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Description sorry it took me so long to get this done, I dislocated my right shoulder, and it hurtd like hell, so sitting at the computer trying to use it to long hurts, so i could do little bits at time

this pic is a scene from Book four: Air by Capt-BA. Great fan fic. you guys should really go and read it,
the scene take place in chapter 7


Katara stepped out of the tent, looking exhausted, and let the flap fall shut behind her. "He's asleep, finally. I healed what I could, but it's going to take a lot of sessions to get him back to full strength. There's almost nothing I could do for his broken bones, though." She shook her head. "I really hate it when he gets to say 'I told you so'."

"You did great, Katara," Toph said. "And you should take that compliment and keep it in a box, cuz you know I don't hand them out often."

Suki stood, poised on the balls of her feet like she wanted to go and embrace the waterbender, but something held her back. "I don't know how we can make it up to you."

"You can start by explaining how all of this happened." There was an icy edge to Katara's voice that seemed to cut through the air. Realizing that she might wake her brother, Katara switched to a whisper that did little to hide her frustration. "I trusted you to watch out for him, to keep him safe, but I guess that was too much to ask?"

"I'll be the first to admit that I made a few mistakes and let my guard down," Suki said, her tone calm and level in contrast to Katara's. "Almost all of his injuries were a result of him fearlessly sacrificing himself to help me. I won't tell you not to be angry, but I think you should also be proud of him."

"Proud?" Incredulity raised Katara's volume another notch, and then another few as she continued. "For getting beat up? For nearly dying?"

"Katara," Toph began, but the waterbender rounded on her, completely giving up her attempt at whispering.

"Don't you start, Toph! You're as much to blame as anyone! Why weren't you with him? I thought you were his best friend! How could you abandon someone you care about like that?"

Toph only winced and pointed back toward the tent.

"That's a good question."

The two girls without earthbending senses jumped and turned as the tent flap opened to reveal Sokka standing in his Water Tribe battle gear, with a crutch under his left arm and his walking brace strapped to his leg. He slung Space Sword over his shoulder and finished tightening one of his bracers.

"Sokka!" Katara's cheeks flushed with embarrassment. "You were awake the whole time?"

"It's a little hard to sleep with you three out here arguing about who's fault it is that I got hurt."

"We weren't arguing, exactly," Katara said in weak denial.

He limped forward and Suki and Katara both made a move to help him, but he held up his hand to let them know he was alright. "A more manly man might be offended that the women in his life think they need to protect him." He took another step forward and gave each of them a look of bemused acceptance that only made them feel worse, even Toph, who could only hear it in his voice. "It honestly doesn't bother me, but what does bother me," he said, stopping at Katara's side, "is that there are people out there who need our help and we're sitting around wasting time."
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Comments: 24

penxpaper [2010-10-19 11:34:45 +0000 UTC]

Great job! Hope you're feeling better now too.

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Fallonkyra In reply to penxpaper [2010-10-19 13:36:23 +0000 UTC]

thank you, trying too LOL, but hate feeling lazy so i am always on the go

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penxpaper In reply to Fallonkyra [2010-10-20 12:51:41 +0000 UTC]

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Loopy777 [2010-10-18 22:11:07 +0000 UTC]

Bruises for everyone! Looks great!

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Fallonkyra In reply to Loopy777 [2010-10-18 22:14:08 +0000 UTC]

LOL thank you

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kwlosko [2010-10-18 21:54:12 +0000 UTC]

It looks so awesome! If I ever have time I'll read it!

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Fallonkyra In reply to kwlosko [2010-10-18 21:56:05 +0000 UTC]

thank you, I fell in love the with the story. it is one of the best i have read

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SBJD111 [2010-10-18 21:19:49 +0000 UTC]

Nice. The coloring of the bruises really stands out and paints a great picture of whats happened.

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Fallonkyra In reply to SBJD111 [2010-10-18 21:24:46 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much, i was kinda worried i might have lost the characters among the background.but thannk you very much

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Capt-BA [2010-10-18 15:38:48 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, wow, the coloring really brought this scene to life! It's good to remember that Suki got her butt handed to her by the Dragon Viper too, but since she never really complains about it or asks for healing or is shown taking care of herself, it's easy to forget she was hurt. I love Sokka's little bemused smile. I think you really captured the mood here. Great job!

And OW, you dislocated your shoulder? I'm about to read your journal and find out what you did to your crazy self. I can't believe you worked on this even though you were hurting.

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Fallonkyra In reply to Capt-BA [2010-10-18 17:19:31 +0000 UTC]

thank you, i was hoping beating Suki up was okay. I wanted to do more to sokka, but he fully clothed so all his wounds are covered LOL damn clothes
the pic was driving me nuts, I kept look at it. It had to be done, just little bits at a time LOL, and i hurt my self doing something stupid, I tired to swing a ax that was way too big for me, and then didn't let any one i popped it till if was time for dinner, LOL i was trying to show the whinny men we girls can be manly too LOL

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Capt-BA In reply to Fallonkyra [2010-10-18 19:57:07 +0000 UTC]

Y'know, it's so true that women have a higher pain tolerance. But did you know we also feel pain about twice as bad as men, too? We have more nerve receptors. Sucks to be us, hey? Just rest the arm and you should recover, but if it's really bothering you, a doctor visit ain't a bad idea.

Suki actually cracked a couple ribs, and has some bad bruises (and leftover headaches from taking a blow or two to the head) but in light of Sokka's injuries, she wasn't about to mention them. There may be a scene in ch 9 where Mai and Suki get their own healing sessions. Depending if I can work it in or not.

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Fallonkyra In reply to Capt-BA [2010-10-18 20:07:06 +0000 UTC]

awsome, i 'll keep that in mind next time i beat up suki lol, i wasn't sure how bad she was beat up, LOL i used your guide on how to beat up sokka to make sure i to put things in the right spots LOL. I few pics i'm slowly working on,

i didn't know that about the more nerves, LOL but i would rather be girl than a boy, LOL, the only real thing really bother about my shoulder is that is is still really swallown

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Capt-BA In reply to Fallonkyra [2010-10-18 20:20:32 +0000 UTC]

Have you been icing or wrapping your shoulder? That should help!

I'm glad that Sokka injury guide came in handy for someone besides just *daughterofthestars . She drew it up for her future art projects from my fic, and for readers to keep things straight, but it's great to see it get more use.

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Fallonkyra In reply to Capt-BA [2010-10-18 20:31:05 +0000 UTC]

it was a great idea, LOL i love that guide, it helps me keep this wound his staight, LOL some times i forget what goes where plus his face is soo cute,

yeah i have been icing it and it's wrap and i just had to laugh my butt off, I just read the part of your story where Zuko just messed up his shoulder, I feel Zuko's Pain LOL

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Capt-BA In reply to Fallonkyra [2010-10-20 20:04:31 +0000 UTC]

Haha, yeah, I have to laugh a little since I know of like 3 people who have dislocated shoulders recently and I'm wondering if I started it somehow.

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Fallonkyra In reply to Capt-BA [2010-10-20 20:25:33 +0000 UTC]

yes we will blame you LOL (joking) i am working on some more pics from your story. i am hoping to finsh the line art ad post them at some point today or tomrrow, I wanted to have them done by now but i had Toph and Sokka rolling around in my head. LOL

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TheDragonPrincess In reply to Fallonkyra [2010-11-04 20:35:51 +0000 UTC]

No offense but you sure say lol a lot of times.
Nice drawing, you're awsome =]
I hope you're shoulder doesn't hurt anymore.

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Fallonkyra In reply to TheDragonPrincess [2010-11-04 20:41:34 +0000 UTC]

thank you. sorry i love other people art work, and my shoulder is better thank you for asking

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TheDragonPrincess In reply to Fallonkyra [2010-11-04 20:50:31 +0000 UTC]

Even though I don't know you, I'm glad you're shoulder's better
And you're welcome

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Fallonkyra In reply to TheDragonPrincess [2010-11-04 22:15:49 +0000 UTC]

thank you again you are very sweet.

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TheDragonPrincess In reply to Fallonkyra [2010-11-05 20:39:59 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome and thank you too !

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KiraBlackwell [2010-10-18 14:35:36 +0000 UTC]

that looks awsome! Great job!

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Fallonkyra In reply to KiraBlackwell [2010-10-18 17:06:28 +0000 UTC]

thank you LOL took me forever to do

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