a really good poem. That must be a really close friend you have.

Well Im new and I was just roming around and I saw this so I thought I would write a comment

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FallenReflection In reply to Dolphins-Crystal [2006-05-26 02:51:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I'm glad you like it. Yeah, we're pretty close.

Thanks for the comment. I hope you like Deviantart.

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idlemickey [2006-05-26 02:47:09 +0000 UTC]

This reminds me of something I'm going through at the moment.

I can relate to this.

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FallenReflection In reply to idlemickey [2006-05-26 02:47:56 +0000 UTC]

Wow. I'm glad you can relate. Thanks for the favorite.

Have a wonderful day.

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idlemickey In reply to FallenReflection [2006-05-26 02:55:13 +0000 UTC]

No problem

And a wonderful day to you as well

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FallenReflection In reply to idlemickey [2006-05-26 02:56:15 +0000 UTC]

thanks.

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