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FallingAsleepTonight — Learn To Bite
Published: 2012-02-27 02:27:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 585; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 3
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Description There are people out there
who will take your
haphazard romance,
and your fragile
everything.
They will take it in
like a stray animal
or a five dollar bill
and keep it in their
pocket;
until you are spent-
starved.

Some homicides are not recorded
as they should be.

Next time someone
picks you up
and holds you close,
I want you to
(I need you to)
BITE.
-Then look them in the eyes and say:
"I will learn what you
taste like; either from a kiss
or by
eating you alive."
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Comments: 17

Scorpiiio [2012-09-22 14:19:39 +0000 UTC]

Wow... interesting!

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breezybrutality [2012-04-04 23:46:11 +0000 UTC]

So you probably think I'm faving your whole gallery by now...I basically am haha, but you have some really nice pieces.
Bitter gets me off

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FallingAsleepTonight In reply to breezybrutality [2012-04-05 00:50:43 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, thank you very much

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Gandalfgirl579 [2012-03-19 14:15:46 +0000 UTC]

This is brilliant!

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FallingAsleepTonight In reply to Gandalfgirl579 [2012-03-19 21:14:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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LittleFishPenguin95 [2012-02-27 05:17:46 +0000 UTC]

I really like this one!

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FallingAsleepTonight In reply to LittleFishPenguin95 [2012-02-27 05:23:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, just kinda typed that one out in the art submission box and hoped for something good

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LittleFishPenguin95 In reply to FallingAsleepTonight [2012-02-27 19:16:46 +0000 UTC]

It is good! You're welcome. I'll check out some more of your poems later when I have more time.

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FallingAsleepTonight In reply to LittleFishPenguin95 [2012-02-27 21:45:45 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!

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LustfullyYoursxX [2012-02-27 03:12:39 +0000 UTC]

I'm blown away by it. ouO Brilliant imagery, and wonderful ending. <3

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FallingAsleepTonight In reply to LustfullyYoursxX [2012-02-27 03:19:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks I've had the last few lines in my head for a while but only recently was I able to expand on it

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LustfullyYoursxX In reply to FallingAsleepTonight [2012-02-27 03:34:13 +0000 UTC]

<3

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withinmeloveresides1 [2012-02-27 02:43:03 +0000 UTC]

Very cool poem! I love the ending

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FallingAsleepTonight In reply to withinmeloveresides1 [2012-02-27 02:43:51 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful! Thanks

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RheaLyrinAssaine [2012-02-27 02:34:57 +0000 UTC]

I like this poem. Great job. Love how you sums it up.

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FallingAsleepTonight In reply to RheaLyrinAssaine [2012-02-27 02:37:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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RheaLyrinAssaine In reply to FallingAsleepTonight [2012-02-27 02:44:23 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!

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